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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Please try to give us update:)
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kab doge update,egarly waiting.at least koi note toh dedo.
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Its been more than two months... when are u going to update???
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waiting for the next part...
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HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW



PART 14

The shimmering rays broke through the curtains stirring Geet out of her sleep. Her hazels opened to find Maan sleeping with a smile on his face. Surprised at the visible changes in Maan, Geet sat up remembering the past one week they spent there, a lot had changed after the beach incident; she couldn't help but notice his protectiveness towards her. He had remarkably softened towards her, respecting her likes and dislike and taking care of her needs. She often saw him lost in his thoughts and she would have to call him twice or thrice before he would respond. His changed behavior urged her to open her heart to him; she felt utmost contended being with him. It was not only him who was changing; her heart was ditching her as well as she would often find herself lost in him until he would snap her out of her thoughts. As she saw him stir in his sleep too, she made a run to the washroom too embarrassed at the thought of getting caught at her habit. Geet stood under the shower trying to calm her hyper senses, why was her heart beating uncontrollably. The thought of Maan brought a new warmth in her cheeks. Geet sank to the floor, putting her head between her knees, battling her new emotions.

Geet peeked out of the bathroom checking to see if the room was empty and to her relief, it was empty. There was no trace of Maan anywhere in the room and grabbing the opportunity she tiptoed into the room with a towel wrapped around her wet form embarrassed at leaving all her things outside in a hurry to make an escape. Yanking her wardrobe open, she fished out her clothes when the click of the door reached her ears. She froze in her spot and the clothes slipped out of her numb hands. With flushed cheeks and her heart beating thunderously, she turned around and saw Maan standing at the door, stunned.

Maan stood at the balcony door, completely frozen as he gazed at her half naked form in shock. Beauty wouldn't suffice to describe her elegant form, it was beyond anything he could ever imagine. He was used to people going insane over him, but this was new to him, he was used to being the centre of attention but someone managing to have his attention was a new. His eyes locked with her embarrassed ones, moving to the flush in her cheeks to the trembling of her lips to the wet curls that kissed her shoulders. Her hands clutched the piece of cloth closer which barely managed to cover her form. She was alluring and without realizing he was moving towards her. A smirk bubbled up his lips when he saw her trying to crouch back from his advances. His hands darted towards her, covering the distance between them in two long strides as his eyes caught her falling over the table behind her. A strong grip her held her before she could feel the ground, she looked up to find his brown orbs staring down at her and he gripped her waist tightly, standing her. A shiver ran down both their spines at the contact yet it couldn't get them out of staring into each other's eyes. His other hand joined the first one as it snaked around her waist, clutching her tighter and closer. With her heart still hammering Geet drew in a sharp breath and closed her eyes, nervousness flooded her body as she could feel the warmth of his skin through the flimsy material of the towel, but she couldn't get herself to move out of his hold. Her senses and logics had gone for a toss as soon as she felt him standing at the door, gazing at her.

Her eyes flew open when she felt him moving, she saw him still staring down at her with the same look on his face. Her eyes grew wider when her back hit the wall behind her and his glowing eyes looking down into her hazels. If his deep orbs could kill, she would have succumbed to ashes right there. Her breath only grew faster and her heart hammered even faster but all she could do was to gaze back at him. His eyes were as mysterious as him, they were totally blank of any emotions or maybe she was too unacquainted to read them.

Geet, what's this.? His husky voice brought her out of her thoughts. She looked up to him and tried answering him but she could hardly find her voice.

I...I... Ac...for...clothes...So..I... She stammered looking at him with fear lurking in her eyes. She could never forget the times he scolded her for her carelessness, the time he fixed her blouse, he was dead cold towards her for her lack of caution. Were the things same today as well.? A part of her comforted her saying things had changed but the situation was worse, so may be his reactions would be too.

Hmm.? He hummed closing his eyes while his one hand reached up smear out her curls that covered her face while the other remained unmoved at her tender waist. The feel of her skin under his hands was evoking happiness within him. There was no trace of anger in him, it was all something beyond his control or knowledge. Geet looked at him stunned as his hand slowly moved her curls away from his face and his eyes opened again to look at her. His hold got tighter and her heart beat faster, yet she didn't know could she or couldn't she stop him. Even she was unable to place the changed equation between them but all she knew was maybe this was not the right time for what she saw coming. His face inclined towards her and she shut her eyes tightly too scared to imagine what would follow.

Maan..She whispered in her small effort to stop him. Deep within she feared, if any of this went another step ahead he would regret it and she wasn't sure if she had it in her to take the rejection but her morals didn't give her the consent to actually stop him. His breath felt even closer and his body grinded against her making her gasp and grasp his shoulders for support. As her hands dug into his skin, his eyes opened to find her face inches away from his with her eyes tightly shut and breath held. Anger shook him inside out and at once his hands released her and reached up to push her hands away from his shoulders. Her eyes flew open at the sudden rash movement and she looked at his a enraged Maan. He glared at her and ran a hand through his hair, appalled at his actions. What the hell was he doing.? What was she making him do.?

Get out.! He bellowed banging his hand on the wall, missing her face by inches. Geet whimpered looking at him shaking with anger. Tears clouded her eyes but she was too shaken to move. She stared at the floor, clutching the wall for support. A few minutes of silence passed but neither of them moved, one was too angry to even realize what he was doing, other was too scared to even look at anything except the floor. A loud bang of the wardrobe door slamming against the frame sent another shiver down her spine and she looked up to see him walking out of the room with clothes in his hands but not before slamming the room door shut. Geet sank down to the ground, with tears streaming down her eyes and a sob on the verge of escaping. As she hit the floor, her senses came back to her and the sob finally escaped breaking the silence in the room that prevailed over the last few minutes. This was exactly what she feared, his rejection, his anger and eventually that's what happened. Just when she was happy that things were changing, everything had to become worse once again.


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Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
how happy was geet sometime before but again maan showed his anger and hurted her when there is his fault also to get lost in her and now again geet felt as rejected. poor girl aur kitne din aise life jeeyegi😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
the part start beautifully and ended sadly..maan is hiding something big and it is blocking himself from loving geet..hope maan open up to geet soon..welcome back yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok.. rt nw i dont like maan 😡
its pretty clear he has issues... which most likely seem like he was forced to marry geet leaving behind his girlfrnd...
bt then either he tells her, or he shud not hv married atall

she too is a human, has feelings.. he cant keep on hurting her to vent out.

wht he did nw is soo soo bad.. u dont reject a person like this.

i dont even knw hw to exactly put wht i want to... bt i just dont like geet hving to go thru all this..
i wish maan realises soon tht either u dont mk a commitment, or.. if u do.. u live upto it thru n thru..

wht is he expecting to live with her like frnds frever.. he might hv wanted tht.. bt is tht wht geet wants.. she has a rt to live a full complete life.. if he cant give her tht.. he shud nt hv put her into this relationship..

i feel soo soo sad fr geet rt nw..

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