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Devi

@Devino

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Story romba smootha pogudhu pa... Nice...

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Nice Update Sweety...

Though I don't know much about your subject...the way you are writing it makes it interesting ..By the time you finish this FF we also would have learnt something about accountancy and taxation...😉😆

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Ramya05

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Very very nice :)... Aana bayamave irukku... Engeyavadhu sandal varunonnu... Because till now u have shown both in the best behaviours

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Ramya05
Very very nice :)... Aana bayamave irukku... Engeyavadhu sandal varunonnu... Because till now u have shown both in the best behaviours

sandai kku innum niraiya time irukku Ramyaa...
ippo thaane orutharai oruthar purinjikka try pannittu irukkaanga...

by the way... sandai podaama entha lovers um irukka maattanga...
sandai thaan understanding adhigam aakkum... correct aah?

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

I really loved the entire episode. chance illa, yapidi sweety roma cute write pannugringa.

Intha storyeil narrate panna mathri- anukum best boy friend - balaji than - that is Perumal. avaryai every Saturday -sight addikalaina anku thugam varathu. solgam sola theraiyathu, but after coming here for studies, being away from parents and siblings, i feel more comfortable and relaxed by seeing him for quite some time without any disturbance in early morning dharshan. Just stand there and have talk with him as one on one. I don't think him as god instead just as a friend where i can share everything without any fear or disturbance. once i see him then my energy is boosted. My energy is boosted up by reading your story too.😊

Hats off to you buddy. Oru request, please do not finish each chapters very shortly. now days i feel your chapters are very short. Please do not mistake me, i know that writing a story is very difficult that is extra ordinary talent only very rare people have it, you are one among them.

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sweetie18

@sweetie18

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Story going super but expecting more cute dialogues between KR other than official ones. Eagerly waiting for ur next update...

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sweetie18

@sweetie18

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

What hapd? no update at all..eagerly waiting...

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Romba naala inga Silentaa irukeengale - Sweety - pls update the next part - eagerly waiting...

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Part 11

Raji comes early to the Office and starts working. Karthik reaches Office early and is surprised to see Raji already working. He comes and sits in his place.
Raji: Hi... Good Morning...
Karthik: Very Good Morning... naane early yaa vandhutten nu paarthaa... nee eppo vanthe?
Raji: one hour aagi irukkum...
Karthik: en avvaalavu seekkiram vandhutte?
Raji: ready aayitten... veetla bore adichuthu... sari nnu kilambi vandhutten...
Karthik: Ok...
Both of them continue their work...

Three hours later, Raji takes a printout and gives it to karthik.
Karthik: What's this?
Raji: missing vouchers, entries, wrong entries, double entries, ellaam list panni irukku.
Karthik takes a look at it and says..."that's a nice approach... Raji..."
Raji: neenga ippadi seyyaliyaa?
Karthik: mmm..hmmm...
Raji: appuram eppadireconcile panradhu?
Karthik: enna enna missing... matha points ellaam oru note la ezhudhi antha file laye pin panni vachitten...
Raji: appo reconcile pannanum naa ellaa file ayum thirumbavum parkanume?
Karthik: mmm...
Karthik thinks for a while and calls her.

Karthik: Raji...
Raji: mmm... any help?
Karthik: vera vazhi???
Raji: sollunga...
Karthik: unnoda work mudinjidhaa?
Raji: mmm... enna pananum?
Karthik: idhu last file... nee vouching mudikkiriya?... naanum intha pattern la pannidaren... Harsha ku consolidate panna easy yaa irukkum...
Raji: OK...
She takes the file from him and both of them continue working...
Half an hour later, Harsha enters the cabin...

Harsha: morning guys...
Raji: morning Harsha...
Harsha: are you anywhere nearing 50%?
Raji: almost done...Harsha...
Karthik: just 15 mins more...
Harsha: you must be joking...
Raji: but...
The telephone rings... and Harsha gets busy over phone.
raji: karthik...
Karthik: oru 10 mins Raji... please... let me finish this...
Raji: Ok... fine...
She waits for him to finish off...
Ten minutes later, karthik takes printouts, attaches Raji's printout to it and gives it to her.
She goes thru that and says ..."perfect..."
Karthik: ippo sollu enna vishayam?
Raji: Harsha en appadi sonnaaru?
Karthik: theryala ye... avaraiye keppom iru...
Raji: ok...

Both of them come and sit in front of Harsha, andhe cuts the call. Karthik gives him the printout.
Harsha: what's this?
Karthik: Points that are to be rectified and rest for your reconilation purpose. and vouching is complete..
Harsha: it's unbeleivable man...
Karthik: it was neither impossible ...
Harsha: fine... so did u notice anything odd?
Karthik: nothing...
Raji: i have a doubt...
Harsha: yes...
Raji: why is it that we were given three years back records ?
Karthik: Raji... its simple... they want to test us ...
Harsha: no no... Karthik... this is being given to every batch since 3 years and it never got completed till date..
Karthik: what?
Harsha: none completed vouching in the given time and its still pending...
Raji: it's complete now, if the reconcilation is done... then final accounts are ready for filing...
Harsha: it's really great.. well done... So... go have lunch and u have taxation session post lunch...
Karthik: yeah... we are leaving...

Karthik and Raji come out of the cabin and head towards the escalator. Raji goes to the locker room and gets the lunch as Karthik waits for her. She holds his hand and steps on it. Both of them reach cafetaria. She gets two plates and serves from the lunch box she brought.
Karthik: naan vilaiyaattaa sonnadhai serious aah eduthukittiyaa?
Raji: illai... eppadiyum enakkaaga seyyaren adhanaale ungalukkum serthu seidhu konduvanthen...
Karthik: sorry...
Raji: edhukku sorry?
Karthik: ennamo sollanum nu thonuchi...
Raji: it's ok... pidikkale nnaa sollidunga...
Karthik: OK...
both of them finish lunch and come to the taxation session.

A new person took class which lasted for four hours with a small break of 10 mins in between. At the end of the class... Assignment papers were distributed and were asked to complete and submit on monday. And the weekly test announcement was also made stating they can take the test either saturday or monday and the auditor leaves.
Everyone disburse and Raji is deeply lost in her thoughts. karthik calls her repeatedly and it takes quite a few minutes for her to come out of the trance.

Karthik: ennaachu?
Raji: idhu enna edho audit kum taxation kum coaching serndhaa maathiri irukku...
Karthik: almost appadi thaan...
Raji: appo matha papers eppo padikkaradhu?
Karthik: puriyalai...
Raji: may la exam ezhadhanum illaiyaa? mon to fri ... office... sat..exam...
Karthik: saturday morning thaane exam.. mudichittu... meedhi time... sunday full aah ukkandhu padi...
Raji: intha assignment pannanume?
Karthik: sari assignment saturday mudichittu.. sunday padi...
Raji: appo kooda kashtam... intha range ku ponaa.. november la thaan ezhudha mudiyum...
Karthik: onnum illa... inga irukkira ellaarume final eh ezhudharom... unnaala inter ezhudha mudiyaadhu nnu sollaadhe...
Raji: time eh illaiye...
Karthik: en illa? correct aah plan pottu padichaa... more than enough time.
Raji: eppadi?
Karthik: naalaikku exam mudinjadhum ingaye ukkaanthu discuss pannidalaam..
Raji: naalaikku exam mudinjadhum naan oorukku poganum... brindavan ku ticket book pannitten
Karthik: adhu velai pidikkalai nnaa return poga thaane?? ippo thaan inga pidichirukke?
Raji: adhukku ? ennaala appa amma vai parkaama irukka mudiyaadhu...
Karthik smiles...

Raji is still seriously thinking...
karthik takes her scribbling pad and draws a plan...
Raji: enna panreenga?
Karthik: wait a minute...
Raji keeps looking at him. Karthik seriously draws a chart and writes something as she watches him closely. She felt he was interesting to be with and something attracted her towards him. As soon as the thought came to her mind she shook her head and sat straight. Karthik finished writing and says...
Karthik: so intha plan ok vaa paaru... exact aah 10 weeks irukku... last two weeks final revision ku allot pannittaa...
8 weeks irukku... one subject per week revise pannitte vandhaa... u can do two revisions and u are ready for the exam...
Raji: doubts vandhaa?
Karthik: ennai kelu... naan sollitharen...
Raji: eppo? office time la yaa?
karthik: venaa... saturday exam ezhudhittu, lunch mudichittu ingeye evening varaikkum ukkaanthu oru paper full aah revise pannidalaam... next saturday kulla nee time kidaikkumbodhellaaam padichi mudi...adutha saturday innoru paper revise pannalaam...
Raji: appo chennaikku eppo poradhu?
Karthik: intha vaaram thaane ticket book panni irukke? adutha vaaram enna?

Raji: naan appa amma vai vittu ithanai naal irundhadhe illa...
Tears fill her eyes and her tears made some impact within him. he quickly thinks and...
Karthik: sari... oorukku poyi enna pannuve?
Raji: anga poyi padikkaradhu...
Karthik: sari sunday 3 hours spend panna mudiyumaa discussion ku?
Raji: mmm... eppadi?
Karthik: naanum chennai varen... saturday ... inga morning exam mudichittu brindavan pidichaa...night aayidum reach aaga... sunday morning padichittaa... meedhi time appa amma kooda spend pannalaam... monday morning brindavan la return vandhaa station le irundu direct aah office vandhidalaam...
Raji: adhukku train la pogumbodhe discuss panna laame... six hours irukkum travel time...
Karthik simply stares at her.

Raji: sorry...
Karthik: ennaala concentrate panna mudiyaadhu... enakku padikkumbodhu amaidhiyaa irukkanum...
Raji: ok... aanaa...
Karthik: enna?
Raji: appa vai kekkanum...
Karthik: kelu... kettuttu naalaikku sollu...
Raji: Ok...
karthik: ippo kilambalaamaa?
Raji: mmm...
Both of them come out of the Office and head towards their respective homes...

SATURDAY:

Karthik and Raji come to Office and write the test successfully. Finishing the test, they have lunch, take a cab and reach the railway station. And when Brindavan express arrives, they wait for the train to get emptied and look for their seat and coach and board the train.
Their first journey is about to begin and little did they know that by the end of the journey both will become so close as if they belonged to each other since eternity...

Part 12... coming soon...