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Posted: 11 years ago
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SANDHIR OS:Ego

Hey!!!guys am new to this forum if there are any mistakes then am sorry

When nails grow long,
we cut nails, not fingers.
Similarly,when
misunderstanding grow up,
cut your ego
not your relationship.

Randhir is burning with jealousy seeing parth-sanyukta together .Their nok-jhoks and their porximity is killing him and he don't know why?what is this feeling and why is it effecting him so much ? why it os bothering him to extent and he comes out of the thoughts and storms out of the lab leaving everyone shocked.

Randhir went to his friend of course his punching bag and he took out the frusttrtation on that poor bag and he gave up and he realized his feeling that he have finally fallen for sanyukta .Ms.Sanyukta Agarwal and he still can't believe that he had fallen for the enemy he smilied to himself cheepishly and after freshing up he went to canteen to have dinner and again he saw sanyukta-parth together when he saw them his eyes met with hers for the first time he noticed her eyes were beautiful angelic eyes. and their eyelock was broken up by parth who is calling sanyukta fot the past five minutes.Randhir smiled and went to hav his dinner and here sanyukta is shocked he smiled and tat too seeing me well am not dreaming right and from there immediatly she went to her room and danced on her bed and that randhir smiled at me and yeah! is in love wid randhir don't know when?how?why? and kastuki came and saw her in this position and asked sanyukta are alright ? sanyukta adjusted herself and said ya am perfectly fine better then ever and she went to fresh up and after freshing up she slept wid a smile and there randhir also slept wid a smile on his face .

Next day morning they meet in the canteen and Randhir finds sanyukta sitting alone so he goes and accompanies her and says

Randhir:hi Sanyukta :)

Sanyukta:hi,Randhir:D

Randhir:So,aaj tum free ho

Sanyukta:haan par kyun

Randhir:toh phir meet me at XYZ place today at sharp 6 and he gives her a gift and says wear this and come

Sanyukta nods and blushes

"I opened the huge white box and inside lay folded perfectly inside was a champagne/ golden gown folded into a square. I drew it out of its box and shook it out, then it revealed its true glory as i took in the..."
beauty of it. The way the sequenced fabric flowed was elegant. If words could describe perfection, this would be it. I was itching to try it on.
Suddenly, I felt excited.
I tried to picture it: me at the XYZ place, wearing this amazing thing of beauty. I could already see the way that I wanted my hair to flow with it.
This dress was the most faultless, wonderful thing I've ever seen.



At evening 6'O clock sanyukta reaches XYZ place and she is completely shocked seeing the place decoration .It was really so beautiful and she had tears in her eyes by seeing it and she searches for randhir and there he is she runs and hugs him tightly and he goes back and sanyukta wonders what happened
Randhir:" I'm not supposed to love you,
I'm not supposed to care,
I'm not supposed to live my life
wishing you were there.
I'm not supposed to wonder where
you are or what you're doing,
but I can't help it,
cause I'm in love with you."

Sanyukta:I LOVE YOU TOO RANDHIR :)

After the cofession and they both had their dinner which randhir planned and went to their respective rooms

Next morning they came into the canteen talking and laughing and everyone in the canteen was shocked and their mouths turned into perfect "O" and jiggy fell down from his place

Jiggy :Am i dreaming kastuki randhir bhai aur sanyukta together and that also laughing and talking OMG kastuki pinch me

Kastuki:mujhe bhi yakeen nahin ho raha jiggy

Yoyo:arey paaji aaj sun kaha se nikla pashchim se kya

Parth:oh stop it guys... totally irritated

Sandhir came and saw them like this and laughed and said guys aisa kyun dekh rahe ho Aise kisi bhoot ko dekh liya

Jiggy:kuch nahin bas hame lat lag gayee tum donon ko aise dekh ke

Kastuki:par kya huwa tum donon ke beech suddenly like this?

Sandhir:guys we are in a relationship

Jiggy:kya??? aaj sach main kuch hone wala hain

Sandhir:Jiggy overaction band karo class keliye late ho raha hai chalo
they all go towards the class and go and sat in their respective places

in middle of the classes sandhir steal glances and sanyukta blushes and after the classes all meet in the canteen

Their relationship is nice and now it is 6th month of their realtionship and everything is going ina smooth way and everyone is happy except two persons and they are PARTH AND VIDUSHI yes,parth loves sanyukta from the dream competition and vidushi loves randhir as she can get fame .money ,studieseverything.

They were talking to themselves facing their back
Parth:ahh i hate that randhir .he stole my sanyukta am not gonna leave him

Vidushi:ahhh i hate sanyukta>sab kuch cheen liya pehla ysa ab randhir.sanyukta u r dead am not gonna leave u
each other listened to their talks and turned and now they are facing each other

Vidushi:so,

Parth:so,i think so our thoughts are same so why don't we make a plan and separate them

Vidushi:yep would love to do it both were having evil smiles on their faces

They both creates misunderstanding between them and they didn't care to solve them because of EGO . they started to hate amd ignore each other .Sanyukta wanted to make randhir jealous so she started to date with Parth when randhir came to know about this his anger reached peak .He also started to date vidushi just to make sanyukta jealous .But they cannot be like this dating someone and inside loving someone.They were back to their previous relationship RIVALS.

A LEAP OF 2 YEARS .in this two years they were same nothing is changed between them.One day parth and vidushi were talking on phones from their respecive rooms like how their plan was successful but they didn't realize their room mates were standing near the door and after listening to their room mates talks sandhir absent mindedly came out of their rooms and thinking bout each other this they were not angry on vidushi/[arth but they were angry on themselves not trusting each othere and iving more priority to their EGO'S and ignoring each other

Randhir:kya kardi maine am the only one responsible for letting our relationship goin down if i didn't had ego and if i wouldn't ignore her and if we had solved our problems now the situation would be different now if i went and say that parth and vidushi did this she wouldn't me because i have hurted her that much he cried :(

Sanyukta:kya kardi maine main hi sab kuch bigada mera ego ne superiority le liya aur maine randhir par trust hi nahin kiya ab main kya karun main usko mooh dikhane ki laayak bhi nahin hoon she cries for her fate agar main ab jaake kehdoon ki ye sab un dono ne kiya he will not believe me he will think it is my another game kyun bhagwan apne aisa kyun kiya she cried...

Next day morning they both came at the same time to the canteen and their eyes met after a long time and it was broken by their frnds

Sanyukta:what happen to his eyes ?he has been crying or what?

Randhir:why her eyes are swollen ?she has been crying or what?

Their exams are coming up and evryone is wrking hard to give best shot and everyone gave the best shot in the exams now it is time to bid each other

Jignesh:miss u randhir bhai

Randhir:miss u too jiggy

Jignesh:bhai ek baar sanyukta se mil sakte hai right!!!

Randhir:mujhe der ho raha hai jiggy mujhe jana hai bye tc

kastuki:will miss u sanyukta

Sanyukta:will miss u too kastuki

Kastuki:ek baar randhir se baat kar lo na

Sanyukta:bahot der ho chuki hai kastuki

Kastuki:nahin sanyukta jaise tum apne aap ko doshi maanthe ho waise hi
randhir bhi

Sanyukta:ye sab tumhe kaise pata

JIggy:maine usko bataya yes sanyukta randhir bhai abhi bhi tumse bohot pyaar karte hai ab jao flight jane se pehle

Sanyukta:thank u so much guys bye tc...love u

Sanyukta rushes to the airport and reached in half an hour and searching for randhir madly she don't know what to do so she took the mike

Sanyukta: I'm not supposed to love you,
I'm not supposed to care,
I'm not supposed to live my life
wishing you were there.
I'm not supposed to wonder where
you are or what you're doing,
but I can't help it,
cause I'm in love with you."

Randhir was in waiting room thinking about him and sanyukta when he listened this he came out running and there he saw Sanyukta and he ran and hugged her tightly and said iam so sorry Sanyukta ...I LOVE YOU SANYUKTA

Sanyukta:I am sorry too Randhir.LOVE YOU TOO BABY :P :)

Everyone in the airport saw their lovely moments and clapped for the proposal and their reunite

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Any Relationships never dies a natural death ...they are murdered by EGO ,ATTITUDE,IGNORANCE,NO TRUST...

Mainly EGO is responsible to destroy any relationship so have a bigger heart ,skip the E and let it GO... :) :D

love,
Swetha:) :D

I know it is not good par try kiya and criticism is most welcome and comment whether u liked it or not 👍🏼👎🏼
Edited by StupendousArshi - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really Loved the os!!!!!!!!! Especially the last lines!!!!!!!!Every Lovers should remember this!!!!!!!!!
Relationships never dies a natural death ...they are murdered by EGO ,ATTITUDE,IGNORANCE,NO TRUST...
Mainly EGO is responsible to destroy any relationship so have a bigger heart ,skip the E and let it GO... :) :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS. Though bit dramatic but loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IT WAS SO GOOD! keep on writing... eager to read more form u.. :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the beginning of the os, the first two prhrases blew my mind away!... great attempt! a good writer is being born eh?! keep going buddy!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!
enjoyed reading it..!! nice work!
and well done with the Quotes!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...n the underlying message ws loud n clear...ego is ones biggest enemy!! Nailed it, girl!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome OS.. ❤️
yeah its true that EGO murders a relationship
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK YU FOR THE LIKES AND COMMENTS GUYS...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..acha h :)

P.S. mujhe wo golden wala gown chahiye..abhi k abhi..I loved it :* :)

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