A Broken Kite - an AsYa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Res! 😃

Unres!

Ooh! This was so beautiful. I could actually relive the scene.
I especially loved the end -

Zoya was struck by the irony of the question. The boy, evidently has experienced a desperate kind of hunger for someone so young, yet he is so full of spirit. And here she was thinking of dying because Mr. Khan didn't love her.

This was her origins. She is an orphan too.

There was a lot of pain to be healed in her. But she will do it among her kind. As she followed the little boy back to the madrasa, the call for prayer sounded, haunting and beautiful.

What the future holds, Zoya didn't know. But this place will offer her the peace and solace she needed to heal herself.

Amazing. 👏

@bold - Clearly depicts the heartbreak she must have gone through. She realised that she indeed had no family.

Very touching. You are a fabulous writer!

Do write more! 😃

Originally posted by: akaswan

Hey Awesome OS 👏

Very good written 👍🏼

I loved it ❤️