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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: niki795



hi naina
how are you
beautiful poem

thanx dear...😳
m fine... plz stay till the update if u can..😊
Edited by naina.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: jeenia123


ok, i will update just within half a hour...
So neha feeling good in school?


ok dear
will wait
ya sh e is all good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: naina..

u will add it to the update😲😳 i was so hesitating before messaging u all...thanx😳




wow nice you are adding it in the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina..

thanx dear...😳
m fine... plz stay till the update if u can..😊




sure will stay till update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
update is coming here...its ready...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

First of all thanks to Naina for writing such a beautiful poem for our vanarsena...

we six friends, all form different states, different professions, still together..and Welcome Ayesha to vanarsena, if she will like to join our stupid group...

Ek kahani mein piroye jeenia ne kuch ehsaas,
behte gaye yeh naina unke likhe alfazon ke sath...


Waqt guzara mile niki jaise khas kuch dost,
meera aur meerab bane humsafar,chale hum ek nayi manzil ki aur...


Chalte chalte rab ne fir anusha se milaya,
jeenia niki ka pyar, aur meerab mein meera ka naam mere naina ne dekha samaya...
Kayi kahaniyon ki shuruyat ne apne antt ko paya,
inhi pyari kahaniyon ke safr mein likha gea "VANERSENA" naam ka sarmaya...
"vanersena naam ka sarmaya"...


Part-2

Astha got up from bed and went to washroom for changing her clothes while Shlok was laying on the bed thinking about Swati...

As Astha came out, she shouted at Shlok...aye Hero...go to sofa...I will sleep on the bed...

Kyon biwi ho meri, you can share bed with me... Shlok winked at her...

Ummm...yup you are right... biwi hun tumhari...haq bnta hai mera..She too winked him back and took his phone from his hand lying next to him...

What are you doing with my phone? Shlok tried to pull his phone back... Nothing...Astha smiled... Just clicking our pic lying together and will send to Swati...

What .. Astha stop it yaar...shlok panicked on the name of Swati...she will kill me...saying he jumped from the bed and immediately shifted to sofa...

Hahaha... Astha laughed loudly...waise Shlok I never understand, Swati ke naam pe tumhari itni fatti kyon hai...

What? Shlok was shocked ta her question...

Ofcourse... Astha jerked her shoulders... in college too, whenever Swati was not around, you were just like a chuimui girl saying touch me not to all...you people are in relationship from seven long years , even then, so much insecurity?

No yaar...shlok smiled looking at Swati's pic on his phone...its not so... we two are so much in love aur jhan pe itni pyar ho, thodi si possessiveness to ho hi jati hai... She is very possessive for me...she never likes if I talk to some girl in her absence... Actually I am still surprised how she agreed for ur marriage...but you know, she gave me a long list of does and don'ts when you are with me...

Like? Astha smiled keeping her hands on her face looking at Shlok...

Umm...Shlok thought with smile...

1. Like don't go alone with you anywhere...

2. Will not sleep on the same bed with you.

3. Will not share plate at food with you.

4. Will not change clothes in the room when you are there.

5. Will not watch movie alone with you

6. Will not...

Bus bus bus... Astha closed her ears with her hands... Oh my God, so much restrictions...that's why I never want to fall in love or marry...Apni Swati se pooch lo...saans to le sakte ho mere sath ya wo bhi nahi... she smiled...

Shut up astha... its too late, let's sleep now, we have to start at our plan in the morning only...

Like? Astha asked...

Tomorrow will be your Rasoi poojan...

But that will hurt Mom Dad too... Astha thought...

Yo think, just fighting with me will lead us to divorce? Shlok spoke...and please don't think about hitler...its most important for you to break all his rules if we need divorce...

For example? Astha asked...

Like, get up late in the morning, go to kitchen without taking bath, cook bad food that too without potatoes, wear modern clothes...etc etc...

Ok, then let's start form tomorrow itself... Astha smirked...kal Raosi poojan pe hungama ho jaye?

Shlok got up and gave her hi five...ho hi jaye...

Ok, the good night...saying Astha laid on bed while Shlok slept of sofa after kissing the pic of Swati n his phone.

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Next day, Astha woke up at Six AM, she was about to get up from bed but remember their plan..

Umm...I think I should sleep again, saying she tossed side on bed and slept again...

It was almost nine AM when Anjali came there calling for her... astha... Astha...

Ummm... I want to sleep mom...its just nine AM... she faked yawning...

Astha. Anjali spoke suppressing her anger... I think you are forgetting, its your in law's home...

Oh my God... Astha got up with a jump... Really I forgot...sorry m0om.eve Shlok didn't wake me up...

Ya, by the way where is he? Anjali asked...

May be for walk... she remembered his last night's statements...

Ok, get ready and come to kitchen soon...its your first cooking at this home...Anjali spoke...

What's the need to get ready Mom? Let's go... Astha spoke coming out of room in night Gown...

Stop Astha... Anjali shouted in anger...

Yes Mom.. (Finally it starts working) Astha smiled...

In our home no one goes out of room in gowns and never in the kitchen before taking bath...

But I am not habitual of taking baths so morning... Astha made a face.

Then change your habits... Anjali spoke... You are married now...

Ok, then wait... Astha jerked her shoulders...it will take me atleast one hour to take bath...

Before Anjali could say anything, Astha closed the door of bathroom at her face...

I am sorry Auntie...I know you are too elder but I will have to be rude with you... Astha thought to herself...

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One hour had passed when Anjali was still waiting for Astha in kitchen...

While Astha came there wearing anaarkali suit..

What Is this Astha? You can't wear these dresses now...you are married...so wear saris...Anjali shouted..

Not at all...I can't wear these old fashioned series, I like to wear just suits and jeans...choice is all yours... Astha spoke rudely...anyway...what do I have to do in rasoi poojan?

Anjali's anger was on cloud nine already... Cook food for all...

What? Astha made a shocking face...aren't there any servants here to cook food? i never cook food nor will i... in my home, only servants cook food...and if you can't afford, I may ask my dad to send one...

Astha... Anjali shouted...you are crossing the limits now...I am not saying anything just because you are saheb's best friend's daughter and you love Shlok...

Loving Shlok doesn't mean to do all these stupid things too... Astha spoke...if I knew I would have to cook as well, get up early in this house, I would have asked my dad to marry me with Shlok and settle us in different house...

Astha... Shlok shouted coming from backside...how dare you? How dare you to speak so rudely with my mom?

But how could she imagine I will cook food in kitchen? Astha too shouted...

Niranjan had also come there listening so much voices.

But this is tradition beta...all follow it, your mom too would have done rasoi poojan... Niranjan spoke politely.

She may have dad...but I don't follow such stupid tradition... Either ask servant to cook on my behalf or I may order from outside...saying Astha left kitchen going to her room.

See... Your choice... Shlok taunted his farther... You wanted me to marry such high headed girl...saying he too went to his room...

As he reached there, he found Astha in tears...

Astha... He moved closer, what happened? Our plan succeeded...he smiled...

But I am not feeling good Shlok...Astha spoke in tears... I have never spoken in such rude language to anyone, not even to my parents even when they are wrong... I am cursing myself for what I did today...

Shlok moved closer and wiped her tears...don't feel bad Astha... This was bound to happen...with just one step, they are feeling bad about you...just two or three more strokes, they will be ready for our divorce... Saying Shlok held her in his arms and pulled her in light hug to make her feel better...



So how did you ll like it? was it upto expectations or not?

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
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for VANARSENA

niki ::: as usual superb update

naina ::: superb... m loving this smart astha n chuimui touch me not shlok

meera :::

meerab ::: so cute and khatti meethi update...

Anusha :::


Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all thanks to naina for the beautiful poem
you should be writing more dear

coming to the update
as usual its awesome
superb
loved it
loved the starting part
their teasing each other... Shlok scared of swathi 😆
his dos and donts 😆 😆🤣
they started their plan
now astha is feeling bad for hurting them😕
they hugged each other😳
now what will this hug bring 😆😉
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
First of all... thankyou so much jeenia u added my poem to ur update...it really touched my heart...
love u my vanersena...🤗
now ur update...
m loving this astha... she is smart enough knows how to handle shlok well...the sending pic to swati trick was nice one😉

chuimui girl saying touch me not to all... 🤣

No yaar...shlok smiled looking at Swati's pic on his phone...its not so... we two are so much in love aur jhan pe itni pyar ho, thodi si possessiveness to ho hi jati hai... She is very possessive for me...she never likes if I talk to some girl in her absence..

Shlok baby this is called insecurity n distrusting, not love n possessiveness...😆
" THODI" si possessiveness n a "LONG" list of do n don'ts🤣 they both don't really go well together...
n not watching movie together... swati is totally mad i think...🤔
i would love shlok break all these one by one. n take astha for a movie first of all...😆


Like, get up late in the morning, go to kitchen without taking bath, cook bad food that too without potatoes, wear modern clothes...etc etc...🤣🤣


They executed their plan well... aww astha felt sorry,its just first day of the month ,lets c where all this will end up... nice update...👍🏼



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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think there is new addition to our team
ayesha

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