Rantara FF:Dance To The Beat Of My Heart||ON HOLD||Note pg. 56

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abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Kiret,

this was rocking 😉

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Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron
Kiret,
this was rocking 😉

Thank you!

Glad you liked it! 😊

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harshita gangwani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Hey its amazing yaar..

Really nice..Lovely update..

So dey will start rehersals soon..dats gud..

Really beautiful thanks fr pm.update soon..keep writing..:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: harshita1996
Hey its amazing yaar..
Really nice..Lovely update..
So dey will start rehersals soon..dats gud..
Really beautiful thanks fr pm.update soon..keep writing..:)

Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

No problem and will update soon! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 4Ok so here's the next update! Warning it's crap and I don't really know what I wrote. It was supposed to be up two days ago but that didn't happen because Kiret got sick... again... :( Anyways, it's short because that's all I could manage but if you like it, yaay! If not, it's ok, I didn't like it much either! "Ok so how about we do this step?" I ask, showing him a turn. "That looks good but I think it would look better if we were both on different levels," he says. "So if I was standing and you were..." I say. "Like this," he says and shows me a turn, which involves him going down and coming back up. "That looks perfect," I say. "Ok and so after that there's a spin, you have to put your leg here," he says, showing me. I was kind of nervous to dance with him. Come on Antara, it's just dancing. You love it, now relax and do what Raghu told you to.

"Ok," I say. "Ready?" he asks, turning on the song. I nod and get into the starting position. The first part was a little solo by me. After the turns, Raghu pulls me close, my leg going around him. I dip down and Raghu pulls me back up, unknowingly pulling me even closer. I could feel his warm breath against my face and realize that we are so close. Our gazes are locked, my arms around Raghu's neck and his around my waist.

We were so close, there was almost no space between us. "That looks perfect," I hear Mach Mach say, breaking out eye lock. Antara moves away quickly, almost falling over. I hold her arm to stop her from falling. "What happened Mach Mach?" I ask. "I just came to see how practice was going," he says, sitting on a chair. "Practice is going well, thanks for asking. You can go now," I say gesturing towards the door. "Are you sure you want me to leave Bhai? I mean it's my last day of freedom. From tomorrow on I have to be with her highness," he says. "Aye, she's my girlfriend ok," I say. "Sorry Bhai, just saying the truth," he says.

I felt completely out of place so I decided to leave. "I think I should go. I'll meet you for practice tomorrow," I say and pick up my bag. I am just about to leave when I hear Raghu call behind me. "Miss. Kaul, thanks," he says. I turn around. "Ms. Kaul?" I ask. "Sounds good. And I was saying thanks... For helping me." I smile and leave. Raghu was a really nice person.

"Dude what was that? You ruined our practice," I say. "Sorry," he says. "Now let's go." We walk out of the building and towards our dorm.

"Bhai, what is love?" he asks. "Why are you asking about love?" I ask. "Just like that. Come on Bhai. Tell me," he repeats. "Love... Dude there's no such thing as love," I reply. " Don't you love Rukhsana?" he asks. "I don't love her... I mean... I don't even know what love is. I like her but love. Never. I don't think I will ever fall in love with any girl."

"Love, is life. Think about it, love is always around you, always near you. You just need the right person to help you realize it," I tell Maya. "But how do I know who is the right guy for me? How would I know if he is my soul mate?" she asks.

"Well I don't know. How am I supposed to know? Would she be there holding a sign that's saying I'm the one'? Or when I meet her, will there be a bolt of lightning? Dude face it. There is no such thing as love," I say.

"Everyone has someone made for them. We just have to find them. You'll just know when that one person comes into your life. Your heart will tell you," I say.

"This is all nonsense. Why are we even talking about this?" I ask. "Bhai last question. What will your dream girl be like?" I look at him. His question got me thinking. What would she be like? Wait a second. Why was I thinking about this? It's not like I believed in love and any of this so why should it matter to me? "I don't have any dream girl. Now come, let's go," I say.

"My prince charming? Well, I had always thought that he would be kind and caring but has a good sense of humour but at the same time, also knows his limits. But most importantly, he should have a good heart," I say. If he has a good heart, then nothing else matters."

"Sounds a lot like someone I know," Maya says. "What?" I ask. "Nothing, it's just that your description matches someone at the academy a lot," she replies. "Really? Who is it?" I ask, sitting down next to her. "I'm not going to tell you. You'll find out yourself eventually," she says. "Come on Maya," I say. "Nope," she says. "Fine," I say. "Now lets go grab something to eat. I'm starving."

A/N: So that was it! I'm ready for all the tamatars and chappals! But do hit the like button and leave a comment saying how you thought it was!

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Character sketch updated :)

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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WaliKiDulhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Kiret! Kiret! Kiret! 😆

I was so waiting for this update.. 😉

I'm so relieved after reading that Raghu doesn't love rukhsana 😳 yayy

I think maya and mm will play the cupid..they are going to make Raghu and Antara realise their love..

Oh I'm so loving this story

And the guy Maya was talking about is Raghu..hai naa? I'm sure he's the one 😛

thankyou for the pm and continue soon

P.S: people usually fall sick when they don't take of their health..and when they neglect their health..and when they don't sleep on time 😡
So better take care of yourself and make a habit of sleeping on time 😆

Edited by hareem27 - 11 years ago

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Afy10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Nice update 😊
so raghu doesn't love rukku 😊
anti's description abt prince charming is just raghu..nd she vil find soon
raghu and antara im waiting eagerly for them to fall in love
😳

Edited by Afy10 - 11 years ago