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Posted: 11 years ago
ufff khudaya meri jannat di me dyingly waiting for the update of my HISTORIC FF aur di desperately wanting to see in this update the doom of tht ghatiya jaanwar di 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri jannat di kalse pagalon ki tarah waiting for the update refreshing refreshing dying to read the update di plzzz aaj update dedo na ur baby is still desperately for the update today di😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 88



Bhabi Geet heard Vicky call her you don't need to do this please. Vicky begged but Maan did not even dare to look at her. He was hell angry on her stupidity for coming with them but she was just adamant and did not even let him say anything. I know Vicky but the women inside me does not let me go back.. You two are brothers but she needs someone who could look after her.. pata nahi ab tak kitne she gulped the lump tat formed inside her throat. Her hatred for Annie was at one place right now. She knew that if it was not Maan than no one would come to rescue Annie and somewhere she was happy that her Maan did take this step letting his hatred rest for some time.


But Bhabi waha khatra hoga.. aap jaanthi hain Rajveer can do anything.. abhi bhi time hain bhabi aap wapas jaaye... agar kuch hua tho Vicky was scared and he looked at Maan saying Bro please send her back. Maan stopped the car as soon as he heard Vicky and glared at him saying agar baat maani hoti tho yeh humare saath yaha nahi hoti Vicky... biwi hain na meri so she has to be like me... but trust me Geet Maan turned and looked at Geet who sat at the back seat a small scratch on you I will kill every b***** present there and no one will be able to stop me.. yaad rakhna tum bhi nahi samjhi. Geet blinked her eyes in fear as she heard his warning and this was the nth time he was warning her. Annie se nafrat karta hain yeh MSK but right now I can't let my hatred to let that b***** to kill her but one scratch on you I will burn everyone present there. She nodded understanding wat he meant but still she did not back out as she wanted to be there for Annie. Everyone back home had tried their best saying that Annie does not deserve her help but she was just not letting them to change her decision and right now they were on their way to meet Rajveer. Maan gave her a last look and started to drive back while Vicky just kept looking at Maan and Geet and though they had their back up he was scared for some reasons.

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They were escorted by Rajveer's men's who were armed with guns but still Maan walked as if he did not even see those guns that could kill them. He kept walking with Geet in the middle and she was almost clinging to him in fear. He smirked and pulled her closer and held her hand tight and Vicky too did the same seeing the fear in her eyes. He smiled assuring her though he himself did not know wat lay for them but they just kept walking along with his men's but Maan's eyes were on each and everything that he wanted.


Bhai Geet clenched Maan's and Vicky's hand as they heard the painful voice coming from Annie who was surrounded with all tall and well built men's. Maan closed his eyes as he felt Geet's nails piercing into his skin but he did not even reply back hearing the painful groan from Annie nor did Vicky. They walked straight towards Rajveer where he sat and smirked hearing one of his men's tearing Annie's sleeves as he had ordered. Geet's eyes and ears were only on Annie the moment she had heard her voice when they entered his so called den. She could not even blink her eyes seeing the way she was being beaten and her clothes getting torn bit by bit. She tried to move but her struggles were halted by Maan and Vicky's hard grip on her. She tried to muffle her cries as she heard Annie scream seeing them again but there was no reply from Maan and Vicky and before she could even utter a single word she heard Rajveer.


Three of you Rajveer smirked seeing Geet having her eyes on Annie. Not a problem for it... but my my... dekho Maan Singh Khuranna.. tera pyar kitne dard mein hain.. apni barbaadi ki wajah ko dard mein dekhkar khud dard mehsoos kar rahi hain.. pyar ho tho aisa.. Hain na Maan Singh Khuranna. Maan gritted his teeth looking at Rajveer but never did he turn to Annie's direction. Waise why don't you have a look at your sister's direction Khuranna... I bet you, you will just enjoy the scene. His each word was only adding to Maan's anger but he did not turn and see Annie. Dekh lo Khuranna kya pata aisa nazara phir kabhi na mile... and tat to free Rajveer smirked as he enjoyed the way Annie screamed but none of his men's stopped.


Leave her Rajveer Maan just demanded but Rajveer just kept looking with an evil smile but Maan was equally smirking with much more evilness in his eyes. Kuch kaha Khuranna.. sunna nahi main phir se kahu Rajveer asked every well knowing wat he said. Maan Singh Khuranna does not repeat his words Rajveer Shikawat aur waise bhi tumari aukaat nahi hain that you can prove your evilness more than me.. This so called drama wat you say proves ki tumara andar jo khoon hain woh kitna ganda hain.. After all Jairaj ka jo hain. jaisa kamina baap waise hi beta.. But don't you feel that you are a coward by using a girl and her dignity for your life.. Chi chi Shikawat.. kya socha aur kya nikale tum.


Haan your evilness.. sunna hai maine.. Rajveer eyed Geet and said waise how did you feel being getting r**** every night Geet..,.. maaza aaya hoga na... waise woh bacha zinda hain ya mar juka hain jo Maan ke r*** ka result tha. Needles pierced her body as she heard his each word while Maan and Vicky's blood boiled but this time it was Geet who spoke taking the lead. Prem.. na na Rajveer na... you know wat you are the sickest person I have ever met.. humari chodo isn't she your wife. She pointed towards Annie but Maan was right your blood is so dirty that you would not mind to enjoy your sisters and mother getting r**** n front of your eyes and even you would be the one who would lay them on bed for money.


Geettt he yelled breaking the glass that was in front of him. Don't Rajveer Geet raised her index finger don't let your vocal cords suffer like this.. kya pata cheelane ke liye zinda rahe ya nahi. Rajveer marched with anger all ready to hit Geet but she was shielded by Maan and Vicky who pushed Rajveer away from her and the moment they did his men's surrounded the three with their guns pointed towards them.


Back off Rajveer screamed standing on his feet and glaring at them. Not a second and you 3 will be killed here.. par nahi itni aasan maut nahi dunga main. Rajveer smirked eying Geet now when I can make you cry blood why should I kill you with these guns... aisa tho bilkul maaza nahi aayega Khuranna. His eyes constantly on Get scanning her from top to bottom and waise bhi your wife has grown more in her curves so maaza tho aayega na... last time though I failed and it was good that I did... ab tho tum dono ke saamne karne mein aur maaza aayega.. waha kya nazara hoga ek taraf dhokebaaz behan aur dusri taraf biwi.


Rajveerrr Maan yelled making Rajveer to laugh at his anger. Maaza aaya na tho socho Khuranna how much enjoyable it will be when I actually r*** her in front of you.. so lets do it without wasting time. He ordered his men's to grab Maan and Vicky and pulled Geet's duppata away making her scared.


Rajveer Annie screamed seeing him doing so leave her Rajveer.. chodo Geet ko please she begged realizing wat extent she was wrong but it was too late for her. She kept begging while Vicky and Maan struggled to get free seeing Geet run from one corner to another trying to save herself. She cried calling out for Maan and Vicky but they were held by many till Maan succeeded in getting free and the moment he did he pounced on Rajveer hitting him directly on his face.


You b***** he grabbed Rajveer by neck tumari himmat kaise hui. He hit him once again on the face while Vicky too was successful in getting free but their success was only for little while when suddenly Geet cried out for Maan. Her eyes wide in fear as seeing one of the men shooting in Maan's leg and he stumbled on his leg falling down. She ran but before she could reach Rajveer grabbed and threw her down laughing at Maan and kicking him on his leg where he was shot. Kamina hoon isliye kamina pan karta hoon Khuranna. He kicked him again making Maan to squirm in pain but he did not give up. His eyes as furious as they were and seeing them Rajveer only laughed pointing his gun at him. Ab dekhna Khuranna wat I do.. aisi maut dunga tum sabko tat even yamraaj will be scared looking at it.


Maar kyu nahi dete Rajveer. But alas you can't... and will never be. Rajveer laughed hearing him and hit his leg once again grabbing Geet by her hair while Annie was almost naked. Dekho waha Maan.. tumara bhai Vicky.. See him how is he bleeding and your sister.. ushe tho tumne ab tak nahi dekha... ab tho dekh lena.. See how she is standing naked in front of everyone.. ab tho sirf kuch pal and you will see wat happens.. aur tumari biwi ushe tho main aise saaza dunga tat you will beg for death.


But suddenly everything turned upside down as Rajveer could only hear guns shots and nothing else. He raised his eyes all over and saw his men's falling down one by one while they fire at unknown direction trying to guess the direction of the bullets and in this all he did not even realize when Geet was pulled away and he was standing with no gun in his hands. Maaza aaya he felt a painful smack on his face but he did not fall down as Maan held him tight by his neck. Wat did you think Rajveer Maan smirked as he saw the confusion on his face you always think that I think in anger... par nahi Rajveer.. shayad tumne Prem banke Maan ka jaana but not as Rajveer.. Agar Rajveer banke soch lete tho itni galatiya nahi karta. He pointed towards the men's in uniform who were already in and had occupied most of the place and were fighting against Rajveer's men's. Maan Singh Khurann kachi game nahi khelta Rajveer. He removed the small camera he had pinned on his shirt and showed it to Rajveer my every move was being tracked down by them... yaad hain Rajveer maine kaha tha ki ek galati and you will be paying for it... and you did the biggest mistake by bringing me here without getting us checked... bahut kache khiladi ho Rajveer and Maan started to hit him again and again.


You b***** Rajveer yelled as he dodged his hand and smacked Maan but Vicky held his hand before it could touch Maan. Bahut jaldi hain marne ki Rajveer with these words Vicky kicked him hard in his stomach making him to spit blood. Vicky grabbed his hand and said bahut shuaq hain na meri bhabi ka haath padke ke liye... And wasn't this the one which touched her. Rajveer looked at Vicky with fearful eyes but before he could even register anything his hand was twisted hard making him to scream in pain but Vicky did not even leave it. Maan stood watching as Vicky lashed his anger on him but he did not intervened as he knew wat Geet was for him. He just kept kicking and hitting him on the walls and all the tables making him to bleed. The floor started to turn red but Vicky was nowhere to stop. Rajveer was almost dead when Vicky grabbed his limp body for the last time and thrashed his head into the hard stone wall.


Annieee Maan and Vicky turned hearing Geet scream and their eyes turned wild in fear as they saw Annie smiling with a gun pointing in her hand and she slowly pointed it to her head. Bhai she called Maan giving him a sad smile but he just turned forcing Vicky to turn and calling out for Geet cover her Geet. Geet moved ahead with her duppata but Annie stopped her don't Geet... mere paas mat aana.. don't dirty yourself by coming closer.. mat aana Geet.. mat aana. Geet nodded her head saying Annie.. please..aisa kuch mat karo.. dekho sab dekh rahe hain.. please though no one was looking at Annie as every police man was busy firing and left over men's or fighting.


Kuch baaki nahi hain Geet.. maine sab barbaad kiya hain and now its time tat I leave everything.. sirf ek baat kehni hain Geet nodded her head m sorry Geet.. jaanthi hoon its not enough par ishe jyada kuch nahi keh sakthi Geet.. jo maine kiya woh maafi ke layak nahi hain. Annie wiped the blood tat licked from her lips just tell Dad tat I never meant all this.. par sab kar diya... sab kar barbaad kar diya.. and now I can't face him.. I can't face Dad and Mom, Geet.. please just tell them I love them all and she pointed her gun. She smiled closing her eyes and even though her fingers trembled she did not back out but next moment the gun was nowhere near her and her lips were once again profusely bleeding.


Vicky could not stop himself from hearing her words and without even thinking anything else he turned and just ran towards Annie, grabbed the gun and hit her face to hard that it started to bleed. He had grabbed Geet's duppata and just wrapped it around almost bare Annie and slapped her once again. Marne ke liye yaha nahi aaye the hum Di. He was wild as he said tat and slapped her again did not forget tat hatred but aise nahi chod sakte hain hum aapko. Annie cried as she stared at Vicky but he did not even dare to wipe them but just slapped her again. Agar marna hi tha...


Geettt... she screamed making Maan to turn towards them while Vicky looked behind him. His eyes wide as he saw Rajveer standing on his legs supporting is body and aiming a gun at Geet. He smiled wickedly seeing all having fear on their faces ishe bahut pyar karta hain na Khuranna.. ab jab she will be dead why would I need to kill anyone else.. mera tho badla pura hojayega and he shot the bullet but before it could hit Geet she was pushed away where she hit her head on the wall while Annie stood with blood dripping from her body. She smiled seeing Rajveer kuch nahi kar saktha hain tu Rajveer.. tu haar gaya..


Maar tho saktha hoon na and he fired another one tat followed with another one tat hit Rajveer right on his heart. He turned and saw a police officer standing and firing bullets at him and next he was down on the floor with eyes wide open. Annie Geet rushed towards Annie who now lay on the floor with blood all over her. Yeh kya kiya tumne Annie Geet tried to top the blood but Annie only smiled saying apne gunaah ki saaza mili hain mujhe Geet and I want to die seeing you smile Geet.. please I want to see the smile tat I had seen the very first day I saw you in college.. please Geet. Geet just kept looking at Annie as she slowly raised her hand to touch her face but she could not even reach as she felt herself in air. Bhai she called with great difficulty seeing Maan carrying her and rushing out. She smiled seeing her Maan bhai carrying her. She slowly raised her hand and touched his face Bhai...m .. so.. so.. rry and her eyes closed giving into her hurt wounded body.


Precap: Love and Hate nearing its ends with another 3 update.


My Love and Hate has just turned TWO years old on 9th March and i still wonder how did i come so long.. its all your love guys and thank you so much.. though many have left it but i just love the one who supported me for this long journey... and now it will end in just another few days.

Annie ki saaza abhi baaki hain.. This was the duty of brother's to save her though she destroyed them but they coul not be like tat and when Geet can give chance for Maan, would she be happy if Maan did not save Annie when she needed. I just wanted to show this part of Maan and Vicky tat for some time they leave their anger and Hatred away and just be her brothers and nothing else. And I think I have not done anything wrong. Giving Annie a chance is different here but when Geet forgave Maan for all sins she would not be happy if Maan ande Vicky had turned their backs to Annie... and right Annie can be only punished by Geet and Maan and they will do and wat they do you will have to wait for next update.


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Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update was truly up and down di and i knew somewhere maan will save and sort out the issue

vicky i loved him for what he did!! truly the second hero of the story😉 rajveer jaiso ko normal maut milna nahi chaiye tha!!

i am satisfied with the way annie was punished too!! bt i truly wanted geet to do something about it and then maan kyunki it was maaneet who had suffered truly and hoping she will say out something

di why dont you show something like geet and aniee ka convo??
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This one was full of ips n fowns but finally all well that ends well hoping annie gets forgiveness n feeling sad that its ending soon


Now want a update full of sweety n his mumma dadda moments n his naughtiness
Edited by harman12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing update n yes u did a right thing by showing a brothers love n abt anniee punishment it can only the right of manaeet eagerly waiting for next part sad also that love and hate going to end i will very much miss sweety, maaneet, vicky n the way all are fighting to have time with sweety.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update badi hai mast mast shoba, just as always.

This damned rajveer, gosh! I dunno wat to say.

And annie, well she realized too late, but she's right, she won't be able to face her family, especially dadi maa n arjun.

You know wat, even if annie's end is nearing na, let her have peace at least uski last moment pe.

N arjun ki life mei aur koi ayegi kya? Khair aayi to janege hi.

I wanna see handas wid geet once more, pls give us daughter n family moments.

Update is awesome, iske baad me wanna read season 2.

and try to help me wid my fic too.

Really wonderful journey till now.

Pls write next part soon.





Edited by turbulence - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
GOD U MADE ME CRY YAAR
geet also came with them
but i was sure maanu wont let anything hapopen to her
the whole part was superb
finally maanu saved her sis
sahi kha maanu kache kaam nhi karta
n that bas**** rajveer i love the way vicky beat him to death👏👏
good that bas**** died
n annie ya she will get punishment from herr bros n geet
she cant die so easily
want more
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemmm update anie redemption rajveer the end anie saved geet by taking bullet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc part,update soon.
Waiting 4 nxt

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