Fiction Arjun: Reborn from Ashes. Chapter 22, p.50 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Interesting
Who is the mystery caller?
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
love rathore
wonderful & interesting
i follow this just 4 Rathore qk mujy Di ko like kar ke heart attack ni lena hum usko kuch samaj rahe hain aur woh kuch aur nikle gi so es se acha hai us se dour he raha jae w8ng 4 next plz update soon n thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
R u planned sum one 4 rathore or already koe hai
Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update👍🏼
the access denied pop up was really funny😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome di👏
can i call u di if u dont mind
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Posted: 11 years ago
ill start with the last line...the epic one till date...👏👏👏👏👏

how do you carry such heavy sleeves???full of secrets..spill out some..plzzz..😃😃

rathod...the best one here...arr oke besi confuse korisna..bechara sob jante pere shock e na more jai...

more gele what will happen to Arjun and their bromance...😉😃

di...i dont know what to say...let it be...🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

thora reveal to banta hai..after 8 chapters of weaving...😉😉😉

continue soon..thanks for pm..😳😳

sorry got late...some hectic assignments you know..🤢🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update dear:-)
Nw m sure dis DI is d cheif...bt wt is d mystry behind similarity of her nd shakshi's voice and etes vch are lyk roshni's
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ Neha -Congratulations!! Reswale first girl!! I know Di is confusing, but she is the mystery here, itni jaldhi kaise solve karr dun??
Yup I also miss ETF (that's why I'm writing Blue Shadows).
this password only can be cracked by the chief herself, Shree can't help it.

@ Goldie- Thanks dear, stay tuned..I've more to confuse you all.

@ misakiscarlet - Right guess!! Congratulations. Stay tuned to have more fun!!

@aagana- Stay with me, you'll gt your answer at the right time & right place.

@ Sneha- Upps!! Confused?? Didn't I warned you all at the first post?? And I'v only one answer for your questionnaire, "Stay with me, you'll gt your answer at the right time & right place." Have patience girl, it's just started.

@ Laila - Why you are confused?? You've already guessed it, right?? & the bureaus description is not from Castle, I've sketched it from Dante's description of hell. that's why all call that place "the hell'. Stay tuned for more.

@ Kun- I know exactly what you know...yahan sab confused hain...(feeling chakkar!!) RR milan...wait karo...yh sam boho ziddi hain, sala aapni jagah se hilta nahi! Aab main kya karun!! (feeling dhurro)

@ Shefali- Sprite peo, sab clear ho jayega!!! & Di..she is the story dear. you want me to end this so soon??

@ Anita -You think?? I gave you so many clues still you think?? of course she is the caller.

@ Skafty - Eat a tomato & 25g almonds daily... you answer it just above this line.

@ Maha - Rathod se darr nahi laagta..Di se laagta hain?? Great!! Stay tuned, may be your Rathod fall in love with her..Who knows?? I didn't plan any jodis right now except Raos...baaki baad main dekh lenge. You know I'm not good with emo stuffs. stay with me.

@ Jia - Thanks...Stay tuned.

@ Samaman - Yup you can call me di, I wont mind at all. Thanks a lot. & stay tuned.

@ Ree- Have patience girl...all confusions would be cleared at the right time & right place.
Rathod is confused...I know, but ki kori bol, or confused cheharata dekhte onek valo lage je!! but don't worry, he'll be lucky soon.
Di is my core ingredient here...so try to adjust, I promise I won't disappoint you.
Don't be sorry for late, I'm also busy with some exams. Feeling like hell.

@ Prachi- Nice guess & Love you too for that. Stay tuned. You'll get your answers soon.

Now ladies, you all asked a more or less similar question, "Why Di's eyes resembles Roshni and her voice is like Saakshi's?" Well, this idea just popped in and I wrote it down. if you want you can think of a blood relation to them, but her I won't put them.Two people's voice can be similar, there's no mystery. it's quite natural. and eyes, just think why japanese, chainese and Bhutanis has same small eyes?? Just presume Rosh & Di are from same region, so that their eyes are similar...or think this is a mere coincident.May be this will help you to concentrate in the story.

And an important thing, from 4th March to11th, I've 250 views against only 16 comments & 12 likes here !! this is very disappointing. And it clearly says most people don't like this story. That's why, this upcoming chapter is the last part I'm posting in IF.If I won't get enough feedback, I'll update it only in PM.(that too to only selected 9s).

Scroll down for next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter nine

Arjun was visiting CB's website, Reading the about section where he found small intro of their officers. He looked at the name, Sameer Rathod. He's back in the city...started working again here... another name caught his attention on the screen. Shreekant Sen, ETF's Shree. He's also there, working since 8 months. "That's good" He thought. At least they are together.

He remembered his days with them. That specked boy made his works easy, if he was of anjali's age, that boy also gained his attention & pampers also. He didn't met them in last two years. After that blast, he just went to that office to clean his cabin...nobody raised their eyes to him, or he didn't talk to anyone. He took his stuff and moved away. And since then he avoided all person who connects him to the law enforcements. Those two never tried to reach him also. He know what they were thinking about him...all happened because of him.

He was again feeling elluviating...when that voice spoke up "I do believe you". That startled Arjun. Again, she started...He clenched his eyes and a wild wave of his memories hit his mind...his days with Rathod, his ETF team and that blast. He fisted his hair as if he was trying to stop that, but unfortunately, memories don't have pause or stop button. & the sad ones generally refuse to evanesce.

Anjali was busy with her lappy, she looked at Arjun.

Anjali : Aap baithe baithe so rahe ho, Mr. Arjun?

Her voice broke Arjun's chain of thought.

Arjun : Why?

Anjali : aap ki screensaver active ho gaya...aisa tab hota hain jab lappy bohot der tak idle rahe ho...

Arjun : Haan, I was thinking something..

Anjali : Naya case? Main kuch karun?

Arjun : Nahi...kuch aur..

Anjali : Aur woh baat aapko pareshaan karti hain.

Arjun stared at her, she got him again.

Anjali : I know you since 2 years, Mr. Arjun. & I know how to read it. Aapki sabse bari kamzori aapki ankhein hain. Wahan se aapki andar jo vi chal raha hain woh sab kuch dikhta hain...aab aap batayenge woh baat kya hain?

Arjun : Tum nahi samjhoge, Anjali...tum...

Anjali : Avi vi choti hoon...pata hain. Aur yeh vi pata hain aap mujhse kavi kuch nahi kahenge. It's ok...I won't ask but you have to give me something now..

Arjun : Ice-cream?

Anjali : (smiled and nodded) Fridge main hain...thora zyada laana.

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Arjun was serving ice-cream for Anjali. He remembered her word...she said the exact words Roshni used to say. She could read him like an open book. He never succeeded to hid anything frome her, his happiness, sadness, tension, anger, turmoil, doubt, mischief, truths and lies...she used to caught everything; whether he voiced it out or not. When he enquired how she did it, she smiled and said, "Your eyes Rawte, They always blurt out the truth."

He looked at his reflction on the glass window of the kitchen...his eyes...are they really speaks his heart!! He tried to find out when he remembered Di. When he called her, she stopped and her eyes had some emotions... that name affects her. but he needed to be sure...

Anjali was waiting for Arjun and her ice-cream. But her Mr. Arjun didn't came out from the kitchen. She walked into the kitchen and found Arjun lost into his thoughts and her ice-cream was melting. She took the box from the counter and picked a spoon, hit the box with it which brought Arjun back.

Arjun looked at the source of that noise, he found Anjali eating ice-cream from the box.

Arjun : Anjali, box se nahi...thand lag jayegi...I've served..

He looked at the bowl with half melted ice-cream.

Anjali : nop...main yeh katam karungi... who hot ice-cream aap rakhlo.

She walked away with the box, Arjun followed her.

Anjali : (setting into her place) You were thinking about Di..right?

That question startled Arjun. He tried to say something but Anjali cut him between.

Anjali : I was thinking about her too...acchi hain...but kuch garbarh hain..

Arjun : Kaisa garbarh?

Anjali : Uski aawaz aur aankho ka coordination kuch thik nahi hain...

That statement perplexed Arjun for a moment, her eyes...those resembles Roshni... Someone means world to him, his soul. and voice..that reminds of Saakshi... Who was a breeze of fresh air into his shattered life...but in last two years...both are part of his nightmares. He wanted neither to see Roshni's eyes looking at him breathing her last nor to hear that faith-filled statement "I do believe you". And this girl, just increased his misery. She reminds him of them but her alien behavior proves she is someone else.

Anjali : Mr. Arjun..aap phir kho gaye? Laagta hain aajkal meri value kum ho rahi hain..

Arjun smiled at her cute complain.

Arjun : Nahi...tun Dishari ke bare main kya bol rahi thi?

Anjali : Yehi... that she don't say what she means... uski harr baat ka double meaning kia ja sakta hain...

Arjun : (Frowned) Kaise?

Anjali : She said she returned after you all slept off... but it doesn't indicate the exact time...she may return at morning also...

Arjun : Hmm...

Anjali : aur uska dost lawyear nahi hai...lekin koi vi ho sakta hain...she even didn't told you properly how she retired from that place... she left from there, who vi aap ki saamne se & you didn't noticed her!! Aisa kavi ho sakta hain...ke aap ki nazar se bachke...

Arjun stared at her...that girl noticed something he didn't. this Di is mysterious indeed.

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Dishari was sitting at the far corner of a coffee shop. Her eyes were fixed on her laptop screen. She was waiting for someone. After almost twenty minutes, that man showed up.

Man : Ms. Tandon.

Di : (not looking at him) You're late.

Man : (settling down) Sorry...traffic...

Di : Give me some better excuses.

Man : Huh!!

Di : Look Mr. Khan. It's you who needs me...so you should be careful.

Khan : I will from the next time.

Di : I'm afraid there would be no next time. I've mailed you the particulates...check it. And did you bring...

Khan : I know you don't work for free...(extending a gift box to her) for you.

Di : What is it??

Khan : Something you demanded.

Di : Thanks. (she kept it)

Khan : You seem interested in that...can I ask why?

Di : Of course you can...but I'm not bound to answer.

Khan : Ya I know...the particulates...It's of 1035...are you sure?

Di : (smiled) keep an eye on the ways... you may get a ride.

Khan : I will.

Di : Ok...I think this meeting's over...(shut down her laptop) try not to contact me except in extreme emergency.

Khan : It's an emergency, madam. & I need my Guide.

Di : That's why I'm here. (She wrote something on a piece of paper) keep it...he'll help you. And ask your people to be ready for any situation. Things are getting dirty day by day.

Khan : & we are failing to stop it...

Di : Try harder, K. There's no room for failure. & you know it better than me.(she straighten up)

Khan : Are you...

Di : (Moving to the door) No.

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In CB loung.

Fernandez was serving cookies to everyone when they gathered to discuss about the case no 1035. It's a forgery case of about 5 months old, where they found involvement of Treasurer Hiten Nanda and an international forger RD. but they had no solid evidences against Nanda, and RD escaped the country before they could reach him.

Rathod : Banarjee, are you sure those people coming into light?

Banarjee : Yes I am...Khan's sources are usually reliable...& this time It's her source who contacted Khan...we can't question it.

Rao : So what's your findings without questioning??

Banarjee : I tapped those phones... & it gave us a deadline.

Shukla : So they are dealing? But you sure that they'll bring those plates also?

Banarjee : Preety much... Last time they were our suspects but we had no solid proof against them. But this time Nanda himself talked to RD. & they fixed the meeting. Then why shouldn't we act?

Rao : Give me time & place...let me see what can we do with it...

Banarjee : Time 1.40 am, next Wednesday...place...still unknown.

Aiyar : Kya unknown?? They didn't fixed the date??

Banarjee : They just said place would be the same. Now you people have to find it out.

Rao (V) : OH! That's not too difficult. Let's recheck those places they used for their meetings. Some were under our watch, some we had raided...we can put them under surveillance.

Ansari : I'll set the watchers...

Rathod : And the location of those callers?

Banarjee : well Nanda was in a Cineplex...& RD...I couldn't track him...he was using an online call service and his IP was of that kind. But he'll be here for meeting.

Fernandez : That's good ,kid. But I hope this meeting would not be a video conference.

Khan joined them that moment.

Khan : Don't worry fernandez... It won't be. Banarjee, keep an eye on the entries of this city...he'll be here any moment.

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Now, leave your feedback before leaving this page, at least hit the like buton. And remember, no feedback.. no more updates. thank you for being with me till this post. the fate of next post lies in your hands.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
YAY Me fisrt 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Loved it Atisha beautiful
Loved Arjun & Anjli convo
it was really good 7 tothe point
Anjali understands him well
Di is really mysterious
Loved the new interesting case
Thanks for the Pm (waise Bina PM hi pad liya)😉
Continue soon 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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