RagNa TS : Confessions!! Edited : Part 2 on page 2

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Once again hello guys. I have tried my hands on writing something.. which is defo not my forte!! But I still tried.. Hope u like it!! I was not too sure about the title.. So all itle suggestion are welcome. I would change it.

Confessions!!



Kalpi is sitting on her terrace ..all alone. She looks at the sky.. Lots of sparkling stars around a beautiful moon.. She smiles sarcastically!! Despite of stars, moon is lonely.. just like her. She too is alone in this complicated world.. No one loves her!! Her mother is always busy with her 2nd daughter..Pakhi. Her father loves him but is he vocal enough to support her?? Where was he when her mother sent her to hostel. And her brother.. She still wonders why he likes Pakhi so much.. Why he made Pakhi share her cake on her b'day?? Can she have one exclusive relation?? Can she have one relation which she doesn''t has to share with Pakhi??


She wants to shut her mind.. wants to stop thinking but she can't. She doesn't know what is bothering her so much.. She had always seen her mother's partial love. She is used to it but yet she is feeling jealous today. Pakhi is still with her mother in her room. She doesn't want to stay there so she left her room to come here. But now she is wondering what made her jealous.. Was it Kamla-Pakhi's closeness that affected her or it was their talk about Raghav.. Pakhi was telling her mother how Raghav has taken him for date. The word date hurted her..She doesn't know why but it did. She still stayed there. But then Pakhi started talking about tonight's success party. The word party itself made her leave the room. That party is what she wants to forget. She wants to forget the confession Raghav did in party. She starts getting flashbacks of their dance..


The way he asked her to dance with him.. It made her so happy. Her mind wanted to deny but her heart dint let her, She just accepted his offer. Thn the close dance they shared. He was so close to her that she can feel his breath on her lips.. They had mask but it felt like he is feeling her and looking at her lovingly. Their silence was talking on their part. It wasn't like he was closed to her for the first time.. But this time it was different. It felt like they are alone in this crowd.. She never felt like this before.. She dint wanted that dance to end but than Raghav stopped dancing in the mid and He said he wants to say something to her.. His words took her out of trance.. She just nod her head.. indicating him to say. And thn he said that 3 magical words..He said "I love you." She can't believe what she heard.. For her, the world paused for a while.. She wasn't expecting this from him... She was supposed to be shock but she dint knew what made her happy.. May be she had some hidden feelings for him.. She wanted to hug him.. but thn he asked Pakhi.. r u listening to me?? The name Pakhi.. broke all her dreams in a moment. She gathered courage thinking that she doesn't feel anything for him. He is his boss only. Somehow she composed herself and lifts her mask..Raghav did the same.. To avoid herself crying in front of Raghav.. she just ran upstairs..


Flashback ends and Kalpi finds herself in tear. She was feeling helpless and wants to cry.. She wants to confess her feelings to someone but then she found there is no one for her. Everyone cares for Pakhi and only Pakhi.. She looks at Raghav's number in he phone.. Today only she has realized her love for Raghv and today only Raghav broke her heart. But it wasn't Raghav's fault really. He never said her anything.. His rude behavior was quite enough to say how much he hates her..



Here, Raghav is sitting in his bar.. Cursing himself for what he did. He mistook Kalpi for Pakhi when asked her for dance. But while dancing, He knew that it was Kalpi. He felt her in his arms... Even he said I love u to her only. She just took too much time to reply. That time his brain took over his heart.. His brain made him think that it's Pakhi with whom he is dancing and just like last time he was imagining Kalpi.. That time he had to add Pakhi to his confession. He was regretting for doing that. He starts drinking. One peg after other.. He totally lost it. He was so angry on himself that he dint realize when he called Kalpi..

Kalpi's phone starts ringing.. She dint knew what to do.. She doesn't want to pick the call but than she did.


To be continued.. Will try to complete it today.

P.S. : All +ve and -ve comments are welcome. Do spare a moment for feedback.

Regards

Vishesha

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its nice... :)
plzzz do continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous Update Vishesha 👏 I just loved it to the core 🤗

You brought the very core issue of Kalpi-though it looks like all well in her world apart from kamala... neither Vittal nor Pakhya is vocal enough to support her.

Please update the next part soon, I think now that stupid drunken ass will confess

I guess even in the show, Kalpi should carry some Vodka with her to straighten that guy😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update soon.. Wanna read more.. Its very interestihg...
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Superb dear grt os plz do continue soon
Cant wait 2 read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking my OS.

As promised, I have completed the story today. This is the second and last part. It's unedited so plz forgive me for any mistakes.

Part 2


Kalpi somehow composes herself..

Kalpi : Hello

An awkward silence after the hello. Kalpi was too hurt to say anything and Raghav's all anger vanished just after listening her voice. They stayed silent for a while when Raghav hears a voice from Kalpi's side. It was Pakhi.. Pakhi was saying Kalpi to come down as Kamla maa is calling her.. whereas Kalpi replied her to go and she will be back in some time. Raghav gets angry on listening Pakhi's voice.

Raghav : Why u came there?? Why u danced with me?? Who u r?? Just an assistant... What made u think that u can dance with RS.

Kalpi : I am sorry sir but it was you who asked me for dance.. I wasn't aware that you wanted Pakhi in my place..

Raghav : Yes, I wanted to dance with Pakhi, I wanted her to confess but u ruined it. You always does the same. You do not know anything.. You always goes to the place where you are not supposed to. Ohh God.. why the hell were u in the party??

Kalpi starts crying badly.. She had always seen Pakhi taking her place.. And today Raghav is blaming her.

Kalpi (while crying) : Yes sir.. U r correct!! There is definitely some fault in me.. that's why what I deserve belongs to Pakhi.. My position in university, in your office and in my mom's life.. Each and everything belongs to her only. It's my fault that I was away from my family but she was spending time with them..It's my fault that my mom saved her from drawning instead of me... It was my mistake that I lost my 3 exam sheets and failed.. It was my mistake that I thought u loved me but u too loved Pakhi just like others.. All mistakes were mine sir. I am really sorry. But I promise that now I won't make any more mistakes.. I won't show you my face sir. I won't cross you path. I promise I won't trouble you anymore.

After saying this she disconnects the call and throws the cell away. Raghav gets troubled on listening Kalpi. He really dint understood Kalpi's words as he was unaware of her hostel but it was clear from her voice that it's something related to Pakhi. Thn Kalpi's last line echoed his mind... What she meant by not showing her face.. What is she going to do?? The fear of he doing something wrong shivers him... He broke the wine glass he was holding and his hand starts bleeding... He dint pay any attention to it..He just fetched his car keys and starts driving harshly towards the chawl.. He rushes towards the gate but stops thnking where Kalpi will be.. He remember Pakhi calling Kalpi down and hence reaches terrace.. There he see Kalpi standing on edge...He reaches there and pulls her towards himself. They hug..Kalpi breaks the hug.

Raghav : Are u mad?? What were you about to do?? How would have I survived if something have happened to you??

Kalpi was shocked on listening him. She wasn't about to do anything.. She was just standing there. But what Raghav was doing here. Why he pulled her in his arms and why he said all those words.. If he loves Pakhi than why he came here?? She was confused. Raghav has become a puzzle for him. Just few mins back she had assured herself and decided that she will leave the job and won't see Raghav ever and now he is standing in her front..

Kalpi : Let something happen to me.. Why do u care?? Pakhi is there in my home.. Go and meet her.

Raghav : I have come to meet you.. Not for Pakhi.

Kalpi : But why sir?? You have made me clear that you don't have feelings for me.. So why u don't let me die..

Raghav doesn't let her complete her sentence.. He just puts his finger on her lips and says

Raghav : Don't u dare to utter a word.. You mean world to me... I can't live without you.

Kalpi : But why do u care about an assistant??

Raghav : Can't u understand?? I love that assistant damn it!! I shouldn't but I do. I love you Kalpi.. Plz never ever leave me..

Kalpi get emotional on listening this. She forgtes all that happen in party and hugs him.. For the first time Raghav to feels the love she has for him.. For the first time he is not thinking about revenge but the love.. Kalpi closes her eyes and feels him but thn remembers Raghav's proposal in the party.. She detaches herself from Raghav and says

Kalpi : But u love Pakhi.. that's what you said in the party..

Raghav : I am sorry Kalpana, I was fool to use Pakhi for my revenge.. I wanted to destroy Kapoors using Pakhi. They are responsible for my father's death and I wanted to punish them for this. I had only one aim in my life but I dint knew when I fell in love with you.. Hope you forgives me.

Kalpi : Sir, Pakhi is a sweet girl. Plz don't hurt her. It will hurt my mom.

Raghva : I promise.. I won't. But u promise me that you will never leave me.

Kalpi : I promise sir.. I will never leave you.. Not for anyone..

Raghav : Kalpi.. thn say it naa!!

Kalpi : what??

Raghav : the 3 words I am dying to hear..

Kalpi (blushingly ) : I love you..

Raghav : I love you too...

And thn they seal their confession with a long Kiss!!😉


Regards

Vishesha.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS
I love RagNa confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. Hw sweet.. Loved it very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww! Such a sweet one.. I loved it and was picturising it with aasish and rachna.. Loved it!!😛
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soo sweet,, its really fabulous👏👏

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