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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

She is sleeping covering her blanket, she feels someone pulling it downwards to her feet. She pulls it upward but again it is repeated. At last she uncovers her face. She looks to the person disturbing her sleep and gets up rubbing her eyes. She gave her a smile. He is standing holding a coffee mug. He can clearly see her face which was having a glow but now the face has completely got down. Though she has a smile on her face still her eyes can clearly say what's going on in her life or what has happened in her life. She has actually struggle a lot. Though he was better companion for her but he feels not best companion for her. He wants the best for her. There's no doubt that he is her bff but still he need to get a good or can say best companion or best partner who can support her for her entire life. He aside his thoughts and held the mug to her. She giving a smile takes it. He was just going out of the room

"swayam" he turns and looks at her.

Swayam: haan Kria bolo.

Keeping her mug on the side table she comes near him. she very well know what's going on his mind and she can't do anything but as she is his bff she can at least made him realize that he is best companion for her and also she knows that he can't be always there for her. Time will come when he had to make his choice may be he could live his life. Up to how many days or months or years he will stop his life for her. She too knows that he wants her to choose a perfect partner for herself but she is not going to do it. She will make herself live alone if he will say once that he needs to move on in his life. He doesn't want to stay or stop his enjoyment of his life. But she knows him very well he is not going to tell anything. And she has to convince him.

Kria: (she keeps her hand on his shoulder.) swayam main janti hun tum mere liye pareshan ho. Par please tum aise meri wajah se kab tak yun chup chup rahoge. (Faces him back) aur phir pata nahi main (tears escaped from her eyes she quickly wiped it) mera kya hai. Main to kahin pe bhi rehe lungi.

Swayam turns her facing him holding her shoulder. He clearly sees the teary eyes.

Sway: kria main bar bar nahi kahunga tumse. Main achi tarah samajh raha hun k tum kya kehena chahti ho. Par meri bhi ek baat dhyan se suno. Main jabt ak tumhare zindagi mein khusiyan nahi le ata tab tak main tumhe apne aap se dur nahi karunga aur naa hi tumhe dur jane dunga. (a drop of tears escape from her eyes which he takes it in his pointer) aur ye jo baat baat pet um rone lagti ho na ise thoda band karo main bore hone laga hun in sabse.

She looks at him in wide eyes and opened mouth. He is hardly laughing after her reaction. She puts her hand on her hip and stares him. Of course she knows why did he do this? And she doesn't want to spoil the surrounding. After a long gap she sees her bff laughing heartily. And she too joins him beating his shoulder.

Moving the accelerator he rides his bike on a full speed over taking all the vehicles on road and he stops the bike in front of a girl who having a smile standing in roadside crossing her arm on chest waiting for him. He smiles back at her. Her smiles now vanish from her face and anger is clearly visible. He gulps and looks her with a please expressions.

"No way. (Pointing her finger towards him) not this time k. main pure adhe ghante se tumhara (spreads her both arms opposite to each other) iss so called road side jahan pe ye humans yahan wahan thukte hain aur pata nahi kya kya.. aisi jagah tumhare intezzar kar rahi hun. Aur tum (pointing him) tum mujhe ye pleased expression de rahe ho. (cross her arms) no way. Iss bar main nahi maaf karungi. "

"par Shar" cut by her "naam mat lo mera. Rey tum kab sudhroge haan. Hamesha mujhe aise road side pe wait karwate ho.tumhe pata hai yahan pe kitne cheap ladke hain." Cut by him "ladke kahan hain" looks around if he could find a guy. "yahan to koi nahi hai Sharon" Sharon moves her palm in front of his face. "Hello. Mr. Reyaansh SInghania hame college jane mein deir ho rahi hai so hum chalein" looking at her he node his head and signal her to sit. She sits and both rides towards the college.

He always like Sharon to fight with him not only like but love when his bff fights with him he know that whenever she fight she is in a good mood and when she became silent must be something wrong. It is daily routine to pick Sharon from the road side and drops her there too. He doesn't want to go to her house. So he told Sharon to do so and without any question she agreed. Some how he feels Sharon might know the reason of it but he has never asked or nor she has told him. Sharon never asked him why he is not going to her house. But she knows the reason very well. She knows her bff will never tell her if she will ask but after lot of insist he may but she doesn't want to do so. She doesn't want that he should share his feeling after her insisting she wants him to say of his own. And also she doesn't want to spoil his and her mood.

They reach and enter the college with a bang. The entire college knows about their friendship. They are the best dancers in the college. And they had a lot of dreams which they want to fulfill. Both are gossiping with their friends when they heard some guys saying "are dekho aa gaye love birds" they look at the guy and at the direction the guy was indicating. There comes Kriyam holding each other's hand and everyone looking them which make them awkward. Both ignoring it enter the college campus. Sharey are feeling jealous. And of course they will as their love is holding someone else in front of them. Sharon is jealous of Kria as she always stays with him not leaving him alone for a single moment so that she can talk with him for once. Rey gets irritated whenever he sees Kriyam together. He feels like take her away from swayam and will spend some time with her. Rey goes near them and of course Sharon followed him. he stops in front of swayam and Sharon in front of Kria. And then both started the teasing session. Sharon speaks indicating Kria "dekho Rey aa gaye hamare college ke love birds" rey looks at her gives a smile and then speaks " so... mr. .." rub his palm on his forehead "kya naam bataya tha tumne?" Sharon smiles and says "Swayam. Swayam Sekhawat" rey immediately looks at her and she lowers her lash. "haan to Mr. Swayam Sekhawat. Aaj kispe leke aye apni girl friend ko cycle pe?" he laughs loudly clapping his hand. Now the students have surrounded them. kria now slowly goes back side of Sw+ayam to hide herself behind him holding his shoulder tightly. Sw+ayam keep her palm on her hand consoling her which didn't go un noticed by Sharey. Rey feels what happened to her that she has hidden herself behind Sw+ayam. Is she scared of the crowd or him? He? Yes must be him after all when she has come to the college and it was her first day how+ rudely he behaved with her. Only because of his so called ego. Why didn't he keep this aside? But if that day he hadn't done it he would have never found out that actually he got his love of life. Ok fine she can't tease sw+ayam but at least she can tease Kria right? And why not she can. "Are are dekho sab kaise bechari ki tarah chhup gayi hai apne lover ke piche" Sharon speaks in jealousy and teasing voice. Now enough is enough. How much she is able to tolerate these things. Everyone is teasing her and his bff Sw+ayam. She knows that if she will not speak and will not take a stand then he is also not going to do this. So she came in front of Sharon shocking sw+ayam. "tum hoti kaun ho haan? tumhe janne ki kya jarurat hai ke me kis ke piche chipun ya naa chipun. Tum apne kam se kam rakho naa. Dusron k kaam me dakhal kyun de rahi ho aur waise bhi tum jaison ki soch to itni hi giri hui ho sakti hai." rey is listening her patiently. He has gone in her dreamland without caring the words she is speaking. He has not seen her in a hyper mood. It was the first time she has speaks in front of him and that too like this. Her eyes. Oh big eyes having anger gosh it makes him go more and more in to her world. Her lips moving while speaking. He feels to catch those beautiful and sweet lips on his. Sharon now couldn't listen any more. She sees rey who has already gone in to other world she slightly beat him on his shoulder and he comes to the real world looking around if any one got him beaten by Sharon but to his good luck no one noticed them not even Kriyam. She speaks. "How dare you?" pointing her finger towards her. "Oh madam please aap apne kam se kaam rakhiye aur ye jo aplki ungli hai na" making it down sw+ayam says "ise thoda sambhal ke rakhiye bahut najuk hai kahin tut naa jaye" now Sharon can't do anything except listening him. Why can't she speak in front of him? Why the world stops when she feels or thinks of him. Why she goes out of her sense in front of him and all over after his touch she will surely go in to unconscious. But before she could get un conscious she hears rey's voice "oh Mr. how dare you to talk with her like this? Haan?" kriyam feels that they should keep silence instead of arguing. So they asked everyone to leave them. Getting something wrong sharey make their way clear. Kriyam goes inside. Sharey never fights with them intentionally because of their jealousy they always used to fights with them. Knowing it might hurt their respective love but still they didn't get any option to draw out it. Sharey looked at each other. They both know their feeling for Kriyam. Both of them give sorry expression to each other and then look at the way Kriyam going. And feels that it's not to say sorry to each other it's the time to say sorry to their love whom they have hurt.

By: Anu[9/3/14]

So how is it? Acha ya bura? K. jise acha laga ho like and comment or bura laga ho bhi to like and comment. Gaaliyan bhi de sakte ho.

Ps: k. itna hi aaj ke liye. Next update Ramya di dengi. So aap log ye enjoy karo. Tab tak ke liye.sorry fot typos recheck nahi kiya hai.

Edited by rolisiddhant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
res for aishu di aishu 3003
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
res
unres!!!
this aammaaazzing!!! Loved it!!!
kria and swayam ki blanket pulling game!!! Mast
kriyam ki convo!! Haayyyeee bahut mast!!!
both care for eachother... Dono ki baatein haayyeee live them!!!
and then sharey ka convo!!! :*
rey bike par shar waiting for him!!! ^_^
but rey doesn't picks Sharon frm her house,...,wonder why...
eager to noe the reason!!!
but then kriyam love birds!!! Haayyyeee
sharey teasing... Haayyyeee its lovely!!!
finally kria spoke up!!!
loved it!!!
sab bahut accha laga!!! I loved it!!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
amazing start
loved it
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
it is good...continue soon ...when will u update the next part of KR horror story...we r waiting fr tht
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Grt update!!!
Kriyam ka start convo thoda confusing tha!! Bt senti bhi tha!!
It was lyk kriya ko koi depression ka attack aaya ho...n swayam uski help kar raha ho!!! Just a guess.
Even sharey frndshp is nyc. Sharon doesnt want rey to blurt out d truth cz of her insistance. She wants him to say it wen he is ready to describe wat he is going through!!! Well dats wat besties r for!!! Dey understand u wen dey've every reason to misunderstand u!!!
N d small talk or fyt of kriyam n sharey was nyc!
Ya i actually lykd it!!!
Cz wen kriya spoke rey was flying in his personalized kriya land!!!
Same wid swaron!!! Bt a twist 😉 for a change it was sharon getting lost n out of words wen swayam was in front of her!!!
N d best part...sharey did it ol in der jealousy!!!
N dis tym its sharey trying to pursue kriyam!!
N its kriyam not giving a damn to it n burning in rage thinking der jealousy to b der enemity n dislyk towards dem!!!
I lyd it!!!
Thnx for pm!!! Waiting for d nxt part already!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
vry nyc...luv seeing sharey jealous..do continue😊
Edited by luvuKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Mujhe toh bahuth acha laga
Srsly
Kriyam bonding i just loved it
I liked kriya taking a stand part and rey going into kriyaland
The last part sharey realisation is too good
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wonderful update
kriyam convo ws awsm
kriya ko hua kya hai??

sharey frndship ws also nice


kriyam nd sharey fyt ws nice
kriya jab bol rahi thi toh rey uske dreamland mein tha

sharon swayam ke samne kuch bhi nahi bolti...wah

best part...sharey did it ol in der jealousy!!!
loved it




update soon nd thnks 4 pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start...
Loved the way u showed Kriyam n sharey bonding...
Plzz update soon! :):!

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