I'm Yours || A Kriyaansh Story || On Hiatus.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, I have thought of a new plot.

I am Mahnaz, some of you might know me... CarelessDreamer remember.

Yeah so thought of a new story. Here goes:

She sat on the cold hard floor, weeping. He did it, he did what she did two years ago, he broke her heart ruthlessly.

His words ringing in her ears, it was a mistake for him. Everything that happened was a mistake. The purest and the most chaste moment in her life was a mistake made in his drunken phase. A mistake.

He had said that he and she could never be they. It broke her as she reminisced those words, those moments they spent together, the dances, the eye locks, the way he took care of her when she injured her leg, the way he kept making plans of stopping her from going back to New York, the way he kissed her, the way he unintentionally hugged her after they ran from their own marriage, the way he looked at her when she shared her feelings with him and the way he rejected her after she did.

But she had decided she won't cry any more, this is probably the last time she would cry because of him, she would cry for him. Because after today she won't have the rights to cry for him. She is going to end this torture for him, she won't come near him, that she did many times but, this time she won't even admire him from afar. She promised herself.

Today, she was probably making the biggest decision of her life. She is going to accept a proposal after getting rejected to one. She was going to say yes, to marrying a man she did not love, and probably say goodbye to her one and only she loved.


Reyaansh Singhania.


Okay tell me how it is and yeah the trailer is in the next post and yes if I don't get enough likes and comments I won't continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

Chapter 1: Page 6

Chapter 2: Page 8

Chapter 3: Page 12

Chapter 4: Page 21

Chapter 5: Page 30

Chapter 6: Page 37

Chapter 7: Page 42

Chapter 8: Page 49

Chapter 9: Page 53

Chapter 10: Page 60
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Okay I really love to give and have trailers so there is a trailer for this one too:

He broke her heart.

Scene:

"I don't love you" Rey said frustrated. Why can't she understand
simple things like these.
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"He doesn't love me Sharon" Kria weeped, taking it all out. She had neared too much of pain.

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So she decided to move on.

Scene:

"You're getting married." She said to me with a tinge of finality in her voice.

"Fine, I'm ready." I replied. It doesn't matter anymore, does it?
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But then he wanted her for herself:

Scene:

"Don't do this kriya" I pleaded her.
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And her friends knew she was wrong.

Scene:

"Don't do this kriya." This girl was acting totally oblivious to to her feelings.
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But then it was too late.

Scene:

"I love you." He told me after almost stammering for the hundredth time.
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Who will she listen to.

Scene:

"Don't leave me kriya." This can't happen. She can't leave me just like that.

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"I can't love you Rey" kriya said.



I don't know why I don't think this is as good as the last one.

Well for the prologue I want till page 7... Is that possible.

And well if you want pms add this ID to your buddy list.

Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 09 March 2014 at 4:52am
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg freaking awesome start
Teasers are amazing
Love to read more
Update soon
Thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing storyline...!
sounds interesting ...!
please continue ...!
and PM mw when you have updated, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!
Amazing concept!!!
So here kriya is rejected after she apparently told him how she felt for him even after dis much tym!!!
U've nt introduced here rey's pov!!
So i cnt even bash him for doing dis!!!
Bt i m waiting for it to unfold!!!
Frankly i had thot of it happening wen dey aired d promo of kriya proposing rey!!!
Nyc!! So nw kriya will accept a proposal!!!
Shocking!!! Bt she is ryt on her part!!!
Continue soon!!! N dnt forget to pm me plz!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant concept mehnaz...
rejected kriya moving on...
as always trailors r exciting...waiting eagerly..
b.d.w teri purani ss ka kya..tune promise kiya tha an update in two days..cheater
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nnice start...
now plzzz continuee.
will be waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome n interesting teaser
But little confusing too
Cnt sn

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