RagNa OS: Don't Go [Author's reply - Page 3]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Everyone,

This is Shona! So turns out that my friend (Jiya), who wrote "Say Something" got hooked to this show as well (courtesy to me 😆) and she actually did end up writing something on RagNa. It's not really your conventional fiction. She sort of losely based on what's going on in the show but not really at all related to the show.



RagNa OS: Don't go


Don't go, I can't do this on my own.

Don't go, I can't do this on my own.

Save me from the ones that haunt me in the night.

I can't live with myself, so stay with me tonight.

Don't go.

Don't go.


They met. They fought. They came to a stable ground of understanding. Then, they fell in love. After that, complications ensued. They fought against them, together.

They were together. They were happy. One wanted to establish herself, a simple goal in a very complicated world. The other wanted revenge for his father, a complicated goal in their simple world. One helped the other when the other needed help.

One achieved her simple goal with her hard work and optimism. The other strove for his goal, without realizing that he's neglecting the one person who could have helped him see the light.

This went on, until their goals didn't match anymore. The love was there, but with no solid ground to stand on. She tried so hard to hold on. He strove towards his goal, without realizing that he is leaving her behind.

When he realized, it was too late. They slowly drifted apart, and he didn't take the chance to mend his ways. He was very close to his goal, so turned his back on this for a brief moment.

When he turned back again to make up for his mistakes, she wasn't there. He had left her far behind. There was no one to share his success with. He looked back to see where this happened and he only saw darkness. It scared him. He began to search for light. He began to search for her, everywhere. When he finally found her, she was slowly fading away.

He ran to her, to engulf her in an embrace. He stopped, when she only looked at him. She seemed so hollow, and tired. He realized his mistakes. He wanted to fight everyone for her. He wanted her to always be bright. He had wanted to take away all the darkness around her, from her. However, he became the biggest reason of her current state. He had caused her to burn out of all the flames. He sobbed, and he lamented. Then he decided that it was time to mend his ways.

Then it started again - their personal game. They had already met, and she had no fire left in her to fight. So, he started it again, where she would stand her ground. She would pick herself again, and fight with him. Then will come a time when he will win her back again. This time, never to let her go. And this time, never to be blind again.


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Well, here it is people! Thank you for reading it. Do let us know how it is. I know that it's a bit dark and bittersweet. But she likes to experiment. Anyways do tell how it is.

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-Wanderer- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one is amazing! Its short and leaves an impact! It also seems like she put a lot of effort and thought behind this!
I loved it!
Thanks to you for sharing this!
Love the depth of the thoughts! Excellent! 👏
Kalpi had a simple goal in a complicated world while Raghav had a complicated goal in a simple world- this line is so thought provoking!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for sharing this awesome OS 👏
This is short, intense and emotional. Ending is very beautiful and touching. I loved it to the core 🤗

Convey my thanks to your friend Jiya for this beautiful piece of work and of course for you too !!
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This is really very amazing... :)
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👏👏👏
amazing OS, beautifully written could connect to every single word u wrote👏
superb plz write more often
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its dark and bittersweet, sort of complicated but nice... 😊
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excellent.. love this..👏
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Hi Shona beautifully written, lub it 😳
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its beautiful dear luvd it
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lovely yaar very apt and to the point your friend writes wonderfully big hug and thank you from my side 🤗

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