Hey Farah Read this n Comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I wrote these lines for Rajat Tokas....bura to nahi laga na?

kisi ko khud se bekhaber kerney lagi hey
kesa jadoo teri nazer kerney lagi hey
teri lagan hey her ik baat se pehley
kisi ki her khirrki teri janib khulney lagi hey
ye teri judaaiyon ki rut jo aney wali hey
kisi ko hosh se baher kerney lagi hey
kon mojood hey teri is daastan mein,kon nahi
tujh ko to bayan ab her ik zabaan kerney lagi hey
tumharey baad waqt pe theher jae gi bas ek shaam
ik ulti ginti si jesy her dil mein chalney lagi hey

tum lot aao gey na? poochti hey her darrkan
wo dehleez pe jala k diya nahi
,"dil" rakhney lagi hey!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!! nice poem!!!
i really liked it... 😊 😊 😊
it truly defines rajat... n rajat will be more than delighted to read dis!!!!
u huge round of applause for u too!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank You all of u ,ur replies are encouraging!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Falak_Chauhan

Thank You all of u ,ur replies are encouraging!



u cum cum 😉 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi falak woww very nice poem i loved it sincerely you are also a very good poetess may you become great potess of the whole world god bless and thankyou for appreciating my poetry can you be my friend falak
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wah...!!...wah...!!..... 😛 .nice poem....!!...!!..... 👏

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