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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi friends I'm back again. This time with Manyata's feelings for Uday. Please read and leave your comments. Thanx. 😊 😛 😉

When we first met-
It was just a mess.
Me all alone on the beach,
You throwing stones
Into nothingness.
But were just thinking the same
If only I had known.

I never thought that
Destiny would bring
You into my life again-
The handsome Prince
Of my lost dreams.
I was your claimed love

My Halkat Veda-
Tarak ka peepa-
Kasamkhana saand-
You teased and riled
With your words,
Because you began to care.
But I couldn't see.

You protected-
Moulded
Stood by me.
Cared-
Groomed-
Taught
Touched me
Because you loved me.
But I was blind.

You punished
And hurt yourself
So many times
Because of me-
For that I
Am very sorry.

Now I'm with you
I understand how deep
and unconditional
Your love is for me
I promise with all my heart
I will be yours
No raging storms
Or howling winds
Will break us
Neither the heavens
Or the crumbling earth
Will take us...

For I love you-

Just you
Only you

Uday...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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a girls feelings perfectly described...well done😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Thanks For considering my request Jagz ... It's Awesome.👏 .. covered the whole ManVeer Story in one shot 👍🏼 ... Remembering Those golden days of DEK
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was going to write one anyway for you and all the other Manveer fans. 😉 😊 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey this is fab dear!!❤️
Do write more soon!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks friends for ur comments. I will be uploading my version of the Manveer luv story soon. In thr meanwhile di u think I shud write poems on the rest of the royals?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sry jagdesh/jagz for late reply...really sry..now my cmnt strts
You protected-
Moulded
Stood by me.
Cared-
Groomed-
Taught
Touched me
Because you loved me.
But I was blind.
so awesome and true line😳

You punished
And hurt yourself
So many times
Because of me-
For that I
Am very sorry.
aww poor uday..he used to love her soo much..and manyata never believed tht...she used to thought tht uday just want to touch her😭 its not true uday was a true lover😳
Now I'm with you
I understand how deep
and unconditional
Your love is for me
I promise with all my heart
I will be yours
No raging storms
Or howling winds
Will break us
Neither the heavens
Or the crumbling earth
Will take us...

For I love you-

Just you
Only you

Uday...
gosh the makers should have make a season 2 wid these awesome lines😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx Radhika for your wonderful comment. As always the best comments always come at the end. 😊 ❤️ 😛

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