SS: Will Love Blossom? Ch 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jodha is an orphan picked up off the streets by a kind benefactor (Hameeda Bano) who all formally adopted her into the family. Because of her extensive financial backing, Jodha has always viewed her mentor as the only parental authority powerful enough to sway her life decisions. Hameeda reciprocates her respect with appreciation for Jodha's innate business talent. She even groomed Jodha for future entrepreneurial rising whilst her biological son was off in Europe rebelling. But as they say, blood is thicker than water. When her only child Jalal returns from a spoiled life abroad, Hameeda sees but one way ahead- using Jodha to straighten him out. Hameeda drops the arranged marriage bomb as soon as Jalal returns from the airport. Coincidently, Jodha had her sights set on the same night so she could formally introduce her long time lover Neil to the family. Her hopes are crushed in minutes as she sends of her boyfriend from the main gates, begging him never to see her again. She is caught in a tough predicament- whether harden her heart and repay a lifetime of debts by marrying a stranger or toughen up and fight for her love. Her choice isn't made any easier by Jalal's stubborn refusal to stop seeing his live-in girlfriend Rukaiya.


[Set in modern times; Jodha and Jalal as leads, Hameeda, Rukaiya, Neil as supporting characters]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting and a different concept 😛😛 I am eagerly waiting for part 1 , pm me even if I can't respond as from monday , my daily tutions are going to restart after two weeks of vacation 😃😃 My request please don't end the lovestory on Jodhaa with this stranger Neil same goes with Jalal for Ruqaiya 😳😳 I love this concept as by that love would be more stable and stronger between Jodhaa and Jalal once they will fall in love with each other ❤️ Do update soon ^^ *-*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice, keep on writting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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title changed because that is me ya'll. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting. Please update soon. 😊
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Originally posted by: hewa2204

Very interesting. Please update soon. 😊

thank you
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Chapter 1

"Look at you bas***d acting all high and mighty! What good have you done to end up so happy? This isn't fair, is it? You should be the one suffering. You should be the one crying not my woman, you bad jerk!"

He thought all these thoughts but didn't say any out loud. Instead, he entered the cafe and immediately got down on his knees.

"Please save her", he said.

He was never a crier but today the tears won't stop. With bloodshot eyes and barely sucking shallow breaths in, he begged him until he broke.

"Only you can save her. You are the last person, no the only person who can make a difference. Speak please".

His eyes frantically darted left to right but always stopped in front of the man in the chair. He was so desperate he could die from it. He was so frustrated he could murder to rid him of it. He was so in love he was blinded by it. So he tried, again and again, until the man in the chair budged.

"Neil, she isn't my woman. I don't have any right over her life".

With those few words, Neil's patience was long gone. This was all he could bear to hear from the mouth of that proud bas***d. He took a seat in front of that bas***d until his angry eyes met his indifferent ones.

"Jalal, listen to me carefully. She came to me yesterday, flustered, confused, she was wailing. The woman I have known for ten years wouldn't so much as bat an eyelid no matter the stress in her life. For the first time, she broke down. Her vision was cloudy, her speech slurring. She stumbled into my room, held on to my leg like a puppy taken from the litter and cried for two hours. She isn't the woman I have been in love with for 10 years. She's turned into a stranger all in the span of one day. What exactly did you do to her?"

There was no reply. That much was expected. Neil had toughened himself before coming here. He'd known there would be nothing but disappointment carrying expectations from this snake like man.

"She is pregnant with your child. So the wrong you have done, fix it. Fix it in time or you mark my words Jalal I am going to ruin you. If you hurt her one more time, I will take her so far away from you that you won't see so much an eyelash of hers in this lifetime. I will take her away and then I will come for you. And when that happens, when that happens you bas***d, you better run. Run like the wind and don't look back because I am going to make you cry tears of blood. I am going to dig your out of your rat hole and kill you slowly. Of course, anyone who has ever looked upon you favourably with also die. I am going to destroy every hair on your body and eat the rest of your for breakfast. SO, FIX IT. FIX IT and don't ever let it come to this. Don't make me come to you. Don't make me see her cry again. DO NOT, listen, NEVER test my patience. I will cut you, understand?"

[Scene 2: Large bedroom with lavish furniture. A petite form is leaning on the sofa left, appearing no different from the furnishings]

"Jodha...Jodha. Where the f**k are you?"

Jalal all but broke open the bedroom door and true to her nature, the rumored stiffened Miss Jodha did not make a movement.

"What did you say to him? What did you say to your lover?"

Her swollen eyes were evidence of her dried tears but, of course, there was no show of emotion in front of him. She stared him down with a straight face on. As if his sharp edged snarks went right through her. As if she was a hard rock incapable of feeling, she simply absorbed whatever complaints he had.

She waited for him to empty his heart. Then, "I will apologize on his behalf", she bowed.

"Why are you apologizing? What wrong have you done to be so meek in front of me?" She knew he could barely look past his bubbling frustration. She knew he wasn't thinking straight so she left him go off. Like always, it seemed she was his target to blow off irrelevant steam.

"What did he say? He's going to ruin me? I am your husband. We're having a baby, what is he going to do? If I want to keep it then I will. If I want to abort it then I will do as my heart desires. Who is that bas***d to tell me what to do? This is your fault! All of it is your fault! I told you not to keep a pet lion in the house. I told I would pay for your wh**es so get a submissive one. Why the f**k did you have entangle your hair with such a dense bas***d. He really loves you it seems. Pity he doesn't know what a wicked soul you really are! 'Hurry up and end it'. How many times did I warn you exactly? Anyway, what is done is done. Starting this second, don't even dream of crying in front of him. You haven't shed a tear for me even once and you cry your heart out for that man? You don't give me half a crooked smile but you gwaff by his side like his jokes light up your world. From now on, don't even dream of showing your tears to other men. Only cry for me, smile because of me. With other men just, sleep. Sleep with them all you want, understand?"

"No. I don't understand", she finally broke her eternal silence. "I am going to cry if I am upset but I promise it won't be because of you. I am going to laugh a lot. I am going to live well and for a long time. I will handle my own problems so, go back to your girlfriend. Go sleep on your side of her bed and pretend nothing happened. Very soon you will start believing this lie. Go, I don't need you".

"What about the baby?" he asked as a mere afterthought.

"When we made love I was conscious and awake. That was my decision so I am going to take responsibility. Don't you worry, I won't make you out to be the bad guy. Neil, I will handle him. You go back to living your life".

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am liking this story, plzz update soon. pm me when u do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome story bt make things clear lot of confusions are there plz make story as simple and understandable and make it large and plz pm me and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i liked 1st chappy..
plz updte soon
n pm me if possible

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