Aankhon se aankhon tak- First sighting #4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aankhon se aankhon tak ka safar.
Jo Saras ke liye kaafi lamba lag raha tha.
Aur Kumud ke liye bahut sahi lag raha tha.
Saras ke paas thaa sirf Ek ehsaas
Jiss ka chehra dhoondne wo chala aaya
Aur Ratnanagari aa kar tho wo mugdh ho gaya
Sab ka pyaar paakar, jaise bachpan laut aaya
Aawaz sunne ko mila, sangeet bhi
par chehre ka darshan baki tha abhi
jis koshish mein usne khaayi ek halki thappad bhi
jise poora karne ke liye uss ne li ek kasam bhi

The run up to the darshan
Saras sees her face that night when she falls asleep next to him, but with hair on her face covering a full view.

He hears her beautiful singing.
He finds an unlikely ally in her when he helps that little boy from drowning.
He touches her hand when VC keeps it in his.
She comes to say thanks for saving his dad but goes away.
She even meets him outside near the temple.
She applies haldi on him.
He gets paired with her for kite-flying.
He finally outs a deadline on himself that he will see her face before dusk on Uttarayan.

And when it finally happens, what a sight it was.
Their eyes meet.
Kumud is sulking silently and shy at the same time.
Saras has her hand in his so she cant run away.
He is totally mesmerized and taken in by her beauty.
She was caught unawares and it just happened.
Confession comes out that her voice brought him to Ratnanagari.
Best part: Saras's beautiful smile that said everything on what he has been going through and what is happening to him. He has been running away from rishte but this ehsaas and her beauty swept him off his feet and he was bowled over by that maiden.
Will post the link soon.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czoyRSXlLqs[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... Shanthi ... 🤗



How Beautifully you have described that " First Sighting " ... 👏


That Most Awaited Moment ...The MOMENT of Seeing her Beautiful Face for the First time... ❤️


That moment which was the Reply to the Challenge thrown at him ...

Something which had almost taken the form of a " Mission " to be Accomplished for Saras ...


and when it finally Happened on the Auspicious Occassion of UTTARAYAN ...

what a Beautifully Executed Scene it was ... Filled with loads of Excitement ... Anticipation ...

and finally Pleasure coupled with a Warm Satisfaction ... at a Mission well accomplished ... 😊







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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you twila ji.
Sent you a pm. Can u please check.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfectly said Santhi...😊

thanku for bringing back those magical moments, and describing them so beautifully 👏

such a beautiful pair, left us mesmerized by their elegance, beauty and such crackling chemistry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Those magical unforgettable moments are a treasure trove that SLB has left for us to watch again and again and enjoy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written, Santhi, the pehli nazar which was so special
She teased him, tantalized him, taunted him, haunted him all for that pehli jhalak

And finally when he did see her, she was like the chand, partially covered by the badal

And he had those few moments of admiring his sleeping beauty as she slept unaware that

She herself had come to him, to help him fulfill his Vaada of seeing her face !

Thank you for reviving the memories of the memorable first scene!

There is an elegance and beauty in this scene

And your description of this yaadgaar lamha is poetic


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Posted: 11 years ago
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One of the best ever turning points in the tale of Saraswatichandra described in a beautiful manner.. Well said Shanti Ji.. 😊

That moment he looks at her face and we get completely drenched in the world of SaMud.. The beautiful Kumud and the man himself with her hands in his.. and that mesmerising BGM, its an asset to the whole situation.. Lovely!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chand khel raha tha luka chippi jaise badalon mai
uske khawabo mai un aankhon ne sataya tha is kadar
aaj woh pura chand jab jheel mai utar aaya tha
kamal ki pankhudi apna akas chupa na saki...


thanks doston

just read that makar sakranti is celebrated a day after the paush poornima
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Originally posted by: annete

Chand khel raha tha luka chippi jaise badalon mai
uske khawabo mai un aankhon ne sataya tha is kadar
aaj woh pura chand jab jheel mai utar aaya tha
kamal ki pankhudi apna akas chupa na saki...


thanks doston


BAHUT hi sunder Anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: annete


Chand khel raha tha luka chippi jaise badalon mai
uske khawabo mai un aankhon ne sataya tha is kadar
aaj woh pura chand jab jheel mai utar aaya tha
kamal ki pankhudi apna akas chupa na saki...



thanks doston

just read that makar sakranti is celebrated a day after the paush poornima



Anu ...



These lines are BEAUTIFUL ... Just PERFECTT for the situation ... 👏

and the line about " Kamal ki Pankhudi... " fits our Kumud soo well ...

How do you find such Perfect Fits ... ?? 😊

Hats Off !!



@ Bold in Pink ... So that is why they chose the Day of UTTARAYAN ...

Thanks for this piece of Info ... 😊

The team of makers and Writers were so well read ,that i am sure they would have known about this Significance and accordingly CHOSE the occassion of Makar Sankranti ...


After all the situation was Significant ... and it demanded the Right timing ... for the first look of the " Poora Chaand Sa Chehraa " of our Sundari ... 😊


Thanks once again for such Beautiful lines , my friend ... 🤗

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