Arshi ff - PERFECT 'DULHAN' * PART (8) up... 8/6* pg 82 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Going to be interesting..
Update soon
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Interesting promo...thanks for the PM
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Friends, my boards are starting from tomorrow till March end..
Hence, I won't be able to give you Any update & also will be irregular in commenting..
Pls understand..
But ya, you will get one more update, within two days, that is,


FEISTY TANI
FILWE-> Mrs. Anjali Vivian Gupta!!
Princess of SM -> Tarey Marriage...


Here you go:




Part (4) -> TRIP TO LUCKNOW..


AT NIGHT,
RAIZADA MANSION


"Fine, Nani".. ASR spoke..
Here, Nani's heart flipped with joy; finally, after an hour of arguments, she was able to convince her stubborn grandson to visit Lucknow..

"I'll finish my deal & pay a visit to Gomti Sadan; but remember, I am not going to say yes blindly..
If she fits to be my wife, then only I'll accept her..
And NO ARGUMENTS on this topic.." Arnav announced while moving towards his SUV...

Arnav was about to go out when Nani ordered them, "Reach Gomti Sadan at 10 am tomorrow morning. If you've meeting, then cancel it.. Akash bitwa see to it, that your arrogant brother reaches there on time..."

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SUV

Arnav was driving SUV while Akash was sitting besides him.
Akash saw his bhai smirking,
"Bhai, you're soon going to be a married man.."

"No.. I don't want any SPINELESS girl of some small town..
Once back to Delhi, I'll reject her, that's it.."

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AR, LUCKNOW

"Shut up, Aman. Will you?
ASR has till now not reached lucknow..
And that good for nothing Manager has finalised all the wrong designs.. He was not listening to any of the designers & subordinates..
I'm going to KILL you &
That good for nothing Sissy
GIRLFRIEND of ASR
Once I reach Delhi..
At 9 pm, I've to reach Office to put two ounce of brain in that
stupid Manager cum BROTHER of LAVANYA KASHYAP...
Why don't your ASR hire an efficient assistant for him who can handle this branch??"

"Calm down Miss. Gupta.
I'm really sorry for the inconvenience. ASR is on his way to lucknow.."

"If he don't attend tomorrow's meeting,
I'm seriously going to reveal everything to him.
I'm fed up of his bimbo girlfriend.."
Saying this, Khushi cut the call without waiting for Aman's reply..

Here, Aman gulped in fear & called ASR & informed him about the meeting..

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SUV

Arnav was driving the car when Aman called him & informed about the Designs change..
But before he could inform him that its all Manager's doing, ASR cut the call..

Here, Aman was relaxing that he didn't had to inform him,
But what he didn't know was that Lavanya has already brain-washed him saying everything is that Designer's fault..

As he pulled down the brakes with force in anger hearing the fiasco from Aman, his car broke down..

None of the brothers knew how to change tyre..
And looking around, they didn't think they will get a mechanic..

Akash reassured his brother that he will search for one & went away..

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KHUSHI ON SCOOTY

Khushi was cursing that stupid Manager as well as Aman, not to forget Lavanya, when her scooty stopped.
She got frustated. Damn.
In hurry, I forgot to put the extra bottle of petrol.
Now what?
She saw the grocers store.

Grocer uncle -> Arey beta, what happened?

Khushi-> Nothing Kaka.
Actually, I wanted a favour.
Please keep my scooty inside for tonight. Babuji will take it afterwards.

Grocer -> No problem, bitiya..

Khushi walked a little..
"It Would be so nice if I manage to get a lift at least outside this Godakia Lane where I can get an auto. Here, no auto is going to stop..
She was thinking this when she saw someone kicking the tyre of his car.
She laughed to herself..
"Looks like his car is punctured."

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STREET

"Excuse me, do you know any garage in the vicinity?"
Asked a tired Akash to Payal who went to Preeto's house to take some necessities as the prospective groom was supposed to come tomorrow..

Payal looked at Akash, smiled,
"Yes, there is one in front of our house.."

Payash made their way to Payal's home, stealing glances at each other..
None of them spoke a word as they were busy in doing
something else >>BLUSHING!

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SUV

Arnav groaned in frustation, waiting for Akash. He kicked the punctured tyre with his leg when someone tapped his shoulder,
"Tyre Puncture??"

Arnav turned back to see a girl smiling at him, who was none other than our Khushi!

KHUSHI'S OUTFIT


Arshi kept staring at each other...
But as they come to thrir senses, both got angry at their reaction..
While Khushi hid her irritation as she needed lift, Arnav did not..
He scowled at her & shouted out, "Get lost.."

Khushi was offended,
"Ek to madad karo upar se gali bhi suno.."

"Want help in changing tyre?
Anyway, you're not getting any mechanic here.." Khushi raised an eye-brow at him..

Taking Arnav's silence as affirmation, Khushi started to change tyre..

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OUTSIDE GOMTI SADAN

Payash reached Gomti Sadan. Payal pointed out to Happyji, but came to know that Happyji was out of town.
Payal looked apologetically at Akash, when Akash nodded its ok..

Payal asked him whether he Would like to come at her home for tea..
Akash followed Payal to Gomti Sadan..

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ARNAV'S SUV

Arshi were sitting in Arnav's SUV & KHUSHI WAS DRIVING...

"Are you sure you're from lucknow? I mean you're driving so swiftly.. Wo.. you're..."

Khushi completed his sentence,
"From small town & how do I know driving?"
She chuckled.
"So, you lose, Mr..
See we reached.."

Arnav looked around. He saw a small inning & was shell shocked.
"What do you think I'll live HERE??" He barked.

Khushi again chuckled.
"Two blocks away..'
Seeing Arnav confused,
"Your manzil is two blocks away..
And as you lose regarding I can't drive, so this is your punishment.
Push the car till There YOURSELF..
I know you have a reputation to maintain, hence just go till outside & then you can drive in..
You promised on your sister, remember that..
So bye, Mr. See you soon.."

Saying this Khushi hopped in an auto
while Arnav fulfilled his words by pushing the car thinking,
"How the hell Aman pushed this car? Its so tough.
What if someone sees Arnav Singh Raizada pushing the car?
Urggh! How on earth that village girl knew driving???"

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GOMTI SADAN

"Buaji, I have a guest with me. You sit with him. I'll just make tea for him.
He needs a mechanic & after coming here, I came to know Happyji is out of town.."

"Its ok Payal bitiya..
Ae babua, you sit, NandKishore. So, what do you do?"
Asked buaji.

Akash answered, "work in a fashion design company.."

Buaji patted her head, "Hamri sankadevi bhi oohi karat hai - fashion design.."

Akash got confused, "who sankadevi?"

"Younger sister of Payaliya, NandKishore.. What's your name?"

"A..." Before he could complete his mobile rang & looking at the caller, he almost shivered.
"Oh shit! In all this, I totally forgot about bhai.."
But as Arnav spoke, he got relaxed that his bhai didn't scold him;
But poor boy! Didn't knew the bomb was yet to be dropped!!

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ARNAV'S HOTEL ROOM

Arnav reached his 5 star hotel & called Akash..

He almost forgot about Akash, he called him to inform about the meeting..

"Akash, you know right, how much this client is important to us..
We've been working on it since three months..
I've to meet the Head Designer too. Have to give her some important sketches in person. Can't afford any leakage..
So, I WON'T be able to reach prospector's house.."

Akash was nooding, "yes bhai" from the start;
but hearing the last line, his eyes popped out.
He stammered,
"Bhai, I know how much this meeting is important to you...
But.. wo...Nani... I mean, bhai, Gomti Sadan..."

Arnav got what his brother wanted to convey him..
"Don't worry about that; see I've a plan..
You will go to Gomti Sadan.."

Akash fixed his glasses & breathed a sigh of relief,
"Ha bhai, I'll definitely come with you to Gomti Sadan for your moral support..
That means you're coming here, right?"

Arnav laughed under his breathe, Moral Support? From Akash?
Then he spoke firmly,
"No Akash, I'm not coming..
Don't worry about nani. She won't come to know about this..
And, you're going to Gomti Sadan as ARNAV, Not Akash..."

Hearing this, Akash stood up from his place in shock, while shouting,
"WHAT!"
While Arnav just confirmed his statement, "You heard it right Akash.." & cut the call..

Here, Akash stood paralysed..
Madhumati, who was sitting opposite to Akash, asked him,
"Kaa baat hai, NandKishore?"

Akash came out of his shock..
" Where's Gomti Sadan?" He asked in daze..

Mqdhumati laughed out loud,
"This is Gomti Sadan, NandKishore..
But, why are you asking it, babua?"

All colours drained out of Akash's face..
This is Gomti Sadan..
And that wonderful girl is bhai's prospective suitor..
Wow! She's so wonderful..
But one sec, bhai is going to reject her..
He felt sad..

And here, buaji put two & two together & exclaimed..
"You're Arnav bitwa!!
Payaliya, he's Arnav bitwa, your prospective suitor!!"

While Akash just sat there motionless fearing the consequences of this lie..
Akash came out of his trance when Payal handed him tea..
He looked up to see Payal blushing.. He too blushed..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oopps I double posted.

I got distracted by Akash and Payals shy smiles at each other and Khushi yelling at Aman just like ASR.😆😆😆
Edited by zafi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Really really nice n amazing update!!!!!

So Everyboy is considering Aakash as Arnav...Intresting!!😛

I loved Arshi's meeting!!!!!!😉
Edited by sondaryalakshmi - 12 years ago
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Amazing update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
Arhi scene was fantastic.
I really enjoyed that.
So Arnav asked Akash to pretend to be him.😆😆
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...

loved blasting khushi...

khushiz outfie was good...

arnav is so shocked looking khushi driving...

aakash and payal both blushing blushin

finally they are goona be wd their prospective suitor...

ALL THE BEST DEAR DO WELL IN EXAM...
Edited by marium-zamamii - 12 years ago
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unresed my comment at page 22
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow cute update
Akashi and Payal is really a good pair
And about arshi we have to wait and see what's going to happen
Totally loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh what a tangled web we weave...this is going to be a fun ride...

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