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Posted: 12 years ago
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mein wapas aa gayi ek nayi story lekar!!!! 😃
and finally mera OS on kriyaansh ke upar likhne ka sapna poora ho gaya!!!!
a proper os on kriyaansh!!!!
so here we go!!!!😃

It Just Happened

i said just kiss me...
wat??
kiss me damn it...
and den he took her pinkish lips in his and sucked her lower lips... biting it... making her moan in pain...
she moved her hand up to his hair and he pinned her to a nearby wall and moved his hand into her red top squeezing her waist... he pulled her more into her and kissed her he made his way into her mouth and their tongue played with eachother...
he pulled her more not leaving her and roaming his hand all over her waist...
they kissed to eternity...
they left wen they were out of breath...
and looked at eachother... he somewer felt happy but she it seemed like she wasnt happy...she had tears in her eyes... tears of guilt,tears of sadness... she immediately left from their leaving a confused rey behind...
rey- ye kya hua isse? pehle khud bolti hai and den aise sudden se chali jaati hai,...
and den rey goes to his flat... before entering...
should i go speak to her...? kahin i should have not...
and den rey looks in the direction of the flat opposite to his...
abhi nahi... its better if i speak to her tomorrow morning... rey eneter in but some wer his heart wasn't agreeing with him... it told him to go speak to her right now...ask her wat ur fault was...?
but his mind it said... y do u wanna speak...its not ur fault... u did as she told... just forget it...go speak to her in the morning... and in this battle heart won!!!!
on the other hand kria in her room...
kr- 😭😭i m sorry... i had to do this... i m sorry...and den she becomes unconscious...
rey enters the flat and searches for her...but she isnt seen anywer... not in her room too...and den he goes on checks the balcony wer he finds her sitting at the corner...
he goes next to her with his head bent down...-- look kria i m sorry... i didnt knew that it wil turn out to b something like this... i m sorry... and den luks at her and see's that she is not at all responding...he shakes her... taps her cheek but of no use...
then he notices her hand... it was cut... damn it was cut...
he immediately takes her to the hospital...
all the while he just chanted... kria kria utho... plzz kria get up... i m sorry for what i did,... get up kria plzzz get up... kria plzz get up...
after sometime...
doc- reyaansh
rey- yes doctor how is kria now? is she fine? can i go meet her?
doctor- yes reyaansh but before that she asked me to give this to you and has told me to inform u that only after reading this letter u can go meet her...
and he hands rey a letter...
rey- ye letter...kuch toh gadbad hai...
and den goes to F.E. and sits... and den opens the letter and reads...
dear rey,
aap sorry mat bolo ismein aapki koi galti nahi hai... jo bhi hua u did it according to my wish... but m sorry rey... this shouldn't have happened...
all i want to say is you don't deserve me rey... u don't... i never loved u rey never did...
rey was shocked...he thought she must b joking... but then he continued...
don't be shocked it's the truth... that day wen i confessed u my feeling it was all fake... i never had any feeling for you... it was all a plan... so that i can become a part of your company... so that i can have a share in your company... so that i can be a part of your dance academy...
my dreams of being a dancer was true... and i never wanted to do this... but i did this for my boyfriend...
boyfriend?? she has a boyfriend...and and all this now tears made it's way out...
yes rey i have a boyfriend... actually i had... i was madly and deeply in love with him... and wen he came to noe abt my dream he asked me to do this...
how could u kria?? how could u? u used me? u played wid my emotions...😭
i m sorry rey i didn't mean to... but i fell in love with u... u made me too... and i didn't realized it... but i couldn't ditch him...but he did... he used me...
day before yesterday wen i came home late drunk it was all because of him...
and i even decided to tell you about all this but i couldn't... coz i was scared to loose you... and i don't want to loose you... i don't want you to be hurt... it's better if i be away from you... coz if i tel u the truth ull b hurt... but i can't do this... i can't so i took this step rey...
i love you and always will... good bye rey forever!!!!!...
your...
baatcuttee
rey den notices it's not complete...he understands that she wrote this letter after she cut her hand... rey had tears all through his eyes... he couldn't digest wat ever he read... he couldn't believe his baatcutter can do something like this...
he loved her so truly but she she used him... only for that one guy who ditched her... he felt as if he was the unluckiest guy... he felt sooo angry... he felt like dying... he hated her... he hated her for coming in his life... he hated for making him fall in love... he hated for loving her... he hated coz she filled colors in his life... he hated her for everything... but his heart it betrayed him...
his heart kept yelling no u love her... u love her for evrything she has done...good,bad for everything...
but his mind kepy yelling at his heart... how can he love her... she used him... she used him for that bloody fame and for that guy...
heart- but she loved him also!!!
rey was now completely in a mess... he wanted to hate her...
he wanted to hate for everything,... but he couldn't... all he could say was i love u still...
rey den gets up and wipes his tears and goes to the ward wer his love was kept...
before entering he makes himself straight...
he opens the door and finds his baatcutter lost in deep thought...he goes to her...
rey- baatcutter...
kria luks at him and makes out that he has been crying...
kria- rey i m...
rey- baatcutter y did u do this? agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? take care of urself... and turns...
kria thinks that he is about to leave and turns her face side ways and starts weeping...
rey but goes near the window...-- kria look v get only one life and v must enjoy it... v must not shed our tears on things that wasn't ours... v must make every part of it memorable...and wat ever happens there is a reason behind it... life teaches u many things... it takes u through different phrase... sometimes good and sometimes bad... ull have to face many problems...but this doesn't mean that ull end ur life... u must deal with it sometimes u might think that u don't deserve something but that isn't true... u must face the reality and live ur life to the fullest...
all this while kria was crying and listening to him,...somewer she smiled... she smiled thinking that he knows her so wel...
kria- rey...
rey stopped and wiped his tears...
kria- rey plz
and rey turns around...
kria- rey i m...
rey- comes to her and hugs her...
kria while hugging him back-- i m sorry rey... i m really sorry... i shouldn't have done this... plz forgive me rey plzz../...
rey breaks the hug and leaves...
kria cries...
kria- universe ji ye meinne kya kar dia... i have hurted him... and continues crying...
after sometime doctor comes and says u r fine and u r discharged... take care of urself...
kria- thank u doc...but so soon?
doc hands her a letter...
just keep quite and come down...
and den kria is discharged... but to her suprise rey has sent a driver to pick her up...
she goes in that and the driver hands over her a letter
don't b shocked and go wer ever he takes u...
the driver takes her to rey's flat in a wheel chair...
kria is shocked but then she is taken to her room...oops rey's room...
and he leaves...
kr- rey...
and then lights are switched on... she see's balloon's all over... (imagine just the way they showed in D3)
rey cums to her and says until u r fine i'll take care of u,,,,and turns to leave...
but is stopped as kria holds his hand...
kr- look rey i noe that u r angry on me... and u should be... but just answer one question y r u taking care of me??u still love me no??
rey-no...
kria- den y all this?
rey- bcoz u did this for me...
kria- any random person who'll do anything for u or repeats the same u wil take care of them??
rey silence...
kria- answer me rey...
rey- kria just keep quite and free's his hand...
kria- fine rey den if u don't love me then i won't stay here nor i want ur concern... and it's better to die than to live with u... its better to die than hurting u...
she goes opesn a drawer and takes a scissors out...
rey- wat the hell kria y r u doing this?
kria- i don't want to live rey... i can't see u hurt bcoz of me...nd starts crying... she tries to cut the bandage...
rey- kria just stop it and takes the scissors frm her hand... are u nuts kria? y do u want to hurt urself...u think by seeing u hurt ill b happy? if ull go away frm me den ull b happy?
then let me tell you miss ghai u r wrong... i love u and always wil... i can never hate u... and i can only care for u so much no one else... after wat ever u did with me i still can only love u i can't hate u...
before rey could speak any further kria goes and kisses him...
rey is shocked but starts kissing her back...
he kisses he fiercely and sucks her lip...
he takes her to the bed and starts moving his hand round her waist...
they are out of breath and break the kiss but rey starts kissing her all over her face, her neck...
he then moves his hand under her top to her back and brings his hand back and realizes wat they are doing... he then stops...
kria having no sensation opens her eyes only to dee rey getting up with a guilt...
she gets up and pushes rey on the bed and goes on top of him and starts kissing him all over his face...
they kiss till eternity...!!!! and slowly pull the bedsheet on them...
next day morning wen they get up...
rey smiles over kria seeing her cuddling more into him...
den rey kisses her forhead...
kria gets up... they stare at eachother for sometime...
kr- i m sorry rey...
rey-shhh kria... forget it... it just happened... it wasn't ur fault...
any ways m happy i got my love...
kria blushes and pecks his lips and hugs him...
rey- hayyyeee agar meri har morning aise hi hogi toh i m always ready to address u as my love instead of baatcuuter...
kr- nahi u call me baatcutter...
rey- accha kyun??
kr- coz i love that name given by u!!! aur wo spcl hai!!!! and hides her face,...
rey- uff u luk soo cute wen u blush !!!
kria- again pecks his lips...but this time rey kisses her!!!!this time it was kiss of hapinness for kria!!!! after breaking the kiss
kri- rey this is my third kiss!!!!
rey-accha toh saari kisses mere saath hi thi na... wasie baatcutter this is not my third kiss...
kria-- reyyy😲😲and hits him on his chest...
rey- arrey arrey baatcutter suno toh!!! this is my first kiss with my love!!! with my baatcutter happy wala actaul wala kiss!!!!with my would be wife i have had three kisses par ye mera first hai...
kria- rey😲
rey- yes kria u heard it right...so miss kria ghai would u become mrs.kria reyaansh singhania!!!!
will u marry me??
kria- rey!!!!
rey- kria tabse rey rey boley jaa rahi ho... say yes or no...
kria- reyyy i love you and she kisses him on his cheeks!!!!
rey- arrey aise nahi and he pulls her and kisses her and den hugs her!!!!

khatam!!!!yaaayyy mera pehla os on KR and second os in forum!!!!!
i noe thoda zyada lamba kheench dia...but 😛
so guys!!!! i have completed 1 year 1 month and 3 days on IF!!!!
and this journey has been amaaazzziiinnnggg!!!!!!!!!!!
so as a dedication to all my friends o IF jisse mein jaanti hun and jisse nahi!!!
thank u guys!!! for ur support!!!!
and i can also say that IF just happened!!!!!
ok!!! ab mereko sabke comments chaiye!!!! and agar accha laga toh krupiya do hit the like button!!!! criticism allowed!!! 😉
nikku di i hope ye romance aapko pasand aaya ho!!!! 🤗
Edited by arsha_simran - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
leshh
unlesh
beautifull os👏
ye tera 1st os haii rweally😲
mujhe yakeen nahe hoingg ree😲 😲
coming to the update
its awesome
u protrayed kria and rey emotions very well
and the way u started direct kiss see hayee☺️
so romanticcc
lekin kria ye sab bet keliye kiya huh
rey is cryingg
haww kria ne suicidee karlee nahii😭
and then leeter padke shattered poor him
and kria ne rey ko sry kaha but rey is nt talking
wo manne ne ko pure kosshish karinggg
finally manngayee
then unke romancee hayeee
i loved this os
aur likha karoo sonuuu🤗
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res
unres..

Sims ye tera first OS hai..?? 😲 😲

I mean really tune iss se pehle kbhi bhi OS nhi likha..??

Haww mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha..anyways

awsum OS yaar..

I truely loved it..

Haye the way u wrote reys emotion nd kriyas too..

And the way u started the ff direct kiss se..

Nice romance loved it..letters awsum..nice..

Ab ese aur likhte ja OS..

Nd ya i hate u.. 😉
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Beautiful os 👏
Loved t very much 😊
Well written ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Awesome os
So romantic cute adorable
Kriyaanshki har ek story beautiful hi hoga itni roaking couple jo hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Cute story !! 😳
Rey's unconditional love for Kriya was a treat to read about !! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
awesome dear.. Love it.. Beautifully written.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Nice os love the concept it was really sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...!
Loved the storyline...! amazingly written...!
i didn't mind that it was long because it was a superb and outstanding...!
just still amazed by the whole story...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was wonderful and fantastic os... loved it

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