FF: MISSION IN A PURGATORY - UPDATED NOTE -pg8 - 25/1/14 *NEW* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
The update was ddhasu!
Sherra zina zain karan! Chorom! Gud work behna! 😃
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
ohkay...
although no arjun..
yet lots of relevations!
interesting...
n ya.. not to 4gt my dhamki..
if u dnt updt d raesha ...
i wl stop cmmnting on this too...n break ogf ur akkel dant with a hammer...haha..
n ya..plz.. u broke ur rawte's kasam!!??
fie on thee!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
ohkay...
although no arjun..
yet lots of relevations!
interesting...
n ya.. not to 4gt my dhamki..
if u dnt updt d raesha ...
i wl stop cmmnting on this too...n break ogf ur akkel dant with a hammer...haha..
n ya..plz.. u broke ur rawte's kasam!!??
fie on thee!.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
awesome update sumu..
lov it..
waiting for arjun bro revelations ..
his pov more pls..
arni ahem waiting ji more wala..
like button not working..
update soon...
waiting !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
🤢IMPORTANT😡😭💔

ok!! those who have comented.. a big big big thank you to you...
I know you guys are good people.. those of you are ignorant yet!!
yes!! I am complaining to you and about you...

honestly!! Have you people got any ideas how hurt and pissed off I am at the moment..!!??

I use a basic two year old phone, that has this irritating word limit and is slower than the scurrying ant, who i have a very good intention of crushing below my feet, due to the baggage of immense frustration stashed up in my heart..

I let it go, because I am not cruel... but you guys I wont let go until u give me the solution!

with, terrible toothache, and an overload of studies...(improvement surely brings reward!! 😡)

I dont hesitate in updating...

My PC has crashed, wow!! and my parents aren't repairing until our beloved zebbie0504. has finished her exams..

does anyone has the faintest idea, how stupid is it making excuses and rushing to my aunt's house, in order to update!!
terrible!!

well with all this technical locha all i ask from you, is a few words of encouragement, probably a bit of healthy criticism and even its a on word coment I wouldn't mind!! I'd be ecstatic...

I am not accusing anyone here!!
I know everyone has there own bit of problems and priorities here and there..

what i am saying is... even if you are hating what i am writing, please state it to my face...

I feel so stupid and immature with this desperation but again, all this silence is too painful for an under-developed writer...

and with the show nearing its end... I am hurting ok!!

please try to understand...

Pardon, if i bored you or disturbed you with the mindlss rantings of a mindless teen..

It's just that i look up to you guys to hold me when I'm falling..

p.s after I post ch-5.. it'll be a PM Update!

sorry again.. and thank you for reading this..

love,
Sumaya 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter5
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: bgargate

Unres...

ahannn... very interesting concept ... a musical story ... 👏👏
Karan - Arjun in dhamakedar mode 😉
Phone shop part was funny 😆😆😆
Karan ka bhi kuh past hai 😳
Zina ka dance
Arjun TV par Zina ka dance dekh raha tha 😲
Anjali bhi hai 😊
Simmi ki behen aa rahi hai 😉
Supercoool 👏


thanks for the coment tai..
yese karan ka past hai and bohot bada past hai..
and that will be the climax of my story..
to be really honest ye story Arjun n Zina ki hai hi nhji..

it mostly depends on Karan... par ham apne shera ko thodi na bhula sakte hai.. 😉

wait up for a few parts plz...

the track will get clearer

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