Full of love:Kabir-Kusum,Danny-Kumari OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Full of love
Most of the fans say that Danny looks better with Kumari and Kabir would look great with Kusum.Unfortunately in the show Saraswatichandra this won't work out as Danny & Kusum are a couple now.So I decided to write an OS on Danny-Kumari & Kabir-Kusum.Hope the Kabir fans who are waiting for Kabir's love track will be happy.


"I am Danny.I and Kusum were close friends. Seeing our friendship my parents as well as her parents decided to get us married.We both did not refuse it. At the Valentine party,our marriage was announced.We got blessed by our parents".

"Once i found a Valentine's day card in my cousin brother Kabir's book.It was for Kusum.I was shocked when i realized that Kabir loves Kusum.Poor Kabir.He sweated a lot when i found the card he kept for Kusum".
"I'm sorry Danny",Kabir was really tense.
"Do you love Kusum?"I asked seriously.
He took some seconds to reply,
"Yes,i love her.I wanted to propose to her on the Valentine's day.So I kept this card for her.But at the Valentine party i saw you both together.So i did'nt confess my love to her.Please don't tell this to Kusum.I won't be able to face her if she comes to know this".

"I did'nt know how to react.I realized that when i and Kusum exchanged rings at the Valentine's party,Kabir was crying out in pain.I pity Kabir.I was helpless as I did'nt know what to do.Because at the Valentine's party our parents got us officially engaged".

Once at the coffee house i looked at her and asked her whether she had dated anyone before.She was silent for a moment.
Slowly she replied".
"Not really.But i used to have one way affair".
"One way affair?"I did'nt understand it properly.
"I used to love Kabir Vyas;your cousin".
I was shocked.I felt that my head was spinning.
"Did you not tell him that you love him?"I asked.
"No.I realized that he does'nt love me.He never looked at me".
I could'nt bear this secret for so long.
"You think that Kabir never looked at you.But actually without knowledge Kabir had always looked at you.He watched you not with his eyes,but with his heart"

"What are you saying?Have you gone mad?"She asked.
She grinned at me.
She took it as a joke,but i wanted her to understand the seriousness of the matter.
"Kabir also loves you",I revealed the truth to her.
She was shocked.
I continued,"He told me recently that he loves you.He was going to propose to you at the Valentine party.But seeing us together he decided to sacrifice his love".
Her lips shivered,"Kabir loves me?Is it true?"
"Yes".
Her tears flowed down like a river.
"I know that your tears are your love for him.You love Kabir now also.Since you thought that he is not meant for you,you accepted my proposal..Your real love is Kabir.Right?"
"Danny!"
She found it difficult to face me.
"Don't delay any more.Go and tell him that you love him".
Kusum was confused as she felt that she was cheating me.
"Don't be upset about me.I will be happy if you get your true love".
She tried to calm herself believing my words and ran to see Kabir with a red rose.
In that sunny morning they met each other.Kusum looked at Kabir's eyes.Tenderly his eyes gazed into her face.It was an emotional moment for her,so she could'nt look at his face directly.
Her heart reminded her,"Kusum..confess you love for Kabir.He is your true love".
When Kabir tried to walk away she ran to him giving him a lovely surprise which Kabir never expected to get.
"Kabir,i love you".
What more can surprise Kabir?He felt that he is in a dream world.
"What?"He could not believe it.
"I have always loved you.But thinking that you don't love me i kept a distance with you".

Kabir was in shock and confusion.

"Danny?"

She replied,

"Danny is just my friend.When my parents and his parents decided to unite us as a couple I did'nt refuse it as I thought your name was not written in my destiny.

But when I realized that you also loved me secretly like I loved you,I could'nt think of anything else other than coming to you and confessing my love.Kabir..."

He was very emotional.

She waited for his reply.
He looked at the red rose she was holding.Then he took it from her.
He looked at her face with a smile.
and confessed looking into her eyes,
"I love you Kusum.I have always loved you.You will be my love forever".
Kusum became very emotional.
He caressed the red rose and said,"This red rose means a lot for me and I will cherish this sweet moment forever".
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Kusum and Kabir held each others hands and shared a beautiful eye lock.
That was the most beautiful moment in their life.

"I saw two eyes witnessing Kabir-Kusum's union.Kumari;my colleague.She was confused to see Kabir-Kusum together.
She ran away giving a confused look.I followed her secretly.I opened her book in her absence.I found the picture of a broken heart.Also a caption-I lost you Danny.
I realized that at the Valentine party there was one more person with broken heart.The sight of me and Kusum together prevented her also from confessing her love.She is none other than Kumari who loved me secretly.Everyone says that we should love the person who loves us.Kumari is the person who loves me the most.Now i also love her like crazy.She is my life now.Today i'm going to surprise her".

Kumari entered the room which was lit up with red lights and covered with cute balloons.She was truly surprised.She sat down and touched the balloons.I entered the room without her knowledge and stood near her.
"I love you Kumari".

Kumari was numb as she never expected me to say that to her.
I told her,"I am not joking Kumari.I really love you".

Slowly a smile appeared on her face.I rubbed her forehead with mine making her mine.
She was surprised to see me near her.
"Danny..you did this?"She asked me as if she could'nt believe it.
"Yes darling.I put balloons here as they look cute like you".
She blushed.
I gave her a "I love you' greeting.She was so happy.She treasured it.

I loved her facial expression.She was looking so cute.I kept looking at her.
My mind said,"Danny..this is your true love".

I have told her many times that i love her.But she never gets fed up of listening to me saying 'I love you' to her and i also never get bored of telling her 'i love you'.When ever I say 'I love you' to her she gets excited as if it was for the first time I tell her so.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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THNX FOR THE PM...I LOVED THE ASHU'S PIC THE MOST🤣 ACTUALLY UR PICS MADE ME TO REMEMBER OLD DAYS OF DEK SO SWEET SWEET SCENES OF THT SHW☺️
OK COMING TO THE POINT...THE WAY U WRITED THE STRY WAS VERY VERY NYC...YA THESE 2 COUPLES MATCH WID EACH OTHER. PERFECTLY...😆 WHN DANNY ENTERED THE SHW AND MET WID KUMARI..I THOUGHT THEY WOULD BE PAIRED UP BUT THE WRITERS..NO CMNTS ON THT😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS👏 thank you for making it on kusum-kabir n kumari-danny. Loved the pictures you put on. Its the first story i read after ManVeer. Great job! ⭐️do amke another one soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Romantic One.. 👏 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am willing to write more stories if I get readers.Which pair's ffs do u want?

Originally posted by: Anvijanya

Awesome OS👏 thank you for making it on kusum-kabir n kumari-danny. Loved the pictures you put on. Its the first story i read after ManVeer. Great job! ⭐️do amke another one soon😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am willing to write more stories if I get readers.Which pair's ffs do u want?

I am happy to read any of the souples FF but i want kusum n kabir as i am an ashish fan lol😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dont know who these "most fans" are.. was there any poll?
i started watching this show about the time when danny was falling in love with kusum.. and she trying to fight her obsession.. and now they are in love.. i think they make a really cute couple... and looking at their scenes they share some amazing chemistry..never noticed that with kumari.. i actually look forward to dansum scenes.. i would hate to see any u-turns in their love story..

as for kabir we are still trying to understand his character.. so far he has shown negative shades only.. and he seems to fancy ghuman 😕

i would think its too early to hook him up with any desai chokri...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Any of the couples FF means?U r an Ashish fan.So would youmind reading Kabir-Kumari OS?

Originally posted by: Anvijanya

I am happy to read any of the souples FF but i want kusum n kabir as i am an ashish fan lol😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Any of the couples FF means?U r an Ashish fan.So would youmind reading Kabir-Kumari OS?

whether its kabir-kusum or kabir-kumari but would like to read kabir kusum more cuz i think they really suit each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3643760/danny-kusum-kumari
These r the polls.Most of the viewers r not happy with Danny Kusum.Bcz b4 their track Danny was shown with Kumari.
U didn't comment on my OS😭

Originally posted by: mistrymachine

I dont know who these "most fans" are.. was there any poll?

i started watching this show about the time when danny was falling in love with kusum.. and she trying to fight her obsession.. and now they are in love.. i think they make a really cute couple... and looking at their scenes they share some amazing chemistry..never noticed that with kumari.. i actually look forward to dansum scenes.. i would hate to see any u-turns in their love story..

as for kabir we are still trying to understand his character.. so far he has shown negative shades only.. and he seems to fancy ghuman 😕

i would think its too early to hook him up with any desai chokri...


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