Swaron TS: Finally.. It Happened! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
loved it😳👏
amazing concept n beautifully written😃😳👏
plzzz update soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Hmm intresting concept... Looking forward for the next chap...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
AWosm pure pain
update soon plzz n scrap this time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
update soon plz
i want to read further
loved the concept
sharon's pain was beautifully penned
loved d way u have describe d story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome TS :)
Update sooon :)
Please do PM me when you update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
wow yaar..awesome concept!
and first chapter brilliantly written..
really excited to read more..
update whenever possible..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
hey pls update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2

Sharon- You don't love me..still..you used me na? You thought the girl won't ever understand... haina? I can't carry your sign in myself... or rather can't carry you around... you fooled me, you betrayed me!!!! You made my life hell... when you know I don't love you... and you also don't love me...so why you took advantage Swayam Shekhawat!!!!!! *cried* I will never forgive you... I don't want to see your face, I just don't want you to live.!!!

*screaming* Better it will be for my life...!!! You don't have a family...and you are alone... so why not leave your body to get dumped n your soul to move to HELL...because Heaven won't accept you!!!!!!

She was angry !!! They both were standing face to face...just behind her was a fencing and behind which bushes were there...Swayam was numb...he knew something like this will happen...

Swayam came close to her...n immediately held her shoulders...
Swayam- I don't care being killed Sharon Raiprakash... okay!!!!

He saw something and turned her around, now his back was resting on the fencing...and she shrugged him away and turned so that her back was facing him...
Sharon- Wohoa!!!! You got me...hmm intelligent Swayam!!!!

He jerked and winced a bit in pain but straightened himself when she faced him...
She took out the rifle/gun and he fell down and she shot just a second after!!!!!

She was shocked! He fell down straight on his stomach...with hell lot of blood coming out from his back... a knife stabbed in his back and also...the bullet in his forehead...

She looked at front...and found SHIVAM standing there...
Sharon *shocked* - Shivam...hey...yo..you...

From floor Swayam...
Swayam- I d..ddiint... us..used yy..ou...ittt w..as nn..ot me...e... I wass in thhe sttor...ee roo...m , tthh.iss iss doonee by.yy Sh..iv...am... [I didn't used you, it was not me, I was in the store room, this is done by Shivam]

Sharon' eyes widened...
Sharon- Shii..vam noo he cant...he can'tt...don'tt liee...

Swayam tried getting up...he held the fence and got up... Shivam came out and now was behind Sharon...
Swayam- Sharon...come to me... Shivam will.ki..ll you!!!

Sharon looked back...and found Shivam holding a gun straight in front of her eyes... She shifted back n Swayam held her...by her waist...and Sharon clutched his shirt..
Shivam came forward...held Sharon's wrist tightly...
Sharon- Shivam..leave me...you jerk!!! Leave... I said...I m your cousin...!
Shivam- For me just a matter of a night!!!!!! I got what I wanted now you should leave with the lover boy!!!!

Swayam closed his eyes...and mouthed... "I love you Sharon...I..ne..ver conf..essed..but...it's t...he Truth...I am so blessed that I am dying from your hands...but feel bad...thatt...Shivam...had a hand...alsoo...!!! I..I..Love...y..ouu..."

Shivam grabbed his collar...
Swayam left Sharon and held his hand.. Both had a fight...Swayam was in deep pain...not able to breathe properly! Sharon was just on the floor... Swayam fell down... taking the gun...Shivam from his back landed on him...and held his hand... due to immense pain Swayam couldn't fight more.. Shivam's hand was on his which was holding gun...Shivam forcefully pressed his thumb...in turn the bullet shot straight into Sharon's chest!!!!

"Aaahhh" she cried...
Swayam left the gun!!!
Swayam *Shouted*- Ss..hhar...onnn...ahh...

Sharon *tears*- Thnnks... Swaya...m...for giving me the punishment... Than...ksss...So..rryy!
Swayam breathed high but couldn't even reach her...Shivam laughed...

Swayam's hand brushed hers...but before she could react...her eyes closed with a smile...and Swayam with tears left to Heaven!

"And CUT IT!"

Came a voice from the back.. There was round applause they heard after that.. The entire set was cheering.. The director got up from his seat and walked to the trio applauding them.. Swayam and Sharon opened their eyes and got up with a wide grin on their faces.. Shivam and Swayam shared a friendly hug and so did Sharon and Shivam.. Shivam moved aside to attend his call.. Swayam then took Sharon in a bone brushing hug and so did she hide herself in his arms.. He left a tight peck on her head.. They broke apart when the director approached them..

Director: That was an Amazing shot by the two of you.. One take ok?! No doubt you'll are the Super-stars of today!

Swayam: Thank you so much Sir!

Sharon: It was our privilege to have done this movie with you..

Director: If we keep on praising each other I don't think we'll be able to go home tonight..

The three of them shared a warm laugh..

Director (to all): And with that Climax shot.. It's a wrap!!

All cheered and applauded all the hard work they all had put in.. Swayam wrapped his hand around Sharon's waist just like a protective husband would do.. Some came and congratulated them..

A.Director: See you'll tomorrow at the After Party then

Swayam: See you there!

Swayam and Sharon started moving to their respective vanity vans to get changed from the blood stained clothes they wore.. Soon enough they were all ready to travel back to their Home Sweet Home'.. As it was quite late Swayam had sent of the driver..

Swayam and Sharon started from the sets.. Sharon rest her head back as she was really tired after a full day hectic shoot.. Swayam glanced at her and slowly placed his hand on hers that was on her lap..

Swayam: Tired?

Sharon (with her eyes closed): Hmmm..

Swayam intertwined their finger and bought her hand close to him.. He kissed the back of it and placed their hand near his heart.. There was complete silence.. Not an awkward one but the silence that felt pleasant.. After a while he saw Sharon looking out of window..

Swayam: What are you thinking about?

Sharon: About the scene we did today..

Swayam (confused): What about it?

Sharon (still looking outside the window): Just wondering do these things really happen?.. Like two people who love each other.. And all the mess that happened in that one night ended up so tragic just because of miscommunication and misunderstanding.. Are the youth today this impulsive?.. That they would think twice before taking someone's life for 1 mistake..

Swayam: Oh come on Sharon! It was a movie scene.. Why are you thinking so much about it?.. Anyways coming to what you said.. Maybe.. Possibilities are quite high.. And you are talking as if you are you are all that old.. Don't you remember even you were so impulsive during over college days.. And as time passed you became more calm and tolerant..

Sharon (defensive): But I never thought of killing you or something!

Swayam: Not killing me! But you hated me like hell!

Sharon (with a frown): Who said so?

Swayam: The entire college knew!

Sharon: Oh hello! I never hated you!

Swayam: So what was all that attitude for?

Sharon: It was just because you were too sweet to me.. And I thought..

Swayam (cutting): One minute! So if a person is sweet to you, you give him attitude?!

Sharon (irritated): Listen! Why are we discussing all of this?

Swayam: You started it!

Sharon: Fine! My mistake!

Sharon crossed her arms and looked outside the window with an angry pout.. Swayam looked at her and couldn't help but smile.. He so missed their childish arguments.. All thanks to their profession it was a bit difficult for them to get time for each other.. But whenever they did he made the best out of it.. While Swayam was lost deep in his thoughts he felt a weight on his shoulder.. He turned his head to find Sharon resting peacefully with a tiny-winy smile.. He kissed her head and rested his head on hers..

Soon they were home.. Sharon went in to freshen-up as she knew Swayam must be hungry and she got to cook soon.. Swayam lazily hoped on to the sofa and started fiddling with his mobile.. After about 20 minute Sharon came out..

Sharon: Baby, go freshen-up till I cook some dinner..

Swayam immediately rushed to her and hugged her from the back.. Her rested his chin on her shoulder and pecked her cheek.. She smiled and put her hand on his tightening the grip..

Swayam (nuzzling in her neck): You smell fresh!

Sharon (chuckling): And you smell dirty! Go have a bath!

Swayam (placing a trail of kisses on her neck): I'm in the mood of romancing and you have all plans to ruin the fun Mrs.Shekhawat!

Sharon turned to him and interlocked her fingers near his nape.. She wore an innocent look and started massaging his nape passed electric jolts through his body..

Sharon (pouting like a kid): But I need cook!

Swayam (moving closer): That can be taken care of.. We both have better things to do!

Sharon blushed looking at the naughty glint in his eyes.. She knew what was coming up and she just wanted to have a bit more fun.. She looked into his eyes and gave him a seductive smile.. She started moving closer.. He smiled and fixed his gaze on her lips.. Both could feel the hot breath on their faced.. Sharon moved closer to his ear and she made it a point to brush against his cheek..

Sharon: You not get anything till you go and clean up..

Sharon burst out laughing and stepped out his grip.. Swayam pouted like a kid and looked at her with a babyish face to which she just went Awww'

Swayam: Fine! Huh!

Soon enough the husband and wife shared a beautiful evening.. Romancing.. Eating.. Chatting.. Laughing.. Fighting.. Teasing.. They were truly the "Love Birds" that their fans call them..

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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Awesome! It was a great piece of work. Well done :-)

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