Swaron TS: Finally.. It Happened!

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@navk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

amazing yr
love the 1st part

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

aye haye...haye...loverboy ki toh tumne...
nt fair...
well loved how u potrayed sharon n her anger,hurt...loved it ...
PM plzz...

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

it was beautifull

i really liked it

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome start!!

Update soon...thanks for pm!!

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

woah kya tha yeh 😲😲

first of all sakshi n tannu one big

applause for writing tis ts

wat an opening guys this prose was beautifully penned

It was well-written, contained

n refreshing to have a positive, upbeat story .

you guys definitely share a rapturous love of words,

a quick and delicate wit,

and a lyrical elegance that makes

every single sentence silly with pleasure

putting one word after another and making

real magic with them funny, moving, tender, brave and dangerous.

coming to ur ff

sharon's pain was beautifully penned 😭

the flashback giving an intro about

swayam n sharon n thr attraction towards each other was

very nicely put

all in all a very nice start

plzzz upsate soon guys 🤗

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow dat was brilliant. .
U both did a fab job. .
I loved d concept...
It was very well penned. .
D flashback was superb. . Very well written. .
D end of first part was like shock for me par am sure Der is more suspense to dis. .
Lookin forward to next update. .

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautiful beginning. Have always loved the flashback sort of relationship. Think Sharon doesn't know everything about that night. Hope to read the update soon as two fantastic writers are writing it.