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I wrote it in a sleepy hazy state of mind.
Warning : overly Religious people/ people with delicate sensibilities should not read it. Read it at your own risk.šŸ˜†

Arjuna-Satyabhma Pt.1

The trees are swaying with the joyous wind, old leaves flying away. Summer is almost here, giving the inhabitants of Indraprastha warm embraces in its wake. Satyabhma assembles leisurely on the chairs in the sitting room under large trees adorning the vast and glorious gardens of the main palace. Some of her attendants are sitting on the grass, talking and laughing among themselves after she told them to go and enjoy for a while, she is generous like that.

She sees her husband, standing under a tree at some distance with Bheemsena and Nakula, patting his back enthusiastically, both laughing like overjoyed elephants with some other military officers, colleagues of the second Pandava. Panchali is sitting on silk sheets with her attendants, Subhadra and Rukmini didi. Dharmraja and Sahdeva are missing and Arjuna is sauntering... towards her, like a lazy lion trotting in his territory. Her attendants, like the slaves of habit the lot of them are, stare shamelessly at his lean bowman physique and striking features adorned with highest cheekbones known to the Aryawrathas. She mentally expresses her gratitude to the gods of three worlds that Draupadi is too busy having her hair braided and chitchatting with other ladies to pay attention because Satyabhama likes her attendants, lord knows why since they totally lack the skill of subtlety. But still, she doesn't want them to disappear from the face of the earth nor have their bodies found in the forests of Indraprastha.

Vijaya drops down on the highest step of the staircase and throws his hands back, resting his head in his palms. He looks straight on towards his two wives or perhaps, he is staring into space. Satyabhma sets her eyes on him for a whole minute looking or some tic, a slight movement to give her an idea of what she will be dealing with. The brat doesn't even bat an eyelid. She simultaneously wants to hit him hard and run her hands through his hair. The great warrior, the greatest archer, hailed and praised by the masses and he could be such a child sometimes, her feelings of irritation and fondness towards this enigma of a man, are always at war. Fortunately, for Queen Kunti, Satyabhamas Lord, Pandavas, Panchali and all those people, quite hefty in numbers who adore him, the fondness in her always wins. So she will not be shooting an arrow in his face.

She claps her hands, glares at her attendants and they are already running towards the women quarters.

"Goodmorning, why aren't you sitting with the other ladies?" She narrows her eyes at him, wondering about his casual tone, "Just wanted to be alone for a while, what about you, Your Highness?"

He smiles, "Just wanted to be alone for a while too, what a coincidence. Let us be alone together, yes?"

They had a weird friendship, they argued about petty things and kingdom affairs, court politics and weaponry, especially archery. A passion and skill she shared with the great archer.

Sometimes, they just sat, quietly without speaking a word, idly observing the surroundings. He observed the life around them while she observed the people living their lives.

Musicians were playing beautiful harmonies echoing all around them, Arjunas long fingers behind his head started twitching and she couldn't help the smile spreading across her lips.

"You know, I wonder if I asked Krishna to give me an Arjuna as a gift, would he give it to me?"

Arjuna rolled his eyes ,"Satya, for heaven's sake ..."

"What? Are you saying he won't fulfill my wish?" she pouted in her Husband's direction, who was now nodding excitedly to whatever Bhimsena was suggesting.

"Of course he will, he will do anything to keep you happy and satisfied. It is not exactly a secret." She glanced at him, to find him staring at her Lord too with a gentle smile on his face.

" Exactly! So he will give me whatever I want." Arjuna turned his head a little in Draupadis direction, " I don't think my wife would be too happy."

Satyabhama contemplated for a moment "She won't mind if my Lord asks her nicely. She wouldn't say no to Krishna."

He shrugs, "Firstly, I am not a toy that you can just ask for from your friend. Secondly, you are just bluffing, you don't exactly mean it. You have your husband, you love him madly."

"Perhhaps, I can ask Draupadi. She practically owns you and my love for my Lord has nothing to do with me wanting something or someone, actually." He turns his body towards her, completely and frowns.

"No one owns me, understand? I am the last person anyone can tame or possess."

"Hah! All talks, my Lord totally owns you." He raises an eyebrow at her, as if she is the stupid one here. His hand flies out as moves his fingers gracefully in the air in a dismissive gesture.

"Not exactly valid, my Lady! He literally owns everyone, that man. And don't deflect, you are making no sense, this conversation is going nowhere since you are married and can't think of someone else."

" That is quite sexist of you. Lord has many wives so I can have an Arjuna, you can play melodious music for me and sing in that glorious voice of yours. You can be my bodyguard, too. Nowhere will I find a better warrior."

" If you are suddenly interested in Polyandry, you should be talking to your Husband and my Wife, not me. Though I doubt it, since you very much love Krishna and obviously, are completely gone for him."

" Of course! I love him, it is so easy and also the most difficult thing you can do, though you become quite helpless when it comes to loving him. It consumes you, it feels like drowning and fresh air and ..." She narrows her eyes at Arjuna who is unblinkingly staring at the son of Devaki, "... obviously, you would understand what I am saying better than anyone else."

There is silence. She stares at him while he keeps his eyes set on her husband. Something weird passes in his eyes before his face twists in a bitter expression, sarcastic laugh leaving his lips, "You are actually, jealous. That is extremely childish."

She glares at him before she pouts, "He says that he would give you his wives and sons, he loves you so much. I have all the reasons to be jealous." He looks startled, and stares at her with his eyes wide as the Sudarshana Discus of her Lord.

" That ... was not the kind of jealousy I was talking about. Are you, say insecure about the fact that there isn't a shortage of people that love him, and perhaps, someone would love him better ... than you?" his face twists into a shady expression, " and I would never ask him to give up his wives and sons for me, so don't worry."

"Actually, I never said that he would give up, I said that he will give you his consorts and children. There is a major difference, but our minds and hearts thing whatever they want to think ... So" she says in a sing song voice.

Arjuna just looks constipated, " Shut up. You make no sense. And I will definitely not ask him for that, regardless of the fact that he does not mean it. Never in a million years, god knows I can't deal with even one of the women that he keeps around him on a daily basis, let alone all of them. You are riots, all of you." She laughs at that, " Of course he means it." She gives him a stern expression, " don't even act like you don't know that, as if out of all of us, you don't know better than that.", before remembering his previous question.

"And yes, of course. Every woman fears that, actually. No woman would wish that her Husband find someone who will love him better."

"Well, that would explain if you are jealous of other women. No need to drag me in this."

"Actually, He has many wives, would find many women but he has only one Arjuna. In case you did not notice, you fascinate him just as much as he fascinates you." He shakes his head exasperatedly.

"That is different."

"No, not really. Wont you give up everything for him? Would you not give up Panchali for him ... to him, if he asks?" she whispers and sees how his body goes rigid, stoic expression shadowing his face. The tension in the air is out of place in the joyous environment of the garden.


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Pt.2


She laughs sardonically, " You would, wouldn't you."

She sighs fondly, "Men are peculiar, I know. But you both are completely impossible, I say."

"Draupadi is her own person, I am no one to just give her away, and she has five husbands, and is presently not my wife. And I highly doubt that she will ask me to give her a Vaasudeva Krishna in present"

" Of course she won't since she already has a Vaasudeva. He loves Panchali."

"Exactly! Madhava loves everyone! Sometimes, I think he loves Mama Shakuni and Bhrata Duryodhana too."

"Don't joke. And again it's poles apart. Perhaps, he feel affection for everybody, but he loves you differently." Arjuna shakes his head and shrugs, "you are being paranoid, he loves you differently too, Satya."

" No. He adores me and always tries to give me everything I want to keep me happy. How is it any different from your situation? It is quite same but a lot more in your case." Her pout is getting childish and borders on ridiculous.

Arjuna shuts his eyes and looks towards the heaven before sighing despairingly, "Draupadi loves Madhava a lot, too. Now run along and be jealous of her."

Satyabhama frowns, "don't try to be smart with me, you. And Draupadi loves Krishna because he loves you."

Arjuna jumps up as if Bhimsena hit his club on the ground beside him, he slowly turns to stare at her in bafflement, "that is the most absurd thing you have alleged till now."

" Oh please, I am absolutely correct. Her infatuation and adoration for you makes her worship Krishna since she knows how impulsive and childish you can be, and you need protection. And she knows that my Lord would interchange the positions of stars and planets if it means that it will keep you in one piece."

Arjuna flails his sturdy arms everywhere, "Well, do you doubt that I will destroy all the worlds just for him? Because you should very well know, that I would." he insists vehemently.

She titters at that. " No, I do not doubt you at all. And that is precisely what I am trying to articulate."

"Well? Then how come you say, that Draupadi loves him because he will keep me safe at any cost and even though I would do the same for him, you HARDLY tolerate me," he moves his fingers in the air in the general direction of his face "and would rather not look at my face, don't even try to deny that you don't want to hit it with an arrow almost all of the time."

She smiles calmly at him, "Again, both situations are moderately different, my Lord is quite unassailable and doesn't need protection. So, you being competent in protecting him is not a relief, exactly. I am an able warrior too, but I can't destroy the worlds' to protect him, regardless of the fact that he won't need any saving."

He rolls his eyes at her, "you are creating an issue out of nothing. I swear I am never sitting to have a Madhava related talk with you, never. You completely throw your sense out of the window when it comes to him, anyways. And I don't think that Panchali would be too happy with you if she hears that accusation."

She twirls a lock of hair in her fingers"Oh, and I think that she would agree with me, darling. She knows deep down that I am right on this matter."

" Whatever! I do not claim that I understand women and what goes on in your minds."

" Oh come on, it is quite simple. If my Lord tells you to leave everything, your city, family, wives and your darling weapons, and go with him to become a traveler because that is what is good for you, wont you? Obviously, you would. As great and mighty you are and a magnificence worshipper of Ladies, you would leave everything behind in a blink of the eyes, you just need his consent. You need him to approve and you will happily accept the aloof and carefree nature that of yours that hides behind your sense of responsibility and duty."

He appears to have got lost in his own mind, spaced out and thoughtful, " Yeah, but as you said, I do have some responsibilities, my brothers, wives, my children ... And he would never, you know, never approve I mean." He looks oddly wounded by the thought. Sighing, he says "He has other plans for me, I believe. He would probably mock me and remind my path and what great things I have yet to achieve before I think about retiring from this chaos of a life."

She gets up from her seat and sits down beside him on the staircase. They sit silently for minutes, the comfortable silence between them being interrupted by boisterous laughter. Krishna and Bhimsena are coming towards them, both looking excited, and the later claps Krishna on his back and leaves for the Palace. Satyabhama glances at Arjuna, seeing him trying to fight a helpless expression on his face. Her Lord's eyes are set on him, gleeful expression turning contemplating but the grin stays on his lips, " Partha, let us go hunting, shall we? Bhima bhaiya has suggested a good place where we can set the camps at night."

Satyabhama and Arjuna both stand up, the former just observing her friend and her Lord, while Arjuna moves forward to stand in front of him, still not quite back into the outer world from the weird place in his mind. Krishna puts both his hands on his friends shoulders I n apparent concern, only to have Arjuna leaning in and relaxing, "Hey, are you not feeling well? It has been a long time since we went out hunting, in the lap of nature and greenery. But we can always postpone if you want. We will go when you are feeling well." He smiles at Arjuna, squeezing his shoulders but Satyabhama feels as if his eyes are speaking more, too much for her to catch up. She cannot see Arjunas face.

"No. I am good, Madhava. Just feel a little suffocated, I guess."

Krishna laughs at that. "We are in the open, it is a beautiful garden. Only you would feel smothered even here, Partha. So shall we go? Perhaps, the natural wilderness of the forest will cure you. Come on then, I shall take you away from here."

Satyabhama smiles at that, while Arjuna sucks in a breath, his voice sounds desperate and choked "Yes, Keshava. Please, do so. I beg of you." He grabs Krishnas arm, who looks startled for a moment before reverting back to his cheery self and letting Arjuna drag him towards the Palace. Krishna shoots a quick smile at Satyabhama while Arjuna gives her an unreadable look, before shaking his head startlingly and telling Krishna to get a move on or they will be late in setting the camp before night.

Satyabhama watches them go, before walking towards his sisters and friends. Draupadi smiles up at her and grabs her hand, "Hey, how did the flirting go with my Husband, Satya?" A patronizing expression shadows Sayabhamas face, before she shakes her head in exasperation.

"Our Men, I tell you."

Melodious Laughter of Kuru and Yadav women fills the gardens.

Edited by Medha.S - 11 years ago
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Love love n loads of love to u medhaaa šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Grrr how can u stop here...post the next part soon now plzzz 😳
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Love you dearie for this awesome post...ā¤ļøšŸ¤—
Just don't keep us in suspense and carry on soon.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Oh my this is beautiful... I love it. The total freedom and happiness among the characters to talk whatever nonsense they wish... And Draupadi.. Really excellent!
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Originally posted by: Rushika

Love love n loads of love to u medhaaa šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Grrr how can u stop here...post the next part soon now plzzz 😳


Lol šŸ˜†
i dont know why i wrote it. just analyzing the two men from ones wifes's prescriptive?
what did you understand from it? does it make sense. my sister thinks it is nonsensical.
ā¤ļø you too.

probably after exams, now.

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Originally posted by: Medha.S


Lol šŸ˜†
i dont know why i wrote it. just analyzing the two men from ones wifes's prescriptive?
what did you understand from it? does it make sense. my sister thinks it is nonsensical.
ā¤ļø you too.

probably after exams, now.

nups it was all sense...but ur cute baby got baffled by Satya' s flirting n was pissed too...I loved it yaar beautifully written n aaah I loved the suspense that Panchali kept a tab at her husband šŸ˜† N I really can't wait for next OS till april 16 😭
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Awesome fic!! šŸ‘
Continue soon...
Edited by .scarlet. - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sukanya_Datta

Love you dearie for this awesome post...ā¤ļøšŸ¤—
Just don't keep us in suspense and carry on soon.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

dont expect too much ... exams!!!

yeah well, you all love me only when i write something for you.
Anyways, give me some constructive advice so it will help me continue in the future!!šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: Rushika

nups it was all sense...but ur cute baby got baffled by Satya' s flirting n was pissed too...I loved it yaar beautifully written n aaah I loved the suspense that Panchali kept a tab at her husband šŸ˜† N I really can't wait for next OS till april 16 😭


april 26 actually. šŸ˜†
I didnt even plan it ... it just happened!!
@bold 🤣 that is like the best way to describe it in a sentence!!
i chose you and myths as Drau and satya too ... you both could be riots together.


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