Arshi FF: When Angels Falls (Second LOOK) 03-05

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys here Have a look..

For the story i would say that i am trying to make it as Dark FF.. As dark as i can..

this story is about a Girl and A Man who's universe i different in all the senses. in that universe when they both collide what happens.

when two different universe falls for each other when there birth is not to be love or to give love to anyone.. what happens...

This is a story about darkness and Love.. A story which tells you that Love is not that strong to overcome every obstetrical and not even that weak so IT can't...

Prologue :

When you know you can't hide...

I wish I could find you... He told himself dropping his head between his knees...

When you know love is the most dangerous thing to do...

I just can't stop loving you... She said defeated...

When you know your biggest enemy is you... Yourself...

I wish I could keep you safe from myself... But I can't... his eyes gleam with darkness..

When you know your desire is not what you have been created for...

Why... why... Why...??? Why can't I just forget you?? She cried till her soul destroyed till beyond repair...

When you know there is never US with them.

Your work has to bring him to us... a man voice echoed in her ears till it bleeds.

When you can feel you don't have time, yet you wanted to fight...

I will do everything to protect you Khushi... he said with the passion, universe has never seen before...

When you don't know whom to fight with...

Khushi...!!! He screamed till his lungs shattered into tiny pieces.

When you know the enemy is none other than your own creator...

Majesty we have a treat... a dark haired man bow in front of a man and said in almost a whisper.

When your pleas doesn't reach any ears...

Please let me go... let me go to him... She bows in front of him, but there was no tears left in her eyes.

What if you lose your love before you have a chance to have him...?

Arnav...!!! She shouted and shouted but he didn't move... he stay there, he didn't move didn't reassure her that he is alright...

Take her away... a voice boomed over her pleas... And darkness engulfs TRUE LOVE yet again...

tell me guys hows it...? please let me know... 😊😊

-RV-

Edited by Sarangnunmul - 11 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome concept

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

seems interesting
i am waiting for updt
thnx for pm

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

do i need to tell u that im waiting for this! 😊

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
awesome concept
loved it
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks dear.. means alot.. yup will try to write it down soon as my work load is out from my shoulder..

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Aashi..
do i need to tell u that im waiting for this! 😊

Why...? I don't know why you are waiting for this.. please tell me... 😊😊

JKB why can't you love simple love stories..? You alwatmys wants exotic.. and hope if you are waiting I have to work my As* to give my 1000% to it.. 😉😉

Will try my level best to give all my darkness to this FF.. 😊

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: navjot7
seems interesting
i am waiting for updt
thnx for pm

I am not sure I will be able to give any update right now dear... as I am working on some promos or you can say teaser to give you little idea about this story as well as keep it secret.. I just want to keep all the characters in dark.. so right now I am sorting them out..

Hope you will be patient... 😃😃

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ReneeRV

Why...? I don't know why you are waiting for this.. please tell me... 😊😊

JKB why can't you love simple love stories..? You alwatmys wants exotic.. and hope if you are waiting I have to work my As* to give my 1000% to it.. 😉😉

Will try my level best to give all my darkness to this FF.. 😊

arey..prince charming types almost everybody do write once..but to touch and deal with dark..exotic..erotic romances needs a lot guts and thought process and it has got its own risks which makes it worth waiting for.. but no hurry huh... do write and edit..re write edit... i want the finest peice of you as the frst chap... i hv lost all my FF's which i was following..now i read nothing in IF.. but im planning on reading this... which means you hv got work to do... 😆 😆

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Aashi..

arey..prince charming types almost everybody do write once..but to touch and deal with dark..exotic..erotic romances needs a lot guts and thought process and it has got its own risks which makes it worth waiting for.. but no hurry huh... do write and edit..re write edit... i want the finest peice of you as the frst chap... i hv lost all my FF's which i was following..now i read nothing in IF.. but im planning on reading this... which means you hv got work to do... 😆 😆

I am sure now I have to work my as* for it... or else you will give me great thing and do great things which I will not forget till years...

Only the mentioned if those great things I got shiver throughout my spine...

So I am sure I will work my as* for it...

🤢🤢🤢

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ReneeRV

I am sure now I have to work my as* for it... or else you will give me great thing and do great things which I will not forget till years...
Only the mentioned if those great things I got shiver throughout my spine...

So I am sure I will work my as* for it...

🤢🤢🤢

thats good.. u r brilliant...yeah i knew.. u got me just right 😆

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