The Sweet Play : KriYaansh Short Story Part 7 pg 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay now!! People may wonder and beat their heads. So before you do that ... I wanna say something. Will you read with some patience??
Then yeah... This is a new SS .. which in actual if given in my update lengths it will in end in maximum of 4 parts. But since I have many stories pending I decided something...

This one, GS and Twin souls will be update daily. If only I get honest and continuos reviews.

I am being selfish here. Give me what I want and I will in return give you what you people want.


So kindly comment on this so that from tomorrow I can update the three. Kindly get this point. If I satisfy my ego with the comments you give , then only I will follow this. And I am Pming everyone... from both my ID's kal se only PM ID se bhejungi... aaj keliye I am sending from both.

To have a slight out line about the story Scroll down

High time I take somethings seriously 🥱



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Index:


Part 1 - Page 4

Part 2 -Page 15

Part 3- Page 15

Part 4- Page 17

Part 5- Page 24

Part 6 - Page 30

Part 7 - Page 35
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Deetha. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He loves her.
She loves her daughter.

She loves him.

He hates her.

She is his fiance.

A messy yet a simple love story.


Confused much?? Yeah I know. It was my intention. Not confused?? Tell me... I will sharpen my skills to confuse 😊

Kindly comment so that I can carry on with this..

And yeah since I update 3 stories a day, you will get nanha munna sa parts 😃

-Wildcat😆
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: star94

Interesting start. Please continue soon.


Thanks dear!! 😃 For sure will 😃
Effacious thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you will update 3 STORIES A DAY?????
😲


HAHAHAHAHAHAAA...


JOKE OF THE CENTURY... *laughs like maniac* 🤣


Badi aayi 3 updates ek din mei dene wali... BHAATTT... 😛 🤣



And coming to the concept..me likes it... and m not confused..lol hahaaa...

waiting for the story to kickstart 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

you will update 3 STORIES A DAY?????
😲


HAHAHAHAHAHAAA...


JOKE OF THE CENTURY... *laughs like maniac* 🤣


Badi aayi 3 updates ek din mei dene wali... BHAATTT... 😛 🤣



And coming to the concept..me likes it... and m not confused..lol hahaaa...

waiting for the story to kickstart 😉



I know hard to believe. But I can prove you wrong right??😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ek aur???
Anyways interesting cocept...han par yeh alag baat ki kuch samaj mai nai aaya


Last time too you told the same thing that i'll update everyday but you did'nt so lets see whether you update it everyday or not

And hope ur reviews ki bhook fills !

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Blind.Dance-

He loves her.

She loves her daughter.

She loves him.

He hates her.

She is his fiance.

A messy yet a simple love story.


Confused much?? Yeah I know. It was my intention. Not confused?? Tell me... I will sharpen my skills to confuse 😊

Kindly comment so that I can carry on with this..

And yeah since I update 3 stories a day, you will get nanha munna sa parts 😃

-Wildcat😆


There are 4 log basically...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting..
Waiting for 1st chapter..
3 updates everyday!! Hard to believe! But If I am not wrong, U used to update "start of something beautiful" on daily basis, so hopefully U'll keep ur promise this time also.. :D

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!
Hmm. Nice concept..
But i guess there are 4 ppl..
Well lets see..
Ur stories r always a treat to read!
Update soon! :) :)

PS:
I dnt knw ur pm id..
I had sent u a request in this id long tym back
But u dint accept it..
But if possible plz Pm me..
I wud luv to read n comment..

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