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Hey so I thought I would do a SS called ' Taken ' the storyline is not a bit , but absolutely different. I'm not going to do a Character Sketch because it will ruin the surprise so yeah, but I'll do the Character Sketch afterwards.
Taken : Chapter 1
Zoya's P.O.V
I walked down the street from the party that was a couple of blocks from my home. It was sort of 11:00 at night and i was very tired from the party. It was basically the middle of the night. Nobody is out at this time unless they are at parties. It was the beginning of June. Summer was right around the corner. I was wearing jean shorts, a belly shirt, and a pair of vans.
Every time i walk home i have to pass by a creepy alley, which was in between these two other creepy buildings. I heard a cat literally crying. You know what I mean. The cat sounded very hurt. I walked in the alley and spotted the hurt cat. I walked up to it slowly, and started talking to it so it can know I won't hurt it. The cat looked creepy too, but I continued to walk towards it. In a split second, the cat pounced in front of me and ran out the alley very quickly. It looked really frightened.
I turned around and saw a shadowy, dark figure. It disappeared. I began looking around the alley, keeping my eyes open. The figure came back once again, and disappeared.
"H-Hello?" I say feeling frightened.
"Who's there?!"
I shouted, very confused and scared. As I turned around to go out the alley, the figure was standing right in front of me. I gasped in shock.
"What do you want ? " I ask frightened as ever.
"I want you." The guy said with his husky voice.
"Leave me alone." I say trying to sound confident.
"No can do, love. You're coming with me " Before I can respond, he throws me over his shoulder and starts speeding.
I'm surprised at how fast he was going.
"What the hell! How are you doing that?" I ask confused.
"You'll know sooner or later." He said.
"Put me down! Put me down!" I scream while pounding his back.
"Where are you taking me? Why are you taking me?" I start asking more questions.
"Where are you taking me? Why are you taking me?" I start asking more questions.
He doesn't answer any of them. I guess he's already annoyed with all my questions.
He finally put me down. I dust off my clothes and notice that we are in a house.
"Where am I?" I ask confused.
"This is my house, Love. And now you are my prisoner." He answered with a smirk on his face.
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" ... And you are my prisoner." He answered with a smirk on his face. "Why have you TAKEN me here?"( See what I did there ? 😉 ) I asked.
He started smiling and looked up.
"Well first, you are HOT! Second, because you made it happen. And third, because your HOT once again."
"Wh-What? How did I make it happen. You're the one who snatched me up. " I say little unsure of how I ' Made it happen '.
He explained...
" My Love, you were walking alone, in the dark. That's very dangerous. You put your life in danger by doing so. And so i stepped in, basically for me." I stare at him still with a confused look.
"Boys!" He yells. I see four shadows flash to him. There are now 5 guys standing in front of me.
"Yay! He brought food home." The guy with little curly hair said. Food? The guy guy with the little curly hair started to gaze at me while walking towards me. I begin to back up and I scream.
"Stay away from me!" I warn him.
"Or you'll do what?" The same guy asks. The guy that brought me here says...
"Leave her. She's mine, all mine." He said in a stern voice.
"Why'd you bring her to our home? Why didn't you kill her?" A guy with a deep voice asked.
"Because she's HOT" He responded with a huge grin on his face. "I'll take care of her, but first lets introduce ourselves, huh ? "
"I'm Asad, and this is Arnav ( Barun Sobti ), Arjun ( Rithvik Dhanjani ) , Haider ( Mohit Sehgal ) and Ayaan ( Vikrant Massey )." He introduced each one ponting to them so I can know who's who.
The four other boys left the room to get some supplies form the store.
"Well Love, don't be shy. You can make yourself comfortable at home. " Asad said very shyly. "No! I wanna go home!" I screamed, tears running down my cheeks.
"Sorry sweet cheeks. You can't go home. And i'm getting pretty hungry." He says with a grin, walking towards me.
"What are you going to do with me? Stay back!" I scream. All of a sudden I feel his cold lips on my neck. I start shrieking because i feel his teeth in my neck. My vision begins to blur. I become unconscious.
"What are you going to do with me? Stay back!" I scream. All of a sudden I feel his cold lips on my neck. I start shrieking because i feel his teeth in my neck. My vision begins to blur. I become unconscious.
Asad's P.O.V
Oh my. She tastes so good. I let her go to see her unconscious. I pick sit her up against the wall. The boys came in.
"What did you do to her?" Haider asked.
"I was just hungry so i ate a little." I said with a smirk.
"Can I have some?" Haider asked with a huge smirk on his face.
"Hell no! Go find another girl to feed on. She's all mine. " I say to him possessively
Haider walks over with a grin on his face. He starts to rub her cheek. She starts to wake up.
"Ow,ow." She moans while gently touching her neck.
She begins crying and Haider is rubbing on her trying to comfort her in a pervertive way. I glare at him and he stops.
"Don't touch me, Yo-You f**king kidnappers!" she yells trying to get to her feet. She goes in another corner so now she's on one side and all of us are on the other.
"What's your name, Love?, I can't keep calling you Love , even if I love to " I ask her.
" Yeah don't call me that, and its Zoya. "
"Your name is SEXY!" Exclaims Haider. How dare he ? Only I can say that. I glare at him again.
Ayaan asks ...
" What are we going to do with her? We can't let her go back, she'll tell them everything. She'll soon find out who we are and then she'll tell." He asks worriedly.
"Well we can suck her neck, until she's completely dry, kill her , or keep her here until everything blows over" Suggested Arnav.
The mere thought of killing her made me tremble, I don't know why.
Moments later Zoya opened her deep brown eyes.
"Wh-What's going on? Let me Go! I wanna go home!" She screamed.
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Index:
Chapter 1 - Above!
Chapter 6 - Coming Soon! :)
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