AsYa SS - Taken : A Vampire Love Story *Updated! Chapter 5 (Page 13)* - Page 6

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Ahhh i love Vampire diaries so am going to love this lol
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Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen

Ahhh i love Vampire diaries so am going to love this lol

Same here BIG VAMPIRE DIARIES fan !
Like cos u hav to w8 for more episodes I watched the whole show again from Season 1 ahhh
Love Stephen and Damon and Jeremy !
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Awesome update
continue soon😊
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Ok, ok. You've probably forgotten this story and it's completely my fault. I apologise, so i'm giving
a double update :)

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Recap : Zoya is kidnapped by a vampire called Asad and his 4 friends,
Arnav, Ayaan, Arjun and Haider. She is forced to stay. Ayaan says they are going on an adventure.

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AsYa SS - Taken : A Vampire Love Story

Chapter 3 :

Zoya's P.O.V

So apparently we're going on an adventure. I wonder where they're taking me. Maybe this will be the perfect time to escape. This is. A smile crossed my face.

"Why are you smiling so much?" Arjun asked staring at me.

"Nothing. Don't worry about it." I hissed at him.

We all walked out the door. The van was parked in the front. Oh, I hate riding in vans so much. They just ruin my style. If I have any. Arjun sat in the drivers seat, Arnav sat in the passengers seat and Asad, Ayaan, Haider and I had to sit in the back. I was between Ayaan and Haider. Ayaan was okay, but he was still creepy. Haider was the pervert one, that was always eating.

"So, do you guys have any powers?" I ask shyly. Asad turns and smirks at me.

"Yes,yes we do. We have two sets of powers. I have telepathy and intangibility. I can read people's mind and connect with them without speaking and I can walk through solid, such as a wall. Haider can make force fields that are slightly invisible and he can morph. Arnav can communicate with animals and he has telekinesis. Arjun can make anyone be his friend, but he sometimes tends to not do that and he can shape-shift. Ayaan can heal anything and he has invisibility."

Great. As we were riding down the street, we had to stop at the traffic light. There was a car on the right of us. Maybe I should call for help. Or maybe not. I shouldn't be thinking about this right now because Asad can read anyone's mind. Okay Zoya, think about chocolate. Chocolate, chocolate,chocolate.

Hours later we arrived at our destination. We were like in some other city.

"Where are we?" I ask.

"We're in Minnesota. We had to come here to meet up with our cousins. Their names are Danny Sen and Ant Sen, they're twins." Asad says.

"Are they like you guys? Vampires?" I asked.

"Yes they are." Haider smiled.

Oh great, I need to escape. These twins might be much more dangerous.

"They're here!" Ayaan shouted with excitement. I see a car riding towards us. The twins got out of the car. Wow, they're hot. When I turn my head back, all the boys are getting out of the car. Arjun grabs me out.

"Can you try not to drag m again" I say with a bit of attitude. All of them start greeting and hugging each other. I stand all the way in the back.

One of the twins spot me.

"Well what do we have here?" He asks the boys while walking slowly over to me.

"She's mine. I found her. I kidnapped her. We don't know what to do with her though." Says Asad.

"Why didn't you drain her?" One of the twins ask.

"Because that's not who we are. Well, most of us." Asad replies.

The taller twin steps close to me and has his hands out to shake mine. I back up not wanting to shake his hand.

"I'm Ant." He says.

I don't introduce myself.

"Her name's Zoya." Ayaan tells them.

"Zoya is a hot name." The other twin says.

"Well, what should we do with her?" Arnav asks them.

"We'll take her for about two days and see what to do with her." The other twin, I'm guessing Danny suggested.

"No! I don't want to go with them! I don't know them!" I screamed, while trying to run back in the car, but failed to. Danny used his super speed and ended up right in front of me. He grabbed my head and put his teeth into my neck. I began to squirm and try to get free, but it's useless. I began to lose conscious.

Asad's P.O.V

I'm stunned. This is my first time seeing Zoya unconscious. I speed to her and lay her in the car and come back out.

"What the hell was that for?" I yelled at Danny.

"She was a little feisty and I was hungry." Danny said with a smirk while wiping his mouth with the back of his hand.

"We'll be staying in that barn tonight." Arjun said pointing in the distance. We all got in the car and drove to the barn. Danny and Ant met us there. I grabbed Zoya and put her in the barn. I put her somewhere far for the twins. After we all got settled, I fell asleep with everyone else at the back of the barn. Ant and Danny slept close to us.

"Where's Zoya?" Haider asked.

"She's somewhere safe so Ant or Danny won't get to her." I replied.

Zoya's P.O.V

My neck is aching. I try to turn my neck and it hurts. I look around and notice that i'm in a barn. I also notice that nobody is around me. I climb down the ladder and the barn door is right by it. Perfect. I look the other way and see all the boys sleeping on each other. I crack the door open. I try to be as quiet as I can because I do know something about vampires. They have a great sense of hearing. I sneak out the door and close it back. Once i'm out of the barn, I start running towards the road. Hopefully I come across a house.

I'm running down the street and I see a house. No lights are on. My feet are aching. Should I go further down the road? I decide to do that. Each time I run a mile there's only one house. This house I came upon had on their lights. Yes! I open the gate and walk up to their door. I pressed the doorbell a couple of times. A man opened it. He looked like a psycho.

"Hi I've been kidnapped. Do you have a phone i can use?" I ask as politely as I could. He responded.

"Oh, you poor thing. Come inside, I have a phone for you to use."

"I'm sorry. I don't really think that's a good idea. Do you have a cell phone that i can use right now." I asked.

"Not a good idea? It's a great idea!"

I turn around to leave. As i'm walking towards the gate, I hear footsteps behind me. Before I can open the gate he grabs me. I scream so loudly and try to fight him. I manage to turn around and I kicked him in the stomach.

"Ow! You stupid bitch!" He yelled at me. He grabbed my hair and I was being dragged in his house. He shut and locked the door.

"Ahhh! Someone! ANYONE HELP ME!" I manage to scream. He throws me on his bed and grabs his handcuffs. He handcuffs my arms to the top of the bed. As he was doing this, i kicked him the the balls. He cursed at me again.

"Help me! Somebody! PLEASE!" I scream with tears going down my face.

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Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 11 years ago
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AsYa SS - Taken : A Vampire Love Story

Chapter 4: Punishment


Asad's P.O.V


"Where is she?" I start to panic.

"Why'd you even make her sleep somewhere far from us?" Haider yelled.

"I didn't want Danny or Ant to ya know, feed on her again." I say shyly.

We all leave the barn. "Everyone! Try to track her smell. We should all know her scent." Ayaan suggested.

We all did what he told us to do.

"I can't smell her. I have an idea! I'll just try to speak with her through our minds." I said.

"Good idea." Ayaan tapped my shoulder.

I puts both of my fingers to my temples.

Me: "Zoya, where are you?"

Zoya: "Im in a strangers house. Please come help me! Hurry!"

Me: "Where!? Which way did you go?"

Zoya: "The way we came from, please help me! Its the 3rd house down. All the lights are on, hurry!"

"Guys! She's a couple houses down from where we came! She sounds like she's in trouble!" I yell to the guys.

We super speed to the road we came from. We start running down the road.

"I can smell her!" Arnav shouted. We all followed Arnav.

"She's in there." Arnav pointed to the house that had many lights on.

"Ahhh!" Zoya screamed. The boys ran up to the house and kicked down the door.

"Zoya! Zoya!" I shouted.

"Im in here!" She shouted. I followed her voice and saw her handcuffed to the bed. I walked into the room quickly and saw the man.

"Oh no you don't! You are gonna wait on line. After I get my treat you'll be able to get yours." The man chuckled while walking over to Zoya.

I walked up to him.

"Unlock those handcuffs!" I shouted.

"Or what?" The man was challenging me.

I threw my head into the mans neck and started feeding on him. He began to scream and yell.

"Where are the keys!"

I shouted to him and then I see the boys walking quickly towards Zoya. Ant comes over and grabs the man by his neck and hold him up against the wall. I hear Ant compelling the man. His eyes went dark,

"Tell me where the keys to the handcuffs are." The man is staring into Ant's eyes "They are under the clothes in the drawer."

I immediately went to get the keys. I found them and got the handcuffs off of Zoya. When we were about to leave that house, Haider went back for the man. He used his super speed and then cracked his neck. "We'll be taking him with us." Haider said with a smirk on his face.

Haider carried him all the way back to the barn and threw him in the trunk of the car.

"Danny. Ant. We are gonna keep her for a while until we know exactly what to do with her." Arjun spoke up.

"Fine. We'll see you later hot stuff." Ant winked at Zoya and they got in their car and drove off.

Zoya's P.O.V

"Get in the car!" Ayaan yelled at me. I do as I'm told.

There was complete silence on our way back to the apartment. As soon as we got in the house I went to the room I had to stay in. I shut the door and locked it quickly.

"Open the door!" Arjun yelled while banging on the door.

He eventually kicked the door open. I tried to pretend I was sleep but Arjun ripped the blankets off of me.

"You stupid girl! I should kill you but that's not who we are!" He yelled again while pacing around the room.

Asad walked in. "Arjun, let me have a word with her if you don't mind." Arjun barged out the room.

"So are you gonna yell at me now?" I ask looking scared.

Asad put his cold hand to my cheek, "I understand how you feel. I ruined your life. Although I should not be this kind to you. You are still my prisoner." I rolled my eyes.

"Well I'm gonna head downstairs with the guys. Come down when you're ready." Asad kissed my forehead and walked out the room.

I should be the one who's furious. I'm the one who got kidnapped. I am showing too much emotions right now. I cannot let them know that I find all of them hot especially Asad. I don't want any relationships with any of these freaks!

*Moments Later*

As i'm walking down the stairs I hear the television on. The boys must've heard me coming because once I got in the living room all of their eyes were just glaring at me.

They were watching Spongebob. I absolutely hated that show. Spongebob and Patrick always seemed to be 'gay'.

(A/N : This is so hard for me to say because I love Spongebob and Patrick)

"Wanna sit down?" Asad asked. "Sure." I say walking to the couch.

I squeeze myself into Ayaan and Arnav. They both are just glaring at me. Arnav starts to tug on my hair. "Stop that!" I say to Arnav but he doesn't stop and then Ayaan joins him.

"Can I turn the channel?" I ask. Arjun throws the remote at me with lots of force.

"Well thanks a lot." I say sarcastically.

I turn to the news. I'm wondering if there's any news about my disappearance.

They were showing the weather forecast. A few minutes later they were talking about a disappearance. They showed a picture of me.

They also mentioned that there was gonna be a search party. Yes! The search party is going to start tomorrow about 7:00 Pm. Why so late? I click the tv off and look at the other guys. They are all wide-eyeing each other.

"Time for you to go to bed." Ayaan breaks the silence. Me and Asad share a room. We have different beds though. That's the best part about it. I wish I didn't have to share a room one of these freaks.

I get in my bed and try to fall asleep. It's useless! Lots of things are on my mind. Me getting kidnapped, fed on, and almost raped! My life is a living hell!

"Want company?"Asad asks with a smirk on his face.

"No! You can stay in your on bed." I respond with some attitude.

"What's with all the attitude?" Asad asks walking towards my bed. "Do you not know what you put me through?!" I yell at Asad.

"You kidnapped me and still haven't brought me home! I almost got raped!" I get up and start pounding on Asad's chest.

"Keep your hands off of me! I can hurt you." Asad warned me but I didn't care not one bit. I still kept pounding him on his chest. He threw me to the closet and my back hit the door.

"Ow, my back!" I whine almost crying. I try to get up but it's useless.

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Sorry if this chapter was boring. I will work on the next chapter tomorrow and it will be better! Promise!

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Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome..
Ohhh my asad..
He cares for her so mch..
He was sch a lvly vampire like Edward cullen...
Loved it.. Continue soon..
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Awesome update...👍🏼

Like it...😊
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nice updates
so zoya try running away and ends up in a
worst situation loved her asad and her converse
to find her
she finds them hot😆 especially asad
oh oh he hurt her
continue soon
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ohh poor zoya
nice update
continue soon
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Awesome update. continue soon :)

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