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Posted: 11 years ago
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Of Mosquitoes And Madness

Chapter 3

Walking alongside Sanyukta, with her clutching at a flaming torch (stubborn bint, wouldn't let me near the thing) and him at the squeaky clean steel plate, Randhir pondered over the confusing antics they had been up to for the past hour.

His feud with the buzzing pests; the sudden appearance of Miss I-Smell-My-Hands-When-They're-Dirty carrying a plate laden with food; the hilariously bizarre conversation with said girl; the inopportune scrambling of his brains, followed by him practically drooling over her (in his justification, Sanyukta Agarwal looked...fetching...when she laughed. Ahem. Not that he noticed! Not at all); her unexpected invitation to join the rest of the team's temporary abode; his reluctant acceptance...

The confusion's giving me an effing headache!

"Sanyuk--OI! Get that thing away from me!"

Taking a frantic step away from the crazy imp brandishing the torch like a sword (okay, exaggeration, but she brought it too close to my face, dammit!), Randhir tried to calm his rapidly increasing pulse.

"God, I'm so sorry! You...you startled me!"

"You don't look sorry!"

"What would you want me to do? Wash your feet to satisfy your bruised ego?"

"Now there's a thought..." he grumbled.

"Randhir. What'd you startle me for?"

With aggravation battling for dominance in her eyes, the blaze from the torch illuminating her deepening scowl, Sanyukta was a vision to behold and Randhir found himself tongue-tied. How was it that this lunatic, complete with her competitive tendencies and feminism and that damned nosy nature, was able to leave him grasping for words?

The silence must have stretched too long (a first for them, surely) as she, with a shake of her head, turned away to continue down the lane.

"Why'd you do it, Sanyukta?"

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Sanyukta came to an abrupt halt, the question, uttered almost nonchalantly, hanging between them like a monkey on a mango tree.

I really need to update my euphemisms. God!

"Why'd you bring me the plate of food? Why'd you invite me over? Why are you--"

"--doing this? I just am, Randhir."

"What kind of a dumb-ass answer is that?"

"The kind that you'll understand, dumb-ass."

She tried to suppress her chuckles, watching him take a deep breath to suppress his retort. She was having too much fun on his expense, thoroughly enjoying their war of words. He, however, seemed to be irritatingly sombre, his clenched fists betraying his agitation.

"You are a part of the team, Randhir. And we do not abandon one of our own."

"What are you, the Mamma Bear?"

"Hilarious."

"I aim to please."

"What a retard," she grumbled.

"Why did you really do it, Sanyukta?"

"I did what I should've! What was right."

"Is that it?"

"What else was it supposed to be?"

For a moment, Sanyukta glimpsed disappointment hidden in his impenetrable eyes. Or so she thought, as in the next instant the usual guard was back in its place.

"Nothing. Absolutely nothing."

With that, Randhir walked away, a deliberate shove aimed at her (aching!) shoulder, heightening her ire.

Such a drama queen.

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NEXT

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A/N: A teensy bit of a climax interspersed with the humour. The plot needs to progress too, after all. I hope you like it! I'm trying to squeeze in the writing in between my studies :P
A note of thanks to those who commented: ArushiKotecha, unishaz, ..nams.., .scarlet., Dancindoll8, Sarunforeva, riyasenak, rabia297, richurachna, nampi, Galadriel, sukriti11196, miss_bennet, -silhouette-, themockingblue., daisydee425, sandhirlover

Hugs and kisses to all those who read and 'liked' the fic. You all just made my day! :*
P.S. Oh, and for PMs, just Buddy me. Or 'like' this post. Whatever works. Thanks again! :D
Edited by TheDreamyKid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
omg!!!! me first!!!!!!!!!! yayyayayayay!
Haha, I am such a creepy stalker!
Res! Edited!
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Holly Molly Golly! * contented sigh* What a day it has been! When I came home after my not-quite-so-awesome aka COMPLETELY Horrible English Board Exam...I was totally down in the dumps😭 (like underground-wala down). And then I came online on IF...and you,my dear Author,made my day!😊
I got to read your three awesome pieces of writing!⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ Full Circle ( it was too short but cute dammit!) ,Star-Crossed ( Holy Shit! Best Ever!)...and Of Mosquitoes and Madness (The LOL Generator FF!) Thanks yaar! After reading this fun-ny-licious update,I am feeling cheerful again!😃

Coming to your update...Ahaan!😆😆😆

'Miss I-Smell-My-Hands-When-They're-Dirty'
"What are you, the Mamma Bear?"
Hahaha!! Randhir is too cute here!☺️


"What kind of a dumb-ass answer is that?"

"The kind that you'll understand, dumb-ass."

Lmao...I love their constant,but light-hearted bickering! 👍🏼

Also, I j'adore this Sanyukta! She is kick-ass and witty!👍🏼

P.S: Do I even need to tell you that I loved the update? Update soon!
P.P.S: Also...its weird...we have been interacting so long and yet I don't even know your name! What is your name, O Revered Author?

Edited by Galadriel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I am loving it !! Awesome update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Galadriel

omg!!!! me first!!!!!!!!!! yayyayayayay!

Haha, I am such a creepy stalker!
Res! Edited!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Holly Molly Golly! * contented sigh* What a day it has been! When I came home after my not-quite-so-awesome aka COMPLETELY Horrible English Board Exam...I was totally down in the dumps😭 (like underground-wala down). And then I came online on IF...and you,my dear Author,made my day!😊
I got to read your three awesome pieces of writing!⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ Full Circle ( it was too short but cute dammit!) ,Star-Crossed ( Holy Shit! Best Ever!)...and Of Mosquitoes and Madness (The LOL Generator FF!) Thanks yaar! After reading this fun-ny-licious update,I am feeling cheerful again!😃

Coming to your update...Ahaan!😆😆😆

'Miss I-Smell-My-Hands-When-They're-Dirty'
"What are you, the Mamma Bear?"
Hahaha!! Randhir is too cute here!☺️


"What kind of a dumb-ass answer is that?"

"The kind that you'll understand, dumb-ass."

Lmao...I love their constant,but light-hearted bickering! 👍🏼

Also, I j'adore this Sanyukta! She is kick-ass and witty!👍🏼

P.S: Do I even need to tell you that I loved the update? Update soon!
P.P.S: Also...its weird...we have been interacting so long and yet I don't even know your name! What is your name, O Revered Author?


The name's Priya. Priya Das. Naam toh suna hi hoga? xP
^I should stop. Enough jokes for a day xD
What's yours? :P

Ahahaha! Yaaay, my Sanyu is overjoyed that you think she's kick-ass xD
My Randhir is huffing and puffing, though. Somebody tell him he's cute and he can't help it, dammit! xD

I am so glad that I am able to return the favour cuz each of your comments make my day too :')
Lagja gale!! xD
Oh, thank you for reading re xD
Bolna hi bhool gayi xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Hahahaa! You get even better with each update. The manner in which these two characters are carrying the plot is adorable. Its weird, but I love being in their heads more than I like listening to them :P
Or maybe that is because you write so freaking well!! :D

Thank you for thanking me :P

And thank you for the PM! May I make a suggestion?

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So, Priya Das, it is? Yes, aapka naan suna hai :P
Arushi Kotecha here :D
Edited by ArushiKotecha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Galadriel

omg!!!! me first!!!!!!!!!! yayyayayayay!

Haha, I am such a creepy stalker!
Res! Edited!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Holly Molly Golly! * contented sigh* What a day it has been! When I came home after my not-quite-so-awesome aka COMPLETELY Horrible English Board Exam...I was totally down in the dumps😭 (like underground-wala down). And then I came online on IF...and you,my dear Author,made my day!😊
I got to read your three awesome pieces of writing!⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ Full Circle ( it was too short but cute dammit!) ,Star-Crossed ( Holy Shit! Best Ever!)...and Of Mosquitoes and Madness (The LOL Generator FF!) Thanks yaar! After reading this fun-ny-licious update,I am feeling cheerful again!😃

Coming to your update...Ahaan!😆😆😆

'Miss I-Smell-My-Hands-When-They're-Dirty'
"What are you, the Mamma Bear?"
Hahaha!! Randhir is too cute here!☺️


"What kind of a dumb-ass answer is that?"

"The kind that you'll understand, dumb-ass."

Lmao...I love their constant,but light-hearted bickering! 👍🏼

Also, I j'adore this Sanyukta! She is kick-ass and witty!👍🏼

P.S: Do I even need to tell you that I loved the update? Update soon!
P.P.S: Also...its weird...we have been interacting so long and yet I don't even know your name! What is your name, O Revered Author?


Totally with you on the name thing! What is the mystery about, Auteure Excellente? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
I so enjoy reading your work. Another awesome chapter by you. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Super update! Waiting for the next part impatiently 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awesome updation dear...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ArushiKotecha

Hahahaa! You get even better with each update. The manner in which these two characters are carrying the plot is adorable. Its weird, but I love being in their heads more than I like listening to them :P

Or maybe that is because you write so freaking well!! :D

Thank you for thanking me :P

And thank you for the PM! May I make a suggestion?

---------------

So, Priya Das, it is? Yes, aapka naan suna hai :P
Arushi Kotecha here :D

Hi Arushi! Wassup? xP
Hehehe, aap itne compliments na do, assi red ho jayenge xD

I'm open to suggestions! Suggest away! :D
Or, did you edit that part out? xP

Too much of thanking xP
Lemme do my share of it. Thank you for reading! :D

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