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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awesome work...
A different kriya...a different rey...everything was different but loved it

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Soha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Loved it but sad ending...

You wrote it fantastically..

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

👍🏼 nice update bt a sad wala 😔

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Shenz.. What an amazing plot.. I jus loved it.. From d start to d end..

It was all so real as in we do c all such things around us at one point o d other!!

A lovely relationship destroyed coz of a bit possessivness.. Not dat Kriya was wrong.. Obv no Gal wud eva want her boyfriend wid any gal clinging on to him..

Kriya.. It wasnt dat she dint trust Reyaansh.. She ofcourse did but lik every girl was possessive..

Reyaansh.. Bein a guy,Cudnt tak all dis.. Tried n tried but lost it at d end.. He broke kriya's trust on him.. Umm.. What to say!!!

I loved d end particularly.. A happy ending cudnt hav suited much,I guess !
Coz breakupd does happens n many times coz of dis only !

Shenz.. Amazing work done.. Ur a Flawless writer.. N knows well how to keep connectd to d reader.. Loved it :)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

this was fabulous shenz👏

looveed ittt😊

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Gr8 Job!!
Wonderfully written..
Bt I don't lyk sad endings.. :-(

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Kesha

@Radiance.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Oh! The way you defined their feeling, awesome.

As an OS, it was perfect.

But you can continue this, as you know they do move one, but just in their lives. No love lives. Then they meet again after a leap or something.

Please, if you really can, CONTINUE!

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

it was something really unique..
u wrote brilliantly shenz..
juz loved d way u described everything..👏

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Love the storyline ... Can't wait for the next update

Please PM me when u update ...!

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

It was grt!!!
Start to dhamakedaar tha!!
Kriya kyun possessive thi uska reason bhi valid hai!!
Bt isme rey entirely responsible nahi hai!!!
Agar uski kriya k saath fyt nahi hui hoti to shayad vo itna tensed nahi hota aur shayad vo kiss kabhi picture mein aati hi nahi!!!
Its lyk no one is at fault bt both r suffering!!!
Bt d way u have portrayed everythng is commendable!!!
Ese challenges accept kiya karo!!
Aur baki sab bhi diya karo! 😉 😆
Grt job!!!
Pm me for ur further works plz! 😊

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