KriYaansh OS: No Morning After

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No Morning After


So here's the challenged OS. hope you all like it (a different piece from usual works) especially Mish.




"Rey!!" that was all Kria could utter, she wasn't in a state to speak after witnessing her boyfriend with some other girl. He signaled the girl to leave and proceeded towards Kria. As soon as his hands reached her she flinched back. "How could you?" her eyes blood shot red. "Kria, listen" Rey tried to explain but she cut him in between "listen what, Rey? That how much were you enjoying your moment and I ruined it. Actually, you know what? I was a fool all this while believing that you do feel for me. All these years you were just using me; using me to get your lust mind satisfied. You are disgusting, Reyaansh Singhania."

"Enough!!" Rey pitched his voice in order to make her listen after a number of attempts when she didn't bother to pay any heed to his explanation, as if he would really be able to justify his action.
"And why the hell do you drag the topic of us being in a relationship. Is it a sort of reminder you keep reminding me about every time. Come on yaar, give me a break. I feel suffocated with your behavior of being around all the time, keeping an eye on me, deciding who I should talk to and with whom I shouldn't. That's sick."

"What do you mean Rey?"

"That I am done with you. This relationship is over" he screamed being irritated and he left the parking lot.

"You think, you can easily get over it? Come back you looser, you can't leave until and unless you don't hear my decision."She shouted back at him, who disappeared in the dark.


What the hell does he think he is? How dare he, she kicked her car. All this occurred just because she spotted her boyfriend with someone else, as soon as she reached the venue for the college farewell.

Rey was busy nibbling at her lips, sucking those rose petals that were tasting more like strawberry due to the flavored lip gloss she had put. His hands tangled in her thick curls while her hands encircled around his neck.

She couldn't imagine that all that happened for real. She had her boyfriend enjoying the moment, which probably she ruined with her presence. She had surrendered herself for their relationship and this is what she gets in return. She was disgusted. Not just because he had taken undue advantage of her faith in him but that she always melted at his words. She completely acted as a fool, a piece of entertainment for people around. She cried, tears flowing from those beautiful eyes that always had hopes and dreams over this relationship, of Rey and she being together always. She stood at the window starring the bright full moon that shattered the light through those thick clouds. "Kyun? Kyun mere saath aisa kiya universe ji? Why? Where was I wrong? What was my fault?" she complained sobbing in between and fell on her knees. She was exhausted to the extent that she didn't realize when she fell asleep.

She woke up with a heavy head, the next morning. Her eye-liner smudged, hairs messed up and the pale face expressed her state, of being heartbroken and betrayed. She was suppose to burn out all her anger over him but he left without listening to her, as if her thoughts, her views didn't matter to him, not any more.

She composed herself. She thought of forgetting it but that wasn't easy anyway. Everything, every place, every single bit of her life reminded her of him. Moving on, was not easy neither was thinking about the past nor draining in the thoughts that were all about him. She knew by now he was an integral part of her life but she couldn't deny the fact that he never belonged to her.
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Rey dashed in the room. As soon as he entered the room, he threw things and in no time his room was a complete mess similar as his mind and his life. Never had he thought that he would be caught red handed and the situations turned out to be the worst. Kria was closest person in his life, initially as a great friend, always available and his only support. She knew him in and out. And by the end of the first year they were in a relationship. Things seemed to be perfect initially. They had such a great time, enjoying each other's company, being engrossed in each other for day and night, fighting over things and then ended up making love. He was mesmerized by the way she dealt with him, her beauty, her elegance made him fall head over heels for this girl every time. He couldn't believe there would actually be someone who would not just understand him but would be able to handle his intolerant behavior. He was termed as a bad guy, rude, arrogant but she defined him exactly the opposite, for her he was had to be arrogant, as not every time politeness works and every person has positive and negative aspects and so did he. But gradually things turned upside down. Kria didn't like the way girls keep clinging on him, she too had heap of boys following her but never did she give a damn about them. She used to complain that he shouldn't allow the girls to get close to him but he was helpless. With each passing day she became over possessive and this left him irate. He couldn't decide whether to cherish the beautiful moments they had in the past or the arguments, which they generally landed on due to Kria's highly obsessive nature and trying to explain her would lead the situation to worsen. He thought better not to fidget over things and keep them going as it is, that's where he stood wrong.
It was when before the farewell Kria had an argument with him instead she gave him lectures to maintain distance with the girls this has left him highly disturbed. His girlfriend didn't trust him enough. He had to prove his feelings every now and then. And to add on the miseries, in the event a girl threw herself on him and that's when he had kissed her.
He so wished to go back and amend his action. But alas! the destruction was been done. He has seen her pain, the pain of being betrayed.
Happiness was no were to be seen for the two, they ruined the moments when they were together and now being apart they realize the worth of what has slipped out of their hands. There was no morning after this dark phase of their life.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lesh lesh lesh !
*exicted n dancing*
Chal ab unres time :P
Ok so strt was dhamakedar.
I mean.
Yaar yeh toh strt hone se pehle hi end hogaya.
Kya yaar chwetu. So nt done.
MoViNg oN...
Yaar I doubt teku emos kyon ni hai.
Kya fadu likhti hein baap tu.
U r so gud in expressing yaar.
U no I jus LOOOVVVEEEDDD dis rey.
D way u showed his stress n thoughts n feelings was sachi fadu waala.
N kriya ka mast tha bt u no na mujhe rey ka obsession tha isiliye mein usse na zyada baar pada.

N nw vder I liked it or nt.

Sochna padega.

WelL acha tha.

Bus chal bye.

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Bye bola na .
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ARREY.
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OK nw pakka bye.
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UFf.

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Chwetu !
Enuf.
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Ok ok. Chill. Ghur mat.

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It was sachi walla owe-sum.
Kasam se.
N m so so so happy fr u dat u came out so well chwetu.
*jhappi te pappi*

Aise challenges aur lete rahiyo.
Muah :*
Edited by Born2Dance - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome one

loved it

I thought you would give a happy ending...never mind...nice one!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome one
loved it
I thought you would give a happy ending...never mind...nice one!


not every ending would be a happy one..
and probably if I think of a happy ending it wont be possible for an OS..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-


not every ending would be a happy one..

and probably if I think of a happy ending it wont be possible for an OS..

so true...and I wouldn't mind if its not a OS😉😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really loved this ... superb and fablous and mind blowing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it's an amazing os
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really an amazing os
loved the way u wrote everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Usually i like to read Happy Ending stories... Sad endings pisses me... But i think it was better this way only...!!!! Overposessiveness really kills a relation..memories..and gives unbearable pain for a hell long time... And thats wat u showed in this OS... Loved it... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome peice of work...
I don't sad endings so not commenting much

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