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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!!! I've been a silent reader on this forum. And like all of you I love Sanyukta and Randhir.They look sooo good together. Before I spend the entire time talking about them(trust me I can so that). I thought of writing a poem about our Sandhir. I'm not a good poet.This is something I thought of randomly. Criticism is welcome.But I hope you like it.

I thought we hated,
The idea of being together and everything related.
You were my arch enemy, everything I despise,
Then why do you make me feel like you're my saviour in disguise.
You ignite in me the emotions that I can't confide.
I can't spend a day,
My eyes search you when you're away.
I hate you, or so I believed,
I don't understand why you make me go weak.
Love, I belive it's called,
But I never belived in love, not at all.
But what can I do?
Oh baby! I've fallen for you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"My eyes search for you". I think you should write like that and the last 4 lines doesn't match.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice try ...
Sandhir ne aapko shayar bana diya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Holly Molly Golly! Me likey!
This may be a poem on SanDhir...but I feel its more from Randhir's POV.
Ahaan...if you can write poems...then it means you can write stories as well?
Now I want to see you a write a story...an OS at least!
Edited by Galadriel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful LOVE it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Poem ❤️

It perfectly suits them !!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its Amazing! You should write more! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem... Loved it. Come up with more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully penned down the equation called sandhir...both LOVE to HATE each other!! Lovely!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The poem was really nice :)

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