Hameshaa -Thread Three- [NTL PG144]

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: mbbsrocks
Oeee..
Ye kya hogya mere peeche se
I am getting most if the Story except that Aman and Krishnettan part
Which time period is this??
Before khushi came to Koadaikanal and Munisami?
(Hope that name is right)
This is so interesting
And waao jiji
You are really good in writing adventurous serious stories ;)

You came back after awhile and asking me all these questions? Phew!

Aman and Krishnettan part is in the past.

There's no Aman-Krishnettan parts in the present storyline.

And hugs Chamchi...but I dont think I did justice to the last part..still not satisfied the way it turned out

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Note!

First of all..thank you for the love you are showering on this different and serious wala story of mine. I am glad that the number of likes has increased from 70 to 80.

And about the PMs I am receiving,

1. This is a complete fictional story, all the incidents and events are purely my imagination.

2. I dont have any idea about brothels and stuffs. I have the knowledge from newspapers and some movies.

3. If you are not happy with the story and the progress of events, do try to stop reading. I dont have time for replying to your PMs, its highly time consuming.

4. This is not easy for me to manage so many social issues in one story. So, my apologies for the inconsistencies and the errors. I am trying my best and I am thankful to the readers who have stick with me till date.

Next chapter will be posted tomorrow, if the fever baba plans to leave my body for good.

And thank you, my finger is perfectly alright now.

Love you all Hameshaa

🤗

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starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Hehe..
I just got to know that I missed this chapter...
You updated it when I was on break.. :p
This chapter was very much intense..
I am glad that Khushi trusts Arnav and have a hope that he will save her. :)

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J P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Machi health first!

Get well soon!
❤️

Cheers

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Navimalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Get well soon

best of luck.

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GaayaThangavelu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

important waiting for ur story for so long...

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sana48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Get well soon... 😊

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

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bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Khushi is going through all the trouble once again..history repeats itself for her.

I like the way you move from the past to present making them connected. You describe the scenes so well and choose right dialogues that you can write movies with the talent you have. I'm SO impressed.

I can feel for Arnav's turmoil. Khushi is really strong considering the turns her life has gone through since she was very young. I like her determination and fighting spirits..better than just accepting the cruel situations like the other girls. I really feel bad for Sakhi and the girl Shyam was looking at.

It's Chennai now? 'Get on the train , baby' (Chennai express song) Well, I'm ready to get on the train for the next chapter ;)

Awesome update (by awesome I mean the way you wrote it beautifully not the ugly situation Khushi is living)

Sh~

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starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

OMG! This is really not working...
I am getting curious but more of impatient!
It felt like an episode of IPK going on..
And weekends are killing!
At last Arnav and Shyam reached Kala's house... What will happen now? Is arnav going to pay for Khushi? :(
Very Sad!

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