SwaRon FF: Destined To Love You UPDT PG45 *18/02**

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Sorry I was unavailable for quite a while just got busy and I will surely update kal...

P.S. Marium I havent even changed a word from that update... time nai mila sooo... :P

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mannupmff

@mannupmff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

loved it!!
after such a long while u updated!
the confession was great!
I blushed so hard int he hot parts!
it was awesome!!
thanks for the pm.

pls update soon.

Edited by -Raj- - 11 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Lovely n sexy chapter
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon please

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

res..:)
unres..:)
ohh mannu di..!! aapne 4 mahine se mujhe iske liye mara..😆
i was hell scared ki kya hoga..?? and it turned out so unexpectedly sexy..!!
omg..m red ..!!!☺️
and m speechless..!! i don't know how to let out my feelings..!!
my fear added to sharon's i have a feeling something horrible really awaits them..!!😕
but anyway i have to comment..!! so yeaah..!! the chapter was amazingly hawt..!!..!! i mean..!!
u know i can't explain..😳

but it was beautiful..!! and nice..!!
next time zyaada wait mat karana..!! bahut papadh belne padhe iss update ke liye..😆
update soon..!!
thankuu..:)

forever DTLY fan..:)
anandita..:)

Edited by Princess_anny - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

res

unres

wat an update mansie

it was thrilling, exciting, captiviting and extremely unpredictable;

you Made that sensuous moment of two lips meeting

explode out of the page

ensuring that i was panting for more,

desperate to turn the page and melt into your words

you Wrote the scene with as much detail

tat i cud actually picture the environment.

Reflecting parts of the environment

as facets of the characters inner turmoil n uncertainty

you made me feel this tension tat heightens

the urgency and immediacy of the scene

tat it made my own heart race faster

take a bow man for writing sumthing

tat emerges so directly from the heart.

the small bits of sharon's thoughts

were a treat to read

brilliantly penned 👏

do update soon 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Sorry manasie again i am reserving here,i was comlpetely inactive so couldnt able to resume my reading after chapter chapter 4..So now i will edit my comment soon..Till then

Reserved

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

So you finally updated after what seems like eons to me the word century does not cover my wait..😆.
Your update was unexpected I had thought these would again have a row and they'd fight but the complete opposite happened and how I loved it..😃 ❤️.
I loved the confession between Swayam and Sharon and am glad that Sharon took the leap of faith and gave this relationship a chance am looking forward to lots of their romance..😊.
Not to forget their love making made me blush to the core I was red in the face after reading it.. I could feel the love, passion and intensity between Swayam and Sharon and the end where Sharon sleeps in Swayam's arms was beautiful I loved this update too much..👍🏼.
Just update the next part soon please please please..??😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.