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Posted: 11 years ago






Thank you Friends for the support...Thanks a lot for those who commented and liked...A special thanks to my driving Force...My three musketeers❤️(Rashmi, Priya and Valli)...And A big thanks for Mayu...for the lovely Banner...🤗




Here is the next Part...Shower ur love on this too...


Part-8

Every one in the house is busy with preparations for Angel's birthday...


It was Anu's idea to have the party in the lawn...every one agreed...Naina was the one who liked it very much...as it will lessen most of the work...before and after the party...


Geet arranged a statge at the center...for small performances...


Every thing was arranged and Angel is excited about the party...


All wished angel early morning with gifts...


Naina made Angel Ready...Angel took blessings from her Badi Dadi...Dadi Gave her a latest Full Barbie set...Angel is very happy with her first birthday gift...Next was Maan...Maan blessed her and lifted her...Angel was waiting for her gift...


Maan pretended to forget her gift...Angel immediatly felt angry and climbed down from his arms...


She folded her arms and tuned away from Maan showing her annoyance...


Every one laughed at her antics...Maan bent down and said Maine toh aapke liye ek achi si gift laaya...lekin aap toh humse baat hi nahi karna chahte...toh main kya kroon...Main woh krish ko dedeta hoon...


Angel turned and said...Nahi...woh mera gift hain...mujhe hi chahiye...Main krish ko nahi doongi....


Maan toh chalo hum tumhari gift dekhte hain...Maan took her to the entrance where a huge box which is gift wraped is kept...all were wondering what's in that box...Maan told angel to open it...Angel rand and tried to open it...she could tear the papers but to tear the hard car board box was impossible...she looked back at everyone...Anu and geet came farword and help angel...as the gift was revealed...angel happiness knew no bounds...she ran to Maan and hugged him tightly giving kissed on his cheeks...



Maan - Toh kaisa laga aap ko gift...


Angel spread her arms wide and said Itna acha laga...Maan felt very happy seeing the happiness on angels face...Yeh meri aur tumhari Badi maa ki taraf se...Maan looked at geet who is standing with others...she smiled at him...Meera who is standing beside her held Dadi's hand and smiled She felt very happy...as she thought Maan acknowlwdged her and told angel that the gift is from both of them...Maan said toh chalo baitho usme...aur chalake dikhao...


Maan gifted a small battery car...which she could use in the house...Angel readily agreed and sat in her car


Naina - Angel...dheere se...aur dhyaan se...OK...


Angel - Ok mamma...


After angel's Ride in the Car...Angel asked Anu and Geet to run...and she will chase them in the car...like they do on TV...All three had fun...After some time Anu Geet and Angel went inside...then Anu gave her gift...She gave lots of coloring books and crayons...


And now its Geet's turn, Angel came to Geet and .asked...Pari...Meri birthday gift kaha hain...


Geet - Abhi laayi...Aap yehi wait karo......Geet went inside the kitchen and bought a trolly...on which a cake is kept...She came to angel and stopped there...She took angel in her arms and showed her the cake...yeh hain mera gift...aap ke liye maine khud banaya hain...



Angel was looking at the cake...Pari aap vegetables se cake banaya...


All laughed...Geet told Angel yeh vegetables nahi hain..maine cake ko hi aise shape mein banaya...aur dekho isme...hen, duck aur dog bhi hain...aap yeh sab khasakti ho...


Angel...sach mein kha sakti hoon..yeh toys nahi hain kya...


Geet - No...yeh kahane ke liye hi hain...Acha chalo ab cake kato...


Every one gathered and Angel cut the cake with the help of naina...Angel first fed naina, veer and then Dadi...Angel took another cake...she turned and looked at geet, maan, meera and anu who were expecting her to feed them...Angel came farword...anu sat down to have a bite...but angel gave the cake to Geet...Geet felt happy as Angel fed her, she had a bite...


Anu - Angel ki bachi.main tumhari bua hoon aur tum mujhe bhool gayi.....


Angel - bua..yeh cake Pari ne banaya toh maine unhe khilaya...


Anu - Theek hai theek hain...ab toh khila mujhe...lagta hain cake bohut hi tasty...Anu came farword to have the came...but...Maan bent down and ate the remaining cake in Angels hand...(aare Geet ka jhoota hain...Maan thode hi na chodega😉😆)...Anu shouted bhai...woh mera piece tha......


Maan - Kyun tumhara naam likha hain kya...Choti bachi ki tarah ro rahi ho tum...ab tum badi hogayi ho anu...kuch toh seekho...and started laughing...


Anu - Bhai Main aapse baad mein baat karti hoon...abhi mujhe yeh tasty cake khana hain...Angel again took a piece , fed anu and meera...and then gave cake to every one in the house...


Dadi - Geet Cake bohut Tasty ahin...dikne mein bhi aur khane mein bhi...Every one agreed...


Anu - Geet eyh sab kaha se seekha...


Geet - Maine graduation ke baad...holidays mein yeh seekha...Mujhe kahana banana bohut acha lagta hain...


Every one had their breakfast...Geet had a call and she left to attend it...She called ali and told him to check the vehicle infront of the gate and allow it inside...


Anu and Naina were curious...Dadi asked...Kya hain Geet...Koi aaya hain kya...


Geet - Haa Dadi...woh bahudur kaka aaya hain..kuch saamaan leke...


Dadi - Bahudur kyun aaya...aur kya leke aaya....


Geet - Kuch nahi Dadi...Maine hi papa ko phone kiya hain...aaj angel ka birthday haina ...toh party mein khana ke liye...veggies aur fruits mangaye hain...aap ko toh pata hain...hamare farms hain...


Dadi - Iski kya zaroorat hai geet...Nakul bazaar se le aata na...


Geet - Arre Dadi eyh farm fresh hain...bazaar mein toh fresh nahi milenge naa... Aap aayiye mere saath...Dadi and Geet went out side...rest followed...


A small van came and Bahudur got down...He wished Dadi first...


Bahudur...Geet beta...yeh bade saab ne bheja hain...aap ek baar check karlijiye....


Geet - check karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain...aap sab andar rakhwadijiye ga...


Dadi - Lekin...


Geet - Dadi plz....


Dadi -Ok.....


Ali guided bahudur and others inside...Anu came and opened one box...she found oranges...she took one and smelled it...Wow Geet yeh toh bohut fresh hain...and started to peel it and ate...Dadi...yeh toh bohut sweet hain...aap bhi khayiye...


Every one tasted ...Anu opened another box...she found strawberries...Aah my favourites Geet...Main har roz strawberries kha sakti hoon...and she ate one...Geet - haa nu..yeh sab hamare farms se hi hain...papaji ka toh food prossessing ka business haina...main toh yeh har roz khati hoon...


Anu - Ab pata chala ki itni slim and fit kaisi ho...she leaned farword and whishpers...aur figure bhi toh maintain karti ho...hume toh jim jana padta hain...


Anu took the small strawberries box and offered them to meera who is present there...she then turned to maan and asked


Anu - Bhai aapko strawberries pasand haina...


Maan - Haan....


Anu held the box infront of Maan and asked him to eat...


Maan - Aise nahi Anu...I Like strawberries dipped in honey...and said in low voice so that only Geet can hear...I have tasted them two days back...

Anu - Strawberries aur chocolate to taste kiya maine par kabhi bhi honey ke saath nahi mix kiya...aaj try karungi...Kyun meera bhabhi...


Meera - Haa ...mujhe bhi taste karna hain...chalo andar chalet hain...


Anu and Meera went inside ...Geet who was facing other side hiding her face from anu and Meera turned and looked at Maan...Maan ...aapko sharam nahi hain kya...koi apni benhen se aisi batein karta hain kya

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Maan - Not my fault Mishty...Its Anu who reminded me of strawberries...and i only remember the taste of ur lips...he said naughtyly


Geet - App rehne dijiye aapse main baad mein baat karungi...


Bahudur came out...Geet Beta maine saara samaan andar rakhwadiya hain...ab main chala hoon...bohut kaam hain...


Geet - Kaka sham tak toh ruk jaayiye......


Maan - Haa...aap party attend karke jaayiye......


B - Nahi damadji...phir kabhi...aaj nahi main sab kuch theek hone ke baad ...main zaroor aaonga...Aur Farm mein kaam bohut hain...Aaj factory mein bhi bohut kaam hain...Main chalta hoon...


Bahudur left...leaving Geet and Maan...


Maan felt bad hearing Bahudur...He just prayed that Somehow meera regains her lost memory...


Geet calmly left from there...Some time later Maan also joined everyone in the house...


Maan and Veer took off from the office...they instructed Adi to call them that if any thing comes up...

Evening...


Everyone Got ready...and The party started...


All the children came in different costumes...fairy tales...disney characters...cartoon characters...The party was very colourful...


Geet and Anu called chidren one by one and asked them tell some thing aout their costume...They gave gifts to every child...At last Angel came in Cinderella costume...and she was looking very cute...She came to the stage and told about her costume...All clapped and then refreshments were served... the cake was about to cut the light went off...and someone in the mask of Krish stood at the middle of the garden and the focus light was on him...the kids shouted krish...krish...krish...then he came farword and lifted angel in his arms...




Party abhi khatam nahi hui...😉...Rest in next Part...😆

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Here is the next Part...Tell me ur views...



Plz Ignore...Spelling Mistakes and Hindi Grammatical Mistakes

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


main first aayi😆😆 wo bhi cheating karke😆😆

aaj ka update tho poora ka poora angel ka hogaya. par centre of attraction geet hai cake preparation se lekar party arrange karna aur fruits laana sabke liye. in sab ke beech maan ka thoda romantic hona aur geet ki sharmaana icing on the cake😳😳😳
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
muhje sone jana hai...🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice party. loved the cake . waiting for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago






Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
Thanks for the update...
Continue soon...
Waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part love this
nauty maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update... gifts were mast... both bade papas and original badi ma's😳

papa ke farms se fresh veg and fruits ... aur beti veggie and fruits shaped cake banaaya😉

i loved how maan attacked on the geets jhoota cake...

bahadur ko bhi patha hain ki kya prob hain... hame kab patha chalega??

waiting for more fun in the party ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab hun.. i hope meera regains her memory soon too :( cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet k gharwale kitne samajhte hai prblm ko...sab ne iss situation ko maan liye...gr8...

woh cake mujhe bhi khane hai...plz plz plz...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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