Raghav-Kalpi-Prem EDITED Neetu's Reaction! - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Am eagerly waiting for this love triangle to start.. It will be Edward VS Jacob for Bella... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I made up some ff that takes place sometime post Prem & Kalpi's marriage. Prem takes Kalpi to Dr Deshmuk who is both a therapist & psychiatrist & the psychiatrist diagnoses her w/a more mild form of post-partum depression & tells them that her condition could worsen if she is not in doesn't get proper treatment. After Prem and Kalpi come home, Neetu finds the receipt which has the cost of the therapy session and the cost of Kalpi's medication & confronts Prem about the cost.
N: Look at how much is on this receipt Prem.

P: What's wrong mom?

N: Look at how much all this is costing you? I am assuming you paid for it.

P: I did mom! I went to the best mental physician in town- Dr. Deshmuk.

N: I don't know about all this Prem. Your busy at work. Kalpi has this.. this mental case, think about Priyanka

P: It's post-partum depression mom! Fortunately, she it's not severe.

N: What happens if it becomes severe Prem?

Prem put his head down, feeling like his world was slowly crumbling down. All he wanted was for Kalpi to be happy. His eyes started to water. Then he saw Kali coming down in her matching robe & gown.

K: I heard everything

N: You don't need to worry about me Neetu aunty. I'm going to take my medication on time & try to be more positive.

N: You better Kalpi. You see Prem isn't like your father. You cannot afford to not take care of your daughter & have Prem be like a stay at home dad.

K: Enough is enough! Don't say anything more about my family. I know my...

Kalpi didn't feel like she could say the rest of her sentence. She knew responsibilities, including her responsibility to her baby girl

N: What Kalpi? Cat caught your tongue.

P: Leave her alone mom! Right now, Kalpi needs extra support & know you don't like how much money went to the medication, this appointment, & there is going to be at least a few more appointments in future but I am concerned about her. I'm concerned about MY WIFE!

By this time, Prem was yelling at Neetu. Kalpi was afraid that she might end up being a burden in the house as she went up the stairs. She closed the bedroom door shut. Part of her wanted to leave Kappor now as because she was afraid she would end up feeling like a burden due to her post-partum but how would leaving help much. She would be away from Prem who she couldn't afford to be away from. Kalpi looked up & saw Prem entering the room. Prem saw tear roll down Kalpi's face. He went over to her wiped the tear & held her close to his chest. Kalpi wrapped her arms around him.

P: We're going to get through this, okay?

K: Okay

Their embrace got interrupted when they heard Priyanka crying. Kalpi told Prem to not to go anywhere. Prem started to say he was thinking about checking out the venue for the next business party.

K: Do you have to do it today?

P: No

K: Then stay right here.

P: Ok.. U are kinda creeping me out right now?

Kalpi closed the door and tended to Priyanka. After she put placed her back in her crib. She stared at her, while she layer in her crib, fast asleep, thinking how now there is another person in her life that she cannot afford to let down- daughter. She went back to the bedroom and saw Prem lying on the bed.

P: Is she sleeping?

K: Yes.

Kalpi took off her robe & lay down on top of Prem. While they cuddled, Kalpi revealed the reason as to why she wanted him to stay in the house for sometime today.

K: Do u wanna know why I want u stay at home for some time today?

P: Why?

K: Because I want to... I want to make love to you.

P: You're in a naughty mood.

K: Yes I am

They made love.

Not long after making love, Kalpi was in deep thought while resting her head against Prem's chest. She fellt like her life was so much more at ease before the day she saw Prem in a drunken state, running his hand through her hair, saying that she had such pretty eyes & he could just stare into them. That was the first time she felt that he might have a more than a friend feeling towards her. Ever since then her life turned into more of a roller coaster ride. She heard a lightning outside, getting reminded about the day he delivered Rajini (Ragav & Paakhi) son that stormy night. She caressed her nose against his bare shoulder, getting a whif of his cologne. Being reminded of how sometime after she started dating Prem in secret how angry her parents, especially her mom got when she smelt of this very same fragrance.

"At least she ended up accepteding us." Kalpi whispered.











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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samarth300

i don't want it to come to her marrying Prem. A love triangle with Raghav, Kalpi and Prem would be so funny, cute, interesting and entertaining, , not to the point where Prem becomes a psycho though.
This is what I want to happen:

Prem is defeated by Kalpi once again. He started drinking. NAd Neetu tries calling him her blueberry cheesecake and pineapple eclairs to try make him feel better, but he does not listen. Sahil says that he should stop acting like a Devdas and do something. Neetu says that my chocopie is not a evdas because it is not like he loves Kalpi or anythhing... Yuck! me and Kalpi!!! says Prem. But as days went on it was becoming true. He was in love with Kalpi. Her lectures to him was like a reward. Her attitude was probably the best part. He had called her to the park all aloe nd she made sure to come with high heels to throw at him. He had proposed to Kalpi and the answer was her slap and she screamed noo. He asked why do you not love me, I love you!! She insults himm. He now goes back and starts drinking like a true Devdas. He drinks a few glasses and then sobs and then he drrinks a few more glasses and sobs. THe pattern keeps on repeating. Neetu had asked him whats wrong and he replied Kalp left me. Neetu soon found outand all hell broke loose. But Prem had locked himself in his room, so he could drink and sob in peace.


Then Prem gets a plan. What if he turns good... will Kalpi accept him. So he tries too and make a fool of himself doin so.. He tries to get friendly with Kalpi, Be nice to Kamla, be good to Raghav and many other things. He gets ignored from Kalpi, Raghav slaps an throws him out of his office and he gets a lecture from kamla. Then finally Kalpi accepts to be Prem's friend. And soon they get into talking terms. They no longer r shout at each other. rem finds the opportunity to tell her his feelings. And Kalpi answers saying that I doo not think you are so bad anymore, but I am making it clear tht I do not love you. Prem gets depressed, but then he thinks that maybe if he persists, she will tell me that she loves him. Next time he brings roses and a diamond neclace to give Kalpi. But then enters our Raghav. What are you doing her?? Get out!!! screams Raghav. Kalpi says to let him speak. He tells her how much he loves her and gives her the roses saying that I know these are your favorite kind of flowers. I even brought you a necklace!! Do u love me too?? Kalpi looks at raghav and tells Prem that she will think about it. Prem gets excited and Raghav stares at her herd. Prem leaves...


I will finish this later. Hope I did not bore you guys to death






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