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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful job tannu when writing an emotional piece I think you feel that deep down no wonders you emote those feelings in your writing so well..
Sharon's hesitance on anyone's touch and Swayam's concern over seeing her behave differently was something I had longed to see on the current track but unfortunately we did'nt get that on screen but we got it writing so am happy reading Swaron..😊.
Then the dance that was like the best part of this entire OS you tore open Sharon's heart and bared her feelings in front of us in that section and I was touched reading it, I felt sadness engulf me when I read it but yet again Swayam was there to hold her to him and console her and I loved that so all in all it was brilliant I loved it tannu keep writing such beautiful write ups..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
loved it 😳❤️
awesum work👍🏼👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ya
loved this genuine os

new ray of hope makes us

us -swaron fans feel so good and kush !

loved the concept

liked you portraying that weak but strong sharon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was one emotional OS tanvish and brilliantly written..👍🏼
the way you showed sharon flinching away from touch and realising that she was showing her vulnerability..it was very much relatable..
swayam's concern for sharon..am so missing this swayam now..
the best part for me was the dance..you described the emotions so beautifully..and sharon finally let it all out..
great job tanvish
thanks for the PM

regards
nishi 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u do write brillantly in every aspect..n i surely love reading all ur wrks no mater wt..dere s dat thing always dat i can surely imagine d entire scene..do update d other ss tere binn

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