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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

soo beautiful...

khoobsorat OS tha.. It had all the soul, the pure love, the beauty of swaron love..! One of the best swaron OS I've read for a while! thank you soo much for writting a scenario all the swaron fans must've wanted to read..😊 the best thing about the OS is it's very real, they didn't suddenly confess their love and all or the MU didn't end at once..But Sharon's pain, her love, her tolerence, that was the key thing in the OS..loved it to the core...

Do write more and thans for the PM..😊

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Shreya..

@Shreya..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wsome OS..u wrote on o saiyaan...😭

This is better thn wht current cvs r writing..good job👍🏼

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kriti..

@kriti..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

beautiful ossharon's pain and swayam's concern for her you penned down beautifullythanks for pm

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Reading the whole thing with that song playing was such a wonderful experience. It almost fet surreal...thanks dear😊

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

lovely

it was a great os

full of emotions

thanks for the pm

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I loved the os!!
Swayam was finally understanding sharon's feelings!!
Every emotion was depicted nicely!!
Loved swayam and sharon convo!
The dance and song was amazing!!
Please write more stories!!

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hey wonderful work...lets just put this in a way that you really showed what we would have loved to see in the show...great job...you are a marvel in showing off how a character feels n reacts to a particular thing...you are genius in creating story lines thats beyond any doubt...keep writing such wonderful stories...

Thanks

Pratik...

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Mummmaa 😔

Why this wasn't shown on screen? I so badly wanted this after effects of that jerk Alok's deeds. Loved how u wrote it! And the way u ended was apt. I understand we can't give SwaRon a patch up according to the current track.. :(

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jasmita

@-Jasmita-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This one was excellent.

U wrote it beautifuly!

Each feeling of Sharon u described it beautifuly.

The song was also perfect.

I loved the part when swayam noticed that she was not fine.

The Swayam monologue in the class was a way to excellence written.

And now the rehearsal hall scene where swayam comes,

All the things were beautifuly written.

Here I reading could feel the pain in the OS.

Oh god, it was shown in the episodes.

The end was also amazing!

Excellent OS.

Keep writting!

-Jasmita

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Omg my dear..i must say it was commendable...i wish that d3 had sucb beautiful and creative writers like u..:)
Then we wouldn't have to leave the show..
It was beautiful...
I could imagine everything infront of me..:)
U penned every emotion so well..
Amazing..:)
Thanxx for such a beauty i was longing for..
Anandita..:)

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