Life Is Full Of Secrets Good Bad Who Knows KR SS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Nice Concept
I loved d CS
Itz quite Interesting
Update d 1st part ASAP...
plz PM me when U update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
everything is superfine...

but the last line that..jaldi update expect maat karna ne sab kuch bigad diya...

btw.. take ur time..
if possible jaldi update karna..

will be eagerly waiting for it...



with love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
hi
the character sketch is good
as u have added rajveer and naina
is this ff on rn on someone else
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awesomee start👏
continue soon and do pm me wen u updt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Nice intro... continue soon n pm me !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesome Concept & CS
Loved It
Continue Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Amazing intro n concept...
Plzzz update soon!!:):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Thank you guys for the comments

Here is the first part of the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Story starts after kriya comes back. Everyone is rude to her except neha & aashi
They were in canteen. Kriya was seating alone doing something on her phone.
While gang was seating near by her table. Two guys were passing comments on kriya.
They came near her. One of them tried to touch her before he could he got slap on his face. He looked up to see dared to slap him it was kriya.
Kr: iss baar srif thapad mara hai dusri baar kisi bhi ladki ke sath batameze ki na tho mai make sure karuing ki tum dono collage se suspend ho jao. Wase bhi tum boys ka acha hai jab bhi koi nayi ladki dekhi nahi ki uske batameze karna suru. You guys are disgusting im very disappointed that this college has students like you. Shame on you.

Kriya left from there. After college all were seating BB court. Kriya was also there
because neha & aashi forcefully pulled her there. A car stop before the gate of basketball court. The person inside the car honked few times. Kriya looked up well everyone looked up at the car the glass came down.
P: angel come on

Kr: aa rahi hu

Kriya started picking up her stuff.

Kr: neha tujhe nahi aana kya

Ta: usse aana hoga wo aa jayehgi

Kr: tumhara naam neha nahi so apne kaam se kaam rakho tumhara ghar nahi ki sab ko order deti raho. Wase bhi bholo maat ki GS bhi tum manipulation se bani ho

Kriya went from there. Neha went up to the guy in the car talked to him for a while.
Neha came back.

Aa: woh kriya ka boyfriend types hai kya

Ne: aare nahi nahi woh uska bada bhai hai

Si: uska naam kya hai kafi handsome tha

Ri: aur hot bhi

Sh: cute tha

All looked at sharon as they never excepted sharon to say something she is never easily impressed

Ne: girls girls sorry to break your heart but uske bhai ki already shadi ho chuki hai aur uske bhai ka naam rajveer hai

Sw: tum kese janti ho i mean usne kabhi apne bhai ka metion nahi kiya tha

Ne: wo actually before she could answer her phone rang

Ne: ha bhai

Ne: nahi bhai mai akele aa jaungi

Ne: bhai

Ne: ok bye

Neha turned around.

Ne: sorry neha ko jana hoga ab bye

All: bye neha

Neha ran from there.
Everyone left for their house. Taani was really angry that kriya was back. Taani tried many ways to become like kriya. Dressing like her, talking like her, handling responsibility like her but was never successful in it. After all trying to be Kriya Shekhawat is not easy.
At kriya's house.

L: pari niche aaja

Kr: coming mom

Kriya came down. Another lady was setting the dinner table

L2: preeti kyun bighad rahi isse

Pr: arey kriti jese tu neha ko bighadti hai wase mai kriya ko wase bhi kriya meri hi toh beti hai

Kr: ha mumma wase bhi birth aapne mujhe diya aur bada kiya preeti mom

Kri: chal aaja dinner ready hai

G: hey monkey *guy said while hugging her*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
kriya is kriya shekhawat...kriya and sisters hai...awesome update...

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