Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shree10

TTsa,
Love dthis drabble and I am glad you dedicated 1 full drabble for the iconic Aman. Here he is as strong as queen in chess. Even more shatir dimaag than his boss!

👏 to Aman!



Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Great pieces.

Keep them coming.


Originally posted by: dreamwinner

At last the rescue happened

Now hopefully rudra will rescue
paro from her desolation


Originally posted by: sslmay11

Excellent work. Keep writing.


Originally posted by: sariarshi97

That was amazing!! I can actually envisage Rudra's expression when Aman barges into the room!! Made my day:)


Thank you so much! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Homecoming


There is something to be said about living in a large family. While even the meekest might occasionally sigh over the lack of privacy, there is nothing quite like a crowd to be inconspicuous in.

And that is what Paro had been trying to do for the past half-hour.

She had been hovering nervously behind Maithili, alternately cursing the fact that she was taller than her, and the foolishness of wearing such a bright orange dupatta.

Every time she'd consider going back to his room to retrieve a more sober one, however, she would imagine trying to explain her action to Kakisa-- who had eyes like a hawk-- and she would chicken out.

In the six hours since that early morning phone call informing them of his release and imminent arrival, she had laughed out loud in relief, thoroughly swept and dusted the already sparkling floors and shelves of his room, tripped all over the kitchen cooking a variety of dishes, and finally been sent off to bathe and dress by an irate Kakisa and amused Maithili.

In a fit of giddy joy, she'd chosen the orange dupatta and an armful of matching bangles that clinked when she walked-- mirroring her restless gaiety.

The phone call had said that he would be arriving at noon. And it was already half past. The whole family had gathered onto the portico (with varying degrees of reluctance) to await his arrival.

The waiting period however, had done no good to Paro.

Now that the initial shock, relief, and joy had subsided, as had her whirlwind of activity, doubt had begun to creep in. A mixture of anticipation, anxiety, and fear was making her stomach churn until she wasn't sure that the parathas she'd eaten for breakfast would stay down any longer.

Just as she had opened her mouth, asking to be excused for a few minutes, one of the standard BSD jeeps roared up to the Haveli and screeched to a halt. The doors opened almost immediately, and Paro felt completely bewildered by her sudden urge to burst into tears, as a tall figure wearing a familiar scowl emerged.

He squinted in the harsh sunlight, and she used the opportunity to eagerly scan his appearance. His hair had grown longer than he liked and he wore a thick beard. She realized with a pang that he looked gaunt and sickly and was walking with a slight limp. While the old untamed fire continued to burn in his eyes, it flickered uncertainly, as though it might go out if a rough wind blew.

As Rudra made his way to his family, Paro shrank back into the shadows, trying to steady her suddenly erratic heartbeat. Maybe he wouldn't notice her right away. Maybe she could slink away and hide for a while. Maybe...

Paro never had the chance to finish her thought as his eyes clashed with hers, and he held her gaze-- the flame as searing and steady as ever.

Drat this dupatta!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply Awesome ,please keep writing 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an intense update ..
Continue soon dear..
Can't wait to read their interaction :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
You have captured the emotions very beautifully. I could feel the anticipation of that ambience. Great writing dear. I ave started to look forward your work now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome, waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally finally finallly eee he is back!!! :D OK let me calm down teh fan girl in me :O I love your drabbles darling please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww...I just love all your drabbles❤️
Finally he is in home
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved, absolutely loved this installment...so rudra finally gets to know that she stayed back...
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Posted: 11 years ago
At last he's back and now you are making us wait to read about their meeting? Not fair!😭
Loved, loved this chapter. I could almost see her flitting around restlessly waiting for him.

You have such a gift for writing. Looking forward to more stories.

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