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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awsm blossom
the story is fabulous
part 1 was great
i am happy the reason why she left came out smoothly
i want to know whats rey's reaction towards it??????
precap looks interesting...
secret...hmmm...
update sooon
and pm me for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
next update plz its really awesome concept n plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
amazing start...
i love swaron for being supportive...
awww vishaka is the true friend...
arghhh hate gang n rey for not trusting her...
aww taani baby dream on rey will never b ur's...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome update..
swaron n vishaka r real frnds...
kria bck with bang..
enjoyed it soo much...
precap seems interesting..
do update soonn
thnks fr pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45


Part 2

Rey was sitting in the fire exit. Suddenly door open & he looked back. T---- was standing there. She came & sat beside him.

"Rey"

Rey looked at her.

"Are you ok?" asked T----

"I'm fine" replied Rey.

"Do you love her"" asked T---- with tears.

"No"

T----- hugged him & said "I love you"

"I love you too"

They heard Kriya's voice.

"Rey"

Both turned & saw Kriya standing there with blank expression. They got up & went towards her.

"You wanted to talk about something" said Kriya.

Rey hold T---- hand & said "Yes...I wanted to say that me & T---- are couple...I love T----...Kriya look I know whatever you said on the pre-valentine was a lie...I know you loved me & sacrificed everything for your friends but I don't love you anymore...After you left I was heartbroken & T---- healed me...Because of her love & care I fell in love with her...You were my past & she is my present & future."

"I already know about you & T----" said Kriya

T---Rey looked at her shock.

"What"

"Swayam already told me about both of you...Anyways I really don't care...I've moved on...So, you can be with whoever you want to because I really don't give a damn...I don't feel anything for you absolutely nothing...What do you thought that I'll be still in love with a guy like you who forgot me in just 2 months & moved on with someone else...You didn't even bother to find out whether I was alive or dead...You know what Rey you don't exist for me...So, you both can go to hell for all I care about." said Kriya & left from there leaving T---Rey in shock.

Rey's POV

She doesn't love...She have moved on...She feel nothing for me...I don't exist for her.

Kriya came to rehearsal hall & started dancing...

Pehle Kabhi Na Tune Mujhe Gum Diya

Fir Mujhe Kyu Tanha Kar Diya

Guzare The Jo Lamhe Pyaar Ke

Humesha Tujhe Apna Maan Ke

To Fir Tune Badli Kyu Ada

Ye Kyu Kiya

Kabhi Jo Badal Barse

Mai Dekhu Tujhe Aankhe Bhar Ke

Tu Lage Mujhe Pehli Barish Ki Dua

Tere Pehlu Me Reh Loon

Main Khud Ko Pagal Keh Loon

Tu Gam De Khushiyan Seh loon Sathiyaa

Aaa Sathiyan

Sathiyan

Hmm

Koii Nahii, Tere Siva Mera Yahan

Manzile Hain Meri To Sab Yahan

Mita De Sabhi Aaja Fasle

Main Chahu Mujhe Mujhse Bant Le

Zara Sa Mujh mein Tu Jhank Le

Main Hoon Kya

Kabhi Jo Badal Barse

Mai Dekhu Tujhe Aankhe Bhar Ke

Tu Lage Mujhe Pehli Barish Ki Dua

Tere Pehlu Me Reh Loon

Main Khud Ko Pagal Keh Loon

Tu Gam De Khushiyan Seh loon Sathiyaa

Sathiyan

Aaa

Kriya fell on her knees. SwaRon who was standing outside the rehearsal all the time came inside. Sharon hugged Kriya.

"Are you ok?"

"I'm fine"

"But what happened?" asked Sharon

Kriya told them everything. Suddenly a peon came & told Swayam that VP was to meet him. Swayam left from there. Sharon was about to leave when Kriya stopped her.

"Where are you going?" asked Kriya.

"I'm going to give Rey a piece of my mind...He've totally lost it...He choose that down-market behenji." replied Sharon

"Sharon...There is no need to say anything to him...I don't care whether he choose that behenji or someone else...I've moved on" said Kriya

"But"

"Promise me you won't say anything to him."

"Fine"

Kriya hugged her & said "Trust me I'm fine...You don't need to worry about me."

"Hey"

KriSha turned & saw gang standing there.

"Hey"

"What are you guys doing here?" asked Neha

"Nothing" replied Sharon

"Let's go to canteen...I'm hungry" said Vicky.

"You are always hungry" said Swayam standing at the door. He came inside & looked at Kriya in worried expression. Kriya blinked her eyes & smiled at him. Only ShaRey noticed the exchange. Rey have been staring at Kriya since he arrived but Kriya ignored him. She was behaving as if he didn't even exist. Rey felt hurt at her ignorance.

Gang went to canteen & sat on their usual place.

"What'll you have?" asked waiter

"Four samosa, two chocolate pastries & one appy" said Vicky.

"Dude stop eating like a pig" said Nilesh.

"Don't say anything to my Babu" said Neha

"Only my Kagu understands me" said Vicky

Both hugged each other.

"Dude control" said Vishakha.

"What will you have Kriya?" asked Sharon

"I...I'm not hungry" said Kriya

"But you haven't eaten anything since you came to collage" said Vishakha.

Rey looked at her in worried expression.

Rey's POV

What the...Kriya hasn't eaten anything since morning...This is because of me...Should I ask her...No she might get angry.

"Sharon...Let her be...If she doesn't want to eat then don't force her" said Swayam.

"But"

"Please Sharon...I'm really not hungry...I had a heavy breakfast in the morning...I'll eat later." Said Kriya

"Ok...Promise you'll eat later" said Sharon.

"I promise"

Finally college got over...Gang came outside (except SwaRon & Kriya) & saw a bike. They came towards it.


"Dude, it's BMW S1000 RR" said Vicky.

"I know dude...It's awesome" said Nilesh.

"Thanks guys" said Kriya coming towards them with SwaRon.

Gang looked at her in shock.

"It's your bike" said Simmi

"Yeah...It's mine" said Kriya while sitting on the bike.

Kriya looked at Sharon & asked "want a ride?"

"Yes...I would love to" said Sharon & sat behind Kriya.

"Bye Swayam"

"Bye"

"Don't worry Swayam...I'll drop your love safely" said Kriya & wink at him.

SwaRon blushed. KriSha left from there & after a while gang also left.


Precap

SwaRon Confession(Flashback)
Edited by ArShiDelena - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Yah me first
Loved it dear
awesome update
really felt bad for kreya
Hope she understands it soon
thanks for the PM (Waise uuse pehle hi pad liya )😉
Continue soo
Precap looks interesting 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awsm blossom
i hated rey for choosing taht behenji but let it be a bit realistic
rey worried for her...awww
i loved all the krisha moments
really nice bike
nicely written
update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Amazing...i really liked kriya ka attitude here...he deserves it now...
Precap is interesting...wow kriya riding bike...great...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Fantastic
Kriya had awesome bike
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome update...!
i love the fact that kria has a bike...! I would love to have a bike but i live in the UK and there is like no point since it is like always raining...! Guess ill have to keep on dreaming...!
Love the way that you have made kria weak...!
Cant wait for the next part..! super excited

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