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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nice start dear.
pls carry on.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
Gang & T---- was sitting in the canteen celebrating friendship day. Swayam was staring at his phone in every 5 sec. He was behaving like this since he reached college. Sharon asked him many times but he he kept changing the topic. Finally Sharon lost her temper.
"What the hell is wrong with you?" said Sharon.
"Nothing"
"Stop saying that...I know something is bothering you...Will you please speak up dammit" said Sharon.

Suddenly they heard a voice.
"Something will never change"
Everyone turned & saw Kriya standing there.

Kriya's Dress:~


Rey's POV
I can believe I'm seeing Kriya after 2 years...Why are you back when I finally moved on...I hate you.

T----'s POV
OMG she is back...She'll take my Prince charming away from me...No I won't let this happen...Rey is mine only mine.(Yeah right in your dreams)

Before anyone could react Kriya came forward & hugged Swayam.
"I missed you so much Sam" said Kriya.
"I'm missed you more" said Swayam.

Rey's POV
How dare she hug Swayam...What the hell is wrong with Swayam why is he hugging my baatcutter...What the hell am I thinking...No I don't care...She can go to hell for all I care about.

"Miss Kripa" said Sharon.

Gang's POV(Excluding Vishakha)
Now she is gone...Sharon won't leave her...Anyway she deserve it...First she broke Rey's Heart & ditch us...Why the hell is she back...We don't want or need.(Neither she wants or needs friends like you)

Kriya turned toward Sharon.
"It's Kriya Miss Sharon Rai Prakash" said Kriya.
"How dare you hug him" said Sharon.
"He is my Bestfriend" replied Kriya.
"So what...How dare you ignore me & hug him first...If you are forgetting something then let me remind you that I'm also your Bestfriend." said Sharon.

Gang looked at Sharon is shock.

"I'm sorry Sweetu...I missed you too." said Kriya.
"Yeah right...That's why you didn't even bother to hug me" said Sharon.
Kriya hold her ears & said said "I'm sorry"
Sharon hugged her.
"It's ok...I missed so much Shona."

Vicky turned towards Nilesh & said "Fire & ice together"
"I know"

Vishakha came toward Kriya & said "Dude I'm also here...Don't you think even I deserve a hug."
Kriya smiled at her & hugged her.
"I missed so much" said Vishakha.
"I missed you too"

"Vishakha how can you hug her...She broke Rey's heart & ditch us" said Neha.
"Exactly she is a bl**** ditcher." said Simmi
Gang start accusing her and calling her names. Rey was standing there quietly. T---- was smiling. Swayam was about shout when Sharon shouted.
"Shup up...Don't you guys dare say a word against Kriya...You guys don't even know truth." said Sharon.
"What are you talking about?" asked Neha.
Sharon tells them the reason why Kriya left.(Sharon only know about promises not the secret. Swayam is the only one who knows.)
"You know what guys you don't deserve her...She sacrificed everything for you & you are insulting her...Why are you blaming her did you guys try to find out where she was in these two years...You all moved on & forgot that a girl name Kriya existed in your life...You guys didn't try to find whether she is alive or dead...Look at Vishakha she didn't even know the truth yet she trusted Kriya...She even tried to find her but me & Swayam stopped her because we promised Kriya that we will never let anyone know about her...Do you know why she stopped us because she didn't wanted you guys to feel guilty...Today you guys proved that what kind of friends you are...You guys are disgusting." said Sharon.

Gang looked at Kriya with tears. Neha came towards Kriya & said "I'm sorry...I know I don't deserve your forgiveness but plzzz forgive plzzz."
"It's ok" replied Kriya.
Others also apologize & Kriya forgive them.

Precap
T---Rey forever????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Mera koon kolling...u knw whom m tallkin abt...lol

Loved it:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
nyc part...pm me plz...d updates...
n yeah y didnt u write taanis full name...
lyk u write t--- for hr name..?? 🤣
n do write soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Nice dear
Thanks fir the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Gang...😡
Itni jaldi maafi kyun Di Kriya ne...😔

Bt can undrstnd dis is wat Kriya Ghai is all abt...

Fire n Ice togethr...😉

Grt...
vishaka is indeed a true frnd...
miss her in d3 ...😭

Well awesum update...

Loved it...
Thnks fr d pm...
N
Dis may be my only comment on ur sTory fr a while
Hving boards...

Keep sending pms...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
awesome dear.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Update was fab...kriya's dress was hot...
Bt precap is more interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Hey delena! Like.. delena right?
I m shanaya 😊
Gr8 update yaar!!
Thank uu ttoonnss!! Coz u revealed the truth in starting only!!
Otherwise peeecchhee ppeecchhee pade hote h sab!!
So gr88 chapter!! Well sharon knows the truth? Now thts niceee..!
Lol!! 🤣 no i dnt think taarey forever 🤣
hmm.. N abt d secret i think kriya is immortal..
Well lets see..
All in all suppeerr update luvvdd it!!
Do continue sooonnn.. N thanks fr d pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome update
waiting for the next part

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