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Posted: 12 years ago
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Helloo guys this OS was written last minute by me on Valentine's Day...it is specially written on req by my dear frnd sanskriti...she had given me enough time..but I was too lazy to pen it down.. 😛

Nywaz sorry in advance for all d mistakes..actually m already late so don't wanted to delay it any further...enjoy d OS let me know ur views...and happy valentine's day to all of you.. 😃


It was 14th Feb. Valentine's Day and moreover a special day for a loving married couple Swaron.

Sharon got up early in d morning made all d preparation for d day. She wanted to make this day special for her dear hubby. She went through d check list again and made sure everything is ready according to her plans. "all set..gud work Mrs shekhwat" she said it proudly. She checked d watch it was 7:30. "itz tym to wake up my dear hubby"

She marched towards the bedroom. As expected he was still lost in his dreamland. She walked and sat next to him. He looks so adorable while sleeping she thot. He was sleeping peacefully like a baby. She slowly moved her fingers in his silky hair. Faint smile popped up on his face. She slowly bend down up to his ears and whispered "Good morning sweetheart" "good morning my love" he replied. "chalo get up now..itz 7:30" "lekin aaj tho Sunday hai na" "swayam" she said it with fake anger. "5 mins more Sharon" he exclaimed. "kabse bas vahi sun rahi hu...chlao abh get up" "Sharon 2 mins" he covered his face with pillow nearby. She pulled d pillow away "aaj ke din bhi late uthoge" "kyu aaj kya hai Sharon" he asked her cutely without opening his eyes. "swayam tum bhul gaye..u knw wat tum yahi sote raho" she was about to go away when he took hold of her wrist and pulled her towards him.

Now her hands were placed on his chest and he kept his hand protectively on her waist. "Happy valentine's day my love and happy anniversary" and he pecked her lovingly on her forehead. It was their very first anniversary. She blushed at his sweet gesture. She just loved d way those two pair of brown colored orbs starring at her with utmost love.

"so mera gift??" she asked him cutely like a small kid. "hmm vo tho mai lana hi bhul gaya..sorry" swayam replied with sad face. "what do u mean by mai lana bhul gaye??this is so not done" she pushed him and sat on bed looking into opposite direction with cute pout. He just loved her more when she is in siren mode. He slowly got up from his bad moved towards d cupboard. Sharon eyes were fixed on him trying to figure out what he was doing. He removed a small box from d cupboard and placed it on her palm. She looked at him surprised. He singled her to open d box. She quickly opened it. It was diamond ring. "aww itz so beautiful" "not as beautiful as u my love" she blushed. she kissed him on his right cheek. He gave her wide smile in return. "so mera gift kaha hai??" he asked her. "uske liye tumhe thoda intazar karna padega..dis day is definitely going to b special" she winked at him. "Sharon u know I don't have patience when it comes to u" with irritation. "sabar ka fal mitha hota hai" she said it naughtily and they both laughed. "chalo den get ready.mai niche intazar karti hu" she said while getting up from her position. "ok ma'am your wish is my command" he said with sweet smile.

Few minutes later swayam came down was surprised to see two tea cups kept on dining table. He walked towards them and lifted one of them in his hand. He had instant smile looking at those cups. "kuch yaad aya" he looked in d direction of voice and saw Sharon standing with kettle in her hand. He smiled looking at her and he cont "ha kaise bhul sakta hu my love..tumhe chuskiya bharte huve chai pite use din se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha" . Sharon smiled at him "but mujhe laga ki tumhe kuch aur hi yaad ajayega" with naughty smrik and winked at him. He realized what she was talking about and moved towards her..looking straight into her eyes "vo tho aaj bhi mere sapno me marilyn monroe ki tarah gadi par khadi ho kar..u knw " she placed finger on his lips...cheeks had turned tomato red.. "kya huva blush kyu kar rahi ho" which made her blush more harder. "shut up...chalo chai pite hai" she pushed him aside making her way towards table. She poured d tea into d cups. "so this was your surprise gift" swayam asked her while taking d sip of tea. "This was just one of d part of d surprise..abhi tho pura din baki hai" she wink at him. He was about to say something when he heard d door bell. "Mr shekhwat I think aapka next surprise agaya" "next surprise" he went running towards d door while Sharon followed him.

He found d delivery boy at d door. "Delivery boy" he looked at sharon with confusion. "sir aapki chavi" he handed d key to swayam. "bike key?" swayam looked at Sharon for reply to which she took hold of his hand and took him outside. Swayam was shocked to see a bike standing ryt outside his house. "Sharon ye tumhne" "yes swayam...maine ye bike ek din ke liye hire ki he taki hum apne next spot pe ja sake" "next spot?" he asked her with confusion. "ha tumhara next surprise". swayam got really excited. "so dher kis bath ki hai chale?" he asked her with full enthusiasm.. "ek min rukho bag leke ati hu" she quickly ran inside took her bag and came running out.

swaym was all set waiting for her to come. She quickly sat behind him holding him tight. They begin with d journey. "u know it feels amazing itnhe dinho ke bad byk chala raha hu" "ur welcome" she smiled. "vaise hum ja kaha rahe hai" "bas chalate raho..mai direction de dungi"...Half hr later..they rched a place outside city... "sharon ye jagah kuch jani pehchani lag rhai hai..plz batavo na hum kaha agaye he" "pata chal jayega...bas pahuch hi gaye"

"bas yahi rukh jana" she removed a cloth from her bag and tied it around his eyes. swayam "ye kya kar rahi ho Sharon?' "mera hath pakdo aur chalo". They kept walking. once they reached d spot sharon opened d blind fold. Swayam was surprise to see they had come to their camping date spot. His happiness had no boundaries. All the memories flashed right in front of his eyes. He saw white color tent built at a distance. "Sharon ye sabh" he had no words to describe his emotion. She took hold of his hand "swayam itz just small way to convey you how much I love u" she said it looking straight into his eyes. "love you too my love...love u so much" he pecked her lips softly.

"so chale" she said pointing towards the tent. He nodded with wide smile. They made themselves comfortable inside the tent. "Sharon bahut bhuk lagi hai" he said like a small kid. "one min" she opened d bag which she had gt along with her. Swayam was looking at her curiously. She removed all d cooking ingrediants. "so aap kya khana pasand karnge Mr shekhwat" she asked him cutely. "Sharon tum cook karogi abhi yaha??" "remember your third wish" she wink at him. He blushed a bit. "Sharon tum puri pagal ho" he said sweetly "ha pata hai" she replied back. They both shared laugh.

She got up from her place. With all d ingredients. Walked towards d stove kept at d distant. She was all engrossed in cooking. Few mins later she felt someone touch around her waist. He pulled her closer and whispered slowly into her ears "mujhe laga tumhe help chahiya hogi" and placed a loving pack on her earlobe. Sharon cheeks turned red. Before she could say something he placed another kiss on her jaw line. Shiver passed through her body. He loved d fact dt he affected her so much. "swayam" she said it in most seductive way. He turned her around and cupped her face. He pulled her more closer. Their lips were about to meet when Sharon pushed him away. She burst out laughing. "Sharon that's not fair" he said with bit irritation. "Everything in fair in love and war my dear hubby" she continued laughing. "now let me cook and u go back to d tent" she said with attitude . "I hate u" swayam replied. "and I love u" she said it in cutest way possible.. this was for swayam anger to vanish.

Sharon was almost ready with her pasta. She served it in two plates. She handed one plate to swayam. He took it with d fake anger. "so how is it??" sharon asked him eagerly. "tik hi hai" he loved irritating her. She snatched d plate frm his hand. "tho math kavo..get something else for yourself" she marched outside d tent with fake anger and made herself comfortable on one of rock nearby. Swayam walked towards her..holding his ears "sorry..abh maf nahi karogi" he asked her with pout. She ignored him and continued eating. "sorry sorry tum jo kahogi vo mai karunga..plz maf kardo". She burst out laughing. "ohh my poor hubby..itz fun irritating u" she again cont laughing. "matlab tum ghuse nahi thi??" "nahi" she said with wide smile. "u know what" swyam while walking towards her. "swayam no stop..swayam" minute he reached closer to her she pushed him away and ran in opposite direction. swayam went running behind to catch her. They spend d entire day laughing..enjoying..sharing naughty talks with each other.

It was time to go back home. They were on the way when swayam noticed through mirrior that Sharon is lost into some thoughts. "sharon tum thik ho.." he asked her lovingly. "Actually nahi" she said with pout. "kyu kya huva??" he asked her with concern. "wish it was raining today" "kyu?" swayam asked her with confusion. "are budhu..u remember ur wish list..humne chai pili..camping...phir cooking..byk ride..bas it should hav rained tho sabh kuch kitna perfect hota" "koi bath nahi Sharon..tumhne itna sabh kuch mere liye kiya..i can't ask anything more" "but swayam" . he was about say something when few raindrops touched his skin. "Sharon itz going to rain" he said with wide smile. Within no time it was raining heavily. Swayam parked d byk side ways and they both got down to feel d rain. "thank u so much god" Sharon said while looking towards d sky.. Swayam asked her hand for dance and she quickly grabbed it. While dancing "Sharon thank u so much for making my day so special..i really don't have words to describe my feeling..thank u so much love" he peck her forehead lovingly. "actually aur ek surprice baki hai" Sharon said while blushing. she slowly moved close to him and whispered into his ears " maine socha tha ki ghar jake batavungi...but I can't wait anymore to tell u that" "that sharon?" "hmmm swayam" "ha Sharon bolo" "swayam m pregnant" she blurted out. "r u serious??" he asked her with confused face. She nodded quietly. "ohh my god..sharon..i mean.."he had no words to describe his happiness..he started jumping ryt in d middle of the road. "m so so happy today...thank u so much for such beautiful gift" shorn just blushed and hugged him tight. They stood there for few mins and made der way back to home. This was end of beautiful day.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for sanskriti... 😃
Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey buddy as we had never interected but i know u from swaron written work,i always used to notice ur comment on that,so i was just visiting forum n found ur one shot n i thought to appreciate ur effort..So it was beautiful concept n very well written..Just loved the way u showed SwaRon n their cute love n such a beautiful way to execute those 5 wishes..I like all the lovy dovy dialogues of swayam n the ending was perfect..Seriously amazing work dear,if possible keep continue ur writing..


Prateek
Edited by prateek.007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

divya..it was amazing..
sharon fulfilling swayam's wishes once more..
you know it was raining at my place when i read your OS..😆
the OS was very sweet..loved it..
great work sweetheart..👏
keep writing..😳

love
nishi
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

UNRES

Woah! That was Beau-tiful
Such OS's are a treat to read on Valentine's Day when Love is in the Air
Something different here.. Sharon planing surprises for Swayam 😲
But seriously this was a pleasant ready
It just gets butterflies in the stomach and a fluttering heart
I loved it
Great work dear 👏
Would love to read more from you


P.S Thanks for the PM 😃
Edited by Tan.vish.K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful or shall i say khoobsurat!
loved itt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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divya how wonderful---
perfect beginning and perfect middle of the story and perfect ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited my comment on pg1.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Totally awesome Divz.. Love is in the air for Swaron in this Os of yours and your idea of making us relive all the 5 wishes and completing all of them in this Os was awesome I loved your concept totally and tune likha bhi very nice.. Annnddd not to forget the cherry on the cake was Sharon's pregnancy news It put a smile on my face no better end than this for your Os very very nice..😃 ❤️.
Love,
Kash..🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely lovely lovely
simply awesome yar.
loved d way you show swayam's wishes fulfilled again.

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