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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyss this is an OS starting from mangalpur madness ;) *this is my first*let me clear somethings asya are already married :D ;)

There is no yash or aarti in the scene ...

Zoya do not wear western clothes she is from india and is a tehzeeb waali girl according to asad :/

So he married her /...


So here I go !!! ...



"Get up Zoya !!! " shouted asad to his wife who was laying unconcious in his lap. He was quite shocked how did he not believe his love his Zoya . Yes he loved her but never said to her She was bruised badly lying in front of him . His eyes suddenly captured her deep cut on her waist that reflected severe Blood loss . "Get up damn it !!! you can't leave me like this !..."


He looked at the blood flowing like water from her waist and with this he got an idea he took out his kerchief and pressed it against Zoya's bare waist in order to stop the blood . In no time he found that the piece of cloth was red partially cos of bleeding . He again watched her pale figure . " Zoya I am warning you ! get up NOW !!! " he said in a dangerous tone like a lion ...


He looked here and there and then an idea struck him he picked her up while running to a near by lake (bear with my stupid imagination please ) He quickly took the cloth and wiped the blood and tried to wake her up by splashing water on her white face . Still getting no response he broke down .


He was standing and crying when he saw taking in air with a great force he rushed to her and held her head close to his heart and planted a soft kiss on her forehead . "Zoya ... Jaan ...you Ok ?.." . She was surprised very surprised she saw concern for herself in his eyes was it true or all Fake ?


She nodded slowly and asked for water and Asad hurridly left her he came back with a short pale of water and after drinking and coughing Zoya looked into his eyes and broke down . She kept sobbing in her husband's arms and after a while when she remembered how he scolded her for helping his own sister she threw his hand away and tried to get up but unfortunately landed back on floor because of the glass piece those blood thirsty put through her skin for knowing the truth that where the hell was Mariyam ?...


She sat back and Asad felt a pang in his heart erupting like a volcano of pain to which there was no cure . It was his fault and he will mend it . He will get his Zoya back the old one who loved him with all her soul , heart and even mind . He helped Zoya to get up again inspite of her continuos protesting he pulled her close to his chest causing Zoya's heart beat to raise high as the hieght of mountain .


"Leave me !... just don't touch me will you ?..."said Zoya through her tears "Just go i don't want to talk to you ...maine aapse kaha tha ki wo log mariyam ke saath zabardasti ker rhe the ... but how could Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan listen to anyone ? aapki ego jo kum hojaayegi haina?..." She said while holding his colar and crying bitterly while asad's tears also knew no bounds .


" Zoya ... please ... you are not in a condition to talk ...lets go home we can have this conversation at home ..but Not here ...NOT NOW ! ...please " he said in a pleading tone . Zoya immediately withdrew her hand that asad was holding and started walking or limping rather to which asad said " Stop being so andamant Zoya just Stop !!! " with this he picked her up and as she didn't have energy for further protest . She closed her eyes ...



Next when Zoya opened her eyes she was in THEIR car the black SUV that Asad loved to drive . Tears took no time in coming down her eyes looking at asad who was taking some water after coming back he saw Zoya up and he even became teary looking the state she was in her eyes puffy and red face covered up with mud ...


Yet she looked elegant . He passed the medicine and water to her and she turned her face away from him then having no option he kept them on the dash board and moved back when he went away Zoya broke down ...

She took the medicine and had it with water and as she did so Asad came back and started the car ...



They reached home After a lot of time and asad helped Zoya in through the spare keys they had kept always in car . Zoya was in no mood of protesting she was quite weak she didn't eat anything from morning and now the blood loss was driving her insane ...


"You rest ...i'll go call the doc. !'' ..."I don't need a doc, can't you understaand ?" Saying this she tried to walk but her vision got blurred and next she knew was all black out !. But before she hit herself on ground asad caught hold of her and panicked after placing her on the bed of their room he called the doc.


After the doc. left giving medicines and telling him to dress her wounds being her husband he had to do that ... ;)


Zoya got up only to see Asad sitting beside her she looked away but before she could understand anything he picked her up in bridal style and went towards the washroom . " Asad ?! stop ! leave me right now ... what are you doing ?.."

he placed her down but before she could go he grabbed her wrist and she collided with his hard chest .


Her breath got rythemic and her heart was beating 100 times in a min. . Asad was happy seeing the affect he had on her he opened the tap of the shower and caressed her wounds the immediate touch of him made her go jelly her knees started to give up Asad hugged her gently with desire her back perfectly fitting his torso . Asad's body acting as a mould to Zoya ...


He caressed her neck kissing the bruises that she got there Zoya held her head back granting him more access and crying at the same time . Asad slipped his hands from her shoulders to her wrists causing a sudden electric current pass through her body . She was feeling dizzy . She loved him no doubt ! but that was even true that he has hurt her and he indeed diserved a punishment ...


Now he slipped his hands beneath her duppatta and held her petite waist causing Zoya to shiver in anticipation . He turned her back and pulled Zoya into a long and soothing hug she even responded to him but as soon as the reality hit her she pushed him away with all her strength and started to sob loudly causing asad to think that was she crying of our closeness ?


"Zoya ..." but before he could complete he was cut of by her " Please Asad ! ..please just go out ..please i beg you please " with this heavy hearted he left the washroom with tears that were flowing down his cheaks . Here Zoya collapsed on the washroom floor crying bitterly .



It was night already by this time Zoya went in the kitchen to cook some supper for themselves when Asad followed her in. " you won't cook today ! ..that's my order !" he said sternly what happened to him thought Zoya . Zoya's behaviour had hit Asad badly and now he wanted to let her live her life in peace ...


"that's none of your business ... " she said while lighting the gas . But before she could proceed asad held her hands tightly and rotated them behind her causing her to wince in pain ... "AAAhhh !.. asad just leave me !" " DON"T YOU UNDERSTAND I SAID YOU WON"T COOK TODAY ..." he yelled at her and withing no time a pool of tears bursted out of her eyes ...


Seeing this asad left her hand and she turned to leave while he caught hold of her and she collided with him again . "Zoya please I AM SORRY ... can't everything be like our previous time ... can't you forget those 3 days of our life ?..."he said while nuzzling in the area above her ear and below her hair " how can I ? ... this was the best phase of my so called meaningless life Asad .. i got to know that i am with a person who don't love me ...who doesn't even care i die or i live ..."

"Zoya I do care ..." yelled Asad " no you Don't !" ... retorted Zoya . "I do care because I LOVE YOU damn it !!! " this caused world to froze for her and Asad just turned her towards him and hugged her after a jiffy she even responded . "I LOVE YOU TOO !..." "huh ?.." came a reply from asad " then why were you so uncomfortable when i touched you Zoya ?..." " i wasn't ...i was just angry that you didn't care about me ..." she said while crying and he shhhed her while wipping of the tears with his thumb .


He stared her with intensity and took her into a long kiss that was filled with passion , love , care , possessiveness and contentment . After breaking off he said to Zoya . " I am sorry for not trusting you ..." " you should be mr. khan !" "and you too ... for almost giving me a heart attack .. i was about to die ..." but before he could complete she placed her hand on his lips and gestured him in a NO to which he smiled


they stayed in each others embrace for long and cherished their night making love to eachother . This was the best night of their lives !...


THE END <3


okay guyss so this is the crap and yes leave your comments ...

this was my first ever os as i am a ff writer mainly ...

the idea just popped in mah mind while watching mangalpur fiasco so i penned it down

my second Os Kurbaan hua will come later till then enjoy ..

Do read my ffs vishwaas and Ferocity : the war for and against love on ASYA ...

give your feebacks ... 😃😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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in mangalpur ...


in house as i mentioned she is indian so she wears lehenga choli s only (anushka's outfit)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks 😃
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thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for Update.
It was so nice and it was so emotional update😭
Thank you so much for mentioning ASYA=KABHI😊,I JUST LOVE IT and please mention like this.😊
I went back to those memories 😊 and the way Asya (KABHI) converstion was so cute😊
I wish you will write like this type of OS.



(ASAD will be always KSG only,ASYA=KABHI ONLY).
PRIYAKABHI.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.
It was so nice and it was so emotional update😭
Thank you so much for mentioning ASYA=KABHI😊,I JUST LOVE IT and please mention like this.😊
I went back to those memories 😊 and the way Asya (KABHI) converstion was so cute😊
I wish you will write like this type of OS.



(ASAD will be always KSG only,ASYA=KABHI ONLY).
PRIYAKABHI.


thanks but to tel you i am not a sweet writer type of a person i love tragic stories so i ri8 them
but dont worry to please you guyss i'll keep writing these kinda things ... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was nice for a first attempt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey that was very nice os
If it was ur first
Then i m glad that u have a wonderful writing skills..
It was u know a , cant find a word for it
Well it was just a PERFECT os..
N the dress selections of urs r always perfect
Seriously loved d anushka one dress alot
I was just imagining
It was seriously a rocking os
Loved d care n concern of asad for zoya
Omg she cried so much
Lovd how asad tried to stop her blood
Giving her medicine
Dressing her
Not allowing to cook
Really superb
N wow new idea
Confession in kitchen
🤣
Lovd each n every core of it
Lovd it to d corest
REally superb
Write more plz
N pm me

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