Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamwinner

He is parched so is she ,hope this rain bring some relief

to both of them


Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Just read the last 5 Drabble's together, simply superb.


Each Drabble is written to perfection and so beautifully and exceptionally well,

Both Rudra and Paro's emotions, anguish, feelings and pain is written and expressed brilliantly,

Amazing and fantastic writing,

Hope they get reunited very soon,

Eagerly waiting to read more xx


Originally posted by: Suni

What can I say now? Beautiful, just beautiful! Hope the rain protects him and brings him back to her very soon.


Originally posted by: shree10

another beautiful drabble .. ttsa..

The rain in the drabble washed my despair too.. and I am hopeful now.. abt major coming back.. how soon depends on you..


Originally posted by: SS88

This is beautiful <3


Thank you so much! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaS

This is beautiful ... just caught up with all the drabbles. Keep them coming!




Originally posted by: rithureuben

Beautiful! Wonderfully written


Originally posted by: Hunnybunny3

Another fabulous drabble. Really look forward to reading these- beautifully written.

P.S Thanks for clearing up the 'dhal query'.



Thank you so very much. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

I check the forum randomly to see if I can spot something good and I found your drabbles. Such poignance...


And that song - Manmarziyan - i love it!!

Thank you for posting it and the words that come from your pen. I have a happy start to my day

Cheers



Originally posted by: Exprimere

I have been a silent reader for quite some time. These "drabbles" are so wholesome that I keep wishing they'd be longer. I almost feel inspired to write a missing moments fiction series side by side. These are so very inspiring!


My eye on you!😃



Originally posted by: Exprimere


Speaking of race horse winners, I'm studying Lawrence's "The Rocking Horse Winner" right now. Except that I'm not studying it, I'm re reading your too-short-but-spellbinding drabbles.


Haha! Thank you, ladies! I am so flattered, you have no idea. I don't think there is any greater compliment than being re-read or being told that I've added some joy to someone's morning. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Exprimere


Let's put a rest to gender wars at the moment. Speaking of tattling, I'll let her (the profile info) show her true colours. Meanwhile, let us get a place on Baker street and start investigating Yetis (okay... snowmen), moustaches and secrets of the sexy-kamariya-that-induces-body-image-issues.

And tattle_tale, be very worried. That's two of us already checking out your profile. 😆


Teehee.

I can certainly confirm the bit about being female. Now how much of a lady I am, I'm not very sure. 😆 I can also promise that I am not a BSD officer or a sexy kamariya (or a yeti?)

As for Baker Street, I'd be mightily offended if I weren't offered a spot. I promise you, my investigative skills are significant.
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Posted: 11 years ago

On His Blindness


The damp night air flitting in through the tiny window of his room ruffled its fingers through his hair and teased him with the scent of first rain and wet earth. Rudra inhaled deeply. He always preferred the aftermath of the storm to the storm itself. No matter what destruction the storm may have wrought-- it was only ever followed by a brand new day.

Perhaps part of the reason he embraced the brief period of complete stillness and peace so hungrily was that he knew how fleeting and elusive it was. It couldn't be called up on a whim like a hot cup of tea.

He rubbed a hand gingerly over the thick growth over his jaw. A cup of tea would have been nice. A glass of rum would have been even nicer.

With a sudden flash of wry amusement, he remembered how much she despised his occasional drink. The night of their rushed wedding, he had desperately needed the alcohol to sooth his temper and his frayed nerves. He'd caught her staring in disbelief at him. And just to rile her up, he'd offered her a sip. She had recoiled in physical horror and rushed to the other side of the room on the pretext of unpacking her trunk, murmuring under her breath about alcoholics and her terrible luck.

Women were the strangest creatures. Parvati certainly was.

She'd been forced into a relationship she had not wanted. And all she had expressed displeasure about was his drinking habit.

He had known the moment Sunaina had given her official statement and the BSD's medical team had confirmed her account of assault and torture, that Parvati hadn't a clue about the probable fate that had been waiting for her.

Nonetheless, he had waited for his men undercover in Birpur, to confirm Sunaina's story-- confirm that the brides genuinely did not know about the sham that the weddings were.

While Parvati had been absolved of all guilt, Tejawat had still been a threat to her. And so she had continued to stay at the Haveli. What he hadn't anticipated were the threats that existed much closer home.

A nasty shadow had emerged.

A young woman had been living with him in not just the same house, but also the same room for a brief period, without a mangalsutra for far too long.

He'd watched in increasing disconcertment, how the grudging respect she had commanded earlier dwindled and disappeared, only to be replaced by averted gazes and suggestive statements.

The day he'd caught his own cousin making a pass at her, he'd seen red. And it was while nursing a black eye that Sumer had spat out that Parvati was fair game, considering Rudra didn't really intend to marry her.

He had known then that he had to finish what he had started.

Now, months after, he still wasn't sure which would have been a greater favour to her-- marrying her, or sending her miles away from him.


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Posted: 11 years ago
My first thought: Milton!
I like how Paro is very much a part of the story, alive and kicking, even when she's not in it.

Cool update!
Edited by Exprimere - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ah.. A new drabble with morning cup of tea!
Now if only there were enough drabbles in a day to go with all the cups I drown in a day!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Another morning, another beautiful snippet. I think I almost saw Rudra offering her the alcohol and Parvati recoiling and the muttering about fate. Indeed they are all funny creatures

I am so going to get used to mornings with such beauty!

A part of me now never wants to watch Rangrasiya - Indian TV can hardly match up to this?
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Posted: 11 years ago
They also serve who only stand and wait." Milton (On his Blindness) summarizes the whole whole drabble, na?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Exprimere

My first thought: Milton!
I like how Paro is very much a part of the story, alive and kicking, even when she's not in it.

Cool update!


Originally posted by: shree10

Ah.. A new drabble with morning cup of tea!
Now if only there were enough drabbles in a day to go with all the cups I drown in a day!




Originally posted by: meera30

Another morning, another beautiful snippet. I think I almost saw Rudra offering her the alcohol and Parvati recoiling and the muttering about fate. Indeed they are all funny creatures


I am so going to get used to mornings with such beauty!

A part of me now never wants to watch Rangrasiya - Indian TV can hardly match up to this?


Thank you all so much! 😊

@meera30-- so you don't have trouble figuring out the story without watching the show? I write on the assumption that everyone knows the background!

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