AkDha OS: Beintehaa Mohabbat

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BEINTEHAA MOHABBAT PART-1
In Open Area:
Jalal's hands were tied up and a soldier was approaching with a belt like thing. Jodha was shocked to the core that Jalal said not to give away his identity and gave his kasam. Jodha was in tears when the belt hit Jalal's body. After atleast 15mins Jalal's body was bleeding a little and his jama was stained in small quantities of blood. Jodha was crying and hiding her face with her chunni. Just then she heard the belt crashing against Jalal's body and looked at Jalal who didnt say 'ahh' or 'uff' till now. Again that belt went in the air and hit Jalal.
Jodha (screamed): SHEHENSHAH!!
She ran towards Jalal and hugged him tightly, breaking down in his arms which he released by a jerk and embraced her, seeing her cry.
Chief Soldier: Kya?! Shehenshah! Kaha?
Faruq (the soldier who beats Jalal [fake name]): Aae Kajri kaha hai Shehenshah?
Jodha breaking the hug: Yeh hai Shehenshah.
With that Jodha opens the fake beard and the turban shocking the sipahis standing there.
Faruq: Anwar Sahab(chief soldier [fake name]) yeh toh...yeh toh Shehenshah hai!
Anwar & Faruq in union: Adaab Shehenshah!
Jalal: Taqliya!
Soldiers leave.

Jalal turns towards Jodha and says: Kyun thoda apna humara dia kasam Jodha Begum? Kyun sacchai batadi? Kyun? Kyun hume chot lagi par dard apko hua? Kyun padhta hai apko itna farq?
Jodha shouting and going on her knees crying:
KYUNKI HUM APSE BEHAD PREM KARTE HAI SHEHENSHAH!! APKO CHOT POHOUCHTA NAHI DEKH SAKTE! ISSILIYE HUMNE APKI DI HUI KASAM THOD KYUNKI HUM APSE PREM KARTE HAI!!
Jalal smiling: HUM BHI APSE BEINTEHAA MOHABBAT KARTE JODHA BEGUM!!
Jodha closed her eyes thinking it was a dream when she felt being embraced by Jalal.

Jodha's eyes shot open and see Jalal kneelt in front of her and hugging her as to console that he was fine. Jodha hugged him back tightly.
Jalal: Jodha Begum hum theek hai. Hume kuch nahi hua.
Jodha breaking the hug: Kuch nahi hua? Huh? Dikhraha hai hume kitni chotte aayi hai apko.
Jalal: Kaha? Ab toh khun bhi behna baandh hogaya aur dard bhi nahi horaha.
Jodha: Apko jitna pera pohcha hai usse zyada toh hume pohchi hai ke apne kuch kia hi nahi.
Jalal pulling Jodha and himself on their feet: Par yeh humare liye sabse pyaar bhara dard tha kyunki issiki vajah se apne apna mohabbat ka izhaar kia hai.
AkDha smiles.
Jalal slowly leans towards her and lands his lips on her soft pink ones. Jodha snaked her hands around his neck while his hands were around her bare waist, pulling her towards him and making their bodies crash with each other.

And thats how Ruqaiya found them when she reached there and was told by the Faruq that Shehenshah was in the open area behind the jail wala fort.
Ruqaiya muttering: Humne Jalal ko kho dia. Par akhirkar Jodha Begum unhe khush toh rakhengi. Agar muqaddar mein sab keliye yehi likha hai toh hum aap dono ke bich mein nahi ayenge. Ab Jalal apke huye Jodha Begum aur aap Jalal ki.
With this Ruqaiya left the love birds alone and instructed the soldiers to release the other soldiers and baandhis who were disguised and said no one should know that Shehenshah and Jodha Begum are going somewhere disguised.


THE END


This was a small attempt to write on current track. Please excuse errors as i didnt go through it after writting it down.
Edited by ...Arshaya... - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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*unres*
wow... Wow... Wow...
It was such a beautiful OS.
Loved it a lot.
Finally,the lovebirds confessed their feelings...
Aww...
Loved the AkDha romance in the ending.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os 👏👏
Plz continue
Edited by SUMESHNI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aweee 😛😛 It was a marvelous and full of romance wala update my besan ka laadu 🤗🤗 The confession of Akdha was just 😳❤️ It was extremly sweet , romantic and lovely my sooji halwa 😛😛😳 Ruku didn't react in the way we thought she would react seeing Akdha so close 😃😃 It was a relieving and pleasing surprise darling 😆😊😳 Words are less to praise your sweet update 😳⭐️👏 Love you sweetu ^-^ *-* Update soon and pm me sweety honey 😛😳🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ab update b kar do..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mashallah !!!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
Kya likha hai.. Kaash aisa hota.. I would have this scene...😳
Lekin isme to ruqs achi nikli.. lol.. I cant digest har achapana even in an OS..THAT much I am pissed off wid her..😆
Wonderful writeup !!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

[STRONG]Mashallah !!!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️Kya likha hai.. Kaash aisa hota.. I would have this scene...😳 Lekin isme to ruqs achi nikli.. lol.. I cant digest har achapana even in an OS..THAT much I am pissed off wid her..😆Wonderful writeup !!!👏

Thnx nancy. Voh kya haina i hate ruqs but love lavina issiliye yaha accha banadiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Darling this was such a lovely OS ... 👏
Thanks for the pm I didn't even realise that you had wrote this ... 😔
Honestly I would have regreted not reading this if you didn't pm me ...
Thank you so so much dear ...🤗

Now for the story , wow this was really awesome ...
I loved how Jodha shouted Shahenshah and hugged him ...
Then the declaration of their love and and the end where they both kissed and Ruku came in ...
I thought that Ruku will be super angry but she wasn't and I'm really happy bout it ...
I really love this Ruku , she's not selfish ...
Keep up the good work darling and plz pm me your works or I might miss out on it like I almost miss out on this piece of work ...
Edited by VincyAnne - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful... no other words to describe it :)
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Darling this was such a lovely OS ... 👏 Thanks for the pm I didn't even realise that you had wrote this ... 😔 Honestly I would have regreted not reading this if you didn't pm me ... ]Thank you so so much dear ...🤗
Now for the story , wow this was really awesome ...]I loved how Jodha shouted Shahenshah and hugged him ...Then the declaration of their love and and the end where they both kissed and Ruku came in ... I thought that Ruku will be super angry but she wasn't and I'm really happy bout it ...I really love this Ruku , she's not selfish ... <img src="http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/good-job-onion-head-emoticon.gif" alt="" />Keep up the good work darling and plz pm me your works or I might miss out on it like I almost miss out on this piece of work ...

Di first of all thnx alot for the appreciation. Now dont think main apko apna work miss karne ka mauka dungi. I'll send u a thousand pms if i dont get ur review! Anyways thnx alot!!

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