Har Saas Main Har Dhadkan Main Ho Tum: SwaRon OS - Page 22

Originally posted by: vsahil

😊 nice guys

and

im sahil

new in if

Originally posted by: Anjori_ArSha

amazing OS !

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

i know i m super late to comment😆

amazing update

loved the swaron conversation and romance

Originally posted by: vsahil

nice ! 👏

I am really sorry ishu for the late reply but I was a little stuck in work

anyways coming to the OS

Brilliant work guys

I loved the first part and the way you described their feelings and desperation to be with each other without any boundary was really nice.

Swayam giving his shirt to sharon was so swayam and the way sharon clutched the shirt as if hugging him also nicely penned.

The second part started of really nicely with sharon cuddling swayam's shirt in an useless effort to feel him around him.Then her going to swayam hust to see him in pretence of returning his shirt was good.The swimming ppol part was well unexpected and wild.Sharon's thoughts were ahem ahem I think you get what I mean
I so knew the whole *wild* part would be a dream well it was a good one😉

Loved how sharon finally decided to come out of her ego bubble and decided to mend her relationship.Loved the Asthama part too as it was justified there and swayam calming her down was nice.It had the Swaron ness to it and I liked it.

Brilliant work guys do write more

P.S the title and banner are both really cool

-- Harshita ( cenation123 )

Originally posted by: swasi

lovely os😊 loved every line of it😊 very well written👏 aise hi sweet sweet os hamesa dete rehna😊😊

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

wonderful os...loved it!