Ariya Drabble (small OS) ~ A Broken Hope-(update Part 2 ~PG 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb yar...
Poignantly beautiful. ... very well written. ...
Loved it..
And for me well I can never n will never get over ariya.. they rock and will always hold a special place in my heart...that's the magic of ariya...
glad to hear you got your muse back to write...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a beautifully written Drabble!
Even though it was a mere 100 to 300 words I was in tears by the end!
It was really emotional! I don't know how to describe this feeling but..everytime
I read something like this it just makes me want to back in the past and freeze the time
so that I keep living in that moment of Ariya!

Great job Mehr!!!!
Fantabulous!!!! This was pure perfection! 😃👏
Thanks for the pm and continue writing like this!
u r one of the awesome writers in this forums!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very good one
made me cry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotional one
Me too sad when me remember that epi


Wonderful work

Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Same here dear.
It is very emotional os dear.
I always miss ariya.
And hope one day all etf team and ariya came in the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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owww this was sad,

you should continue writing on ARIYA
its a pleasure toi read about them...

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was beautiful yet a sad os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: binishana

😭 😭 😭


sorry for making you cry lol 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another drabble...I am once again in that sad phase. 😡



Part 2

Darkness surrounded him yet again and he was once again powerless against his own loathsome shadows. Memories were turning into bitter fragments of pain that just refused to fade. Against his will, even the happy memories were starting to become tainted, reminding him that happiness was not for broken people like him. Invisible scars were scarring him permanently and each memory was like a new slash that was being undyingly etched on his already damaged soul. Days were becoming a never-ending torture and nights were a constant and astringent reminder of his losses and helplessness. The echoes of his past were reminding him that life and death have never been and would never be in his control. He could never race against time and neither against death. As he let the tears rolled down, he could only allow losing himself in his own anguish and ache, with the bleak darkness as company. They were all being snatched away from him, one by one, and he could only watch powerlessly. He constantly wondered why he kept losing the ones he cared, loved and tried to protect but there was no one to answer him. After all, shadows never answered, they just reminded him of his torture every day, every minute and nearly every second... The pain and anguish made it difficult to breathe sometimes and in his weakest moments, he sometimes hoped that death will become his deliverance. Like a warped symphony, his darkness keeps reminding him that it is always life that gives pain and not death. As he closed his eyes, the remnants of broken and incomplete relationships haunted him, torturing him and trying to break him further. But he was not weak, damaged yes, but never weak. Darkness and shadows were indeed his sole company but he would never let them control him. They could surround him, torment him in every possible way but would never be allowed to be in command of him. In a twisted way, his constant escape is his thirst for revenge that keeps pushing him not to surrender... to him revenge is a debt; ultimately it has to be repaid. Reminiscent of a slight but lingering hope, every time his darkness tried to overpower him, they were there to rescue him ... as his only salvation... in the form of their faith and love for him.



Please do like and review. Thank you 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update
Thank you for pm

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