Ariya Drabble (small OS) ~ A Broken Hope-(update Part 2 ~PG 4) - Page 4

nice update

Originally posted by: Mehr03

<font size="3">Another drabble...I am once again in that sad phase.😡</font>

<font size="3">Part 2</font>

<font size="3">Darkness surrounded him yet again and he was once again
powerless against his own loathsome shadows.
Memories were turning into bitter fragments of pain that just refused to
fade. Against his will, even the happy
memories were starting to become tainted, reminding him that happiness was not
for broken people like him. Invisible
scars were scarring him permanently and each memory was like a new slash that was
being undyingly etched on his already damaged soul. Days were becoming a never-ending torture and
nights were a constant and astringent reminder of his losses and
helplessness. The echoes of his past
were reminding him that life and death have never been and would never be in
his control. He could never race against
time and neither against death. As he
let the tears rolled down, he could only allow losing himself in his own
anguish and ache, with the bleak darkness as company. They were all being snatched away from him,
one by one, and he could only watch powerlessly. He constantly wondered why he kept losing the
ones he cared, loved and tried to protect but there was no one to answer
him. After all, shadows never answered,
they just reminded him of his torture every day, every minute and nearly every
second... The pain and anguish made it
difficult to breathe sometimes and in his weakest moments, he sometimes hoped that
death will become his deliverance. Like
a warped symphony, his darkness keeps reminding him that it is always life that
gives pain and not death. As he closed his eyes, the remnants of broken
and incomplete relationships haunted him, torturing him and trying to break him
further. But he was not weak, damaged
yes, but never weak. Darkness and
shadows were indeed his sole company but he would never let them control him. They could surround him, torment him in every
possible way but would never be allowed to be in command of him. In a twisted way, his constant escape is his
thirst for revenge that keeps pushing him not to surrender... to him revenge is a
debt; ultimately it has to be repaid. Reminiscent ofa slight but lingering hope, every time his darkness tried to overpower him,
they were there to rescue him ... as his only salvation... in the form of their faith
and love for him.</font>

<font size="3">Please do like and review. Thank you</font>😊

OK why I didn't get this update pm?? 😕 did I tell u something about not sending pm? Or my inbox was full?

Of course its good like other stories u write. Can u write arni drabble? Romantic one?

Update soon and keep it up

Superb yar...

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

OK why I didn't get this update pm?? 😕 did I tell u something about not sending pm? Or my inbox was full?

Of course its good like other stories u write. Can u write arni drabble? Romantic one?

Update soon and keep it up

awesome & emotional os

That was brilliantly written dear...yes you succeeded on your "Mission Rulao"...

Originally posted by: Meself

You know what; the truth is I am a sucker for angst. To me they ring a better emotional stretch than the happily ever afters. I really like it! A true blue insight to the hollow man we all feel for! Beautifully penned down!

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

That was brilliantly written dear...yes you succeeded on your "Mission Rulao"...

His scattred soul was in front of us and you made us fell his pain...

Do write more...

thanks for PM.