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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon: one more chance, one last chance, I promise...
Swayam(interrupts her):nahi Sharon aur nahi...this time I am breaking up with you...
Sharon:no..no tum aisa...nahi
Swayam:nahi kar sakta...tumne poore college ke samne mujhe deny kiya...b main ek desperate looser ban chuka hoon sabke samne...
Sharon:aisa nahi hai...main sabko bataungi...
Swayam:please Sharon aur ehsaan mat karo...agar ho gaya hai toh leave...

Next Day...
Sharon and Swayam in that classroom...
Sharon:...tum kissi aur ke saath move on karoge???
Swayam:kyu nahi...of course karunga...agar milegi koi aisi ladki toh khud ko chance dunga...
Sharon:Sw..Swayam...
Swayam leaves Sharon in the classroom
Sharon:aisa nahi ho sakta..Swayam sirf Sharon ka hai...Rey...mujhe Rey se baat karni hogi...
Sharon goes to Rey...
Sharon:but Rey I know...woh meri galti thi...please help karo...
Rey:Sharon yeh mess tumne create kiya hai...tumhe solve karni hogi..I can't help...
Sharon:Rey..Rey please listen baat suno Rey...
Rey:please Sharon this time tumne sirf apna boyfriend nahi apni best friend bhi khoya hai...and i really hope tum jaldi yeh issue solve kar lo...
rey leaves. sharon is all crying...
Sharon:no Sharon Rai Prakash...it's your turn ...you can't let the two best men of your life leave like this. Main Rey aur swayam ko dono ko wapas win kar ke rahungi...




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saggitarius687 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please tell me if i should continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start ... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Canteen. Sharon feels lost. The entire gang is there barring Rey and Swayam.
Vicky:Mahn...!!! kal project submission hai...and I've not yet begun with it...Neha hoti toh ab tak project khatam ho chuka hota...woh khud ki bhi karti aur meri bhi...I misas Neha yaar
Nil:kal 15th jan hai kya?
Bharat:abbe tu kaunse nakshatre se aaya hai??? kal project submit karna hai toh kal pandra tarikh hi hoga na?
Simmi:guys 15th jan...project ke chakkar mein hum bhool hi gaye kal kya hai...
Amar:kya hai kal?
Bharat(scratches his head):kya hai???
Sharon:Rey ka birthday...
Aashi:kal Rey ka birthday hai?
Vicky:tumhe nahi pata???
Aashi:nahi pata tha...
They raise their hands and "CHEMISTRYYY"
Simmi:so what's the plan?
Sharon:(to herself...yea this is the chance). Surprise...surprise birthday party...
Rini:great yaa...chalo plan karte hai...
Just then Rey and Swayam enter and they behave as if Sharon does not exist...
Rey:guys rehearsels at 5pm sharp...
Sharon:no I mean...aaj mujhe kaam hai main aa nahi paungi...
Rey:cool then humlog hi karenge you join us from tomorrow...
Sharon feels dejected.
Simmi:nahi mujhe bhi kaam hai...kal se rehearsel karte hai na...
Rey:kya yaar tum log bhi...okay kal pakka...
Sharon excuses herself and leaves...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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her friends did not let them know about this thing that they are plan for a surprise...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon..
luving this!!!
Happy u strted a SwaRon FF~!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon..
luving this!!!
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon texts the gang..."Rehearsal Hall in 5 minutes"
Rehearsal Hall...The gang is there...
Sharon:hey guys Rey ke liye surprise best hoga dance performance...hum ek group performance karenge aur main aur Swayam ek duet...what say?
Simmi:hmm sounds good...
Swayam:nahi...I mean we can put up two group performances if need be...but duet..uh huh...not a good idea...
Sharon:but...
Swayam:chalo chalo...group performance ke liye song select karte hai...
Sharon reluctantly agrees...
Swayam gets a call...
Swayam:I'll just be back (and he excuses himself)
Sharon:yeh Swayam ko kisska call aya...
Sharon follows...
Swayam:woaah...aaj raat ko you'll be here...ohh ohkay surprise ha...hum bhi usske liye surprise plan kar rahe hai...ha ha nahi bataunga...yea chalo bbye...
Swayam turns around to find Sharon standing. he completely ignores her and move towards the rehearsal hall..
Sharon:wait Swayam...who was it?
Swayam:that's none of your business...
Sharon:of course it is...hum ek relationship mein ...
Swayam:nahi hai...I have broken up with you...
Swayam leaves...
Sharon(to herself):pata toh laga ke rahungi at any cost...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Swayam so rude with Sharon...
But Sharon not loosing hopes.

Continue soon.but with a LONG chapter plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They come back to the Rehearsal Hal.
Sharon:So guys Rey ko bahar le jaane kam mera aur Swayam ka...and Simmi tum baaki manage kar logi na?
Simmi:yeah of course.
Swayam:uh huh ...wait...I think it will be better agar Rey ko bahar hum boys le jaaye...what say?
Sharon:yeah okay...(reluctantly agrees)
Swayam:so it's done...chalo then...
The team leaves. Sharon follows Swayam.
Sharon:tum yeh sab kyu kar rahe ho...Why Swayam why?
Swayam:kya?
Sharon:Don't pretend...tum mujhe jaan bujh ke ignore kyu kar rahe ho?
Swayam:yahi toh tum chahti thi..team ko pata nahi chalein ki hum saath hai, kal poore college ke saamne tumne hi deny kiya tha na?
Sharon:ha kiya tha...tab main confused thi...
Swayam:ab toh sure ho na?
Sharon:Dekho we can talk about it.
Swayam:no we can't it's all over...OVER
Sharon stands there rooted to the ground and Swayam leaves.


It's evening. Everything is working as planned.The girls are busy decorating Rey's house. Sharon is lost.
Simmi:Sharon, you okay?
Sharon:yeah am fine.
Simmi:dekh ke lag nahi raha hai...baat kya hai?
Sharon:kuch nahi nothing.
Simmi:dekho Sharon tum batana nahi chahti toh I won't force you. It's okay...
Simmi is about to leave. sharon stops by holding her wrist.
Sharon:main sab bataungi. Rey ke party ke baad.
Simmi:okay Cool


Scene shift. Rey is all confused
Rey:arre batao toh bahar kyu laaye ho mujhe? pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Vicky:arre rey bahar climate kitna acha hai na...
Rey:climate ya weather???
Nil:ha wahi weather...weather...yaha hum poetry likhenge...
Rey:what poetry? hum poet nahi hai dancers hai...
Amar:haa aad toh mele andal kavi daag gaya hai...
Rey and Swayam is all confused.
Nil:he means...humare andar kaavi jaag gaya hai...
Vicky:abbe yeh kavi kaun hai...soya hua tha kya...jaag gaya?
Swayam:poet..kavi...kavi...poet...
Vicky:ooo...
Swayam:Vicky sun na sunn..
Swayam and Vicky moves away from rest of them...
Swayam:kya kar rahe ho tum log...ittna overacting mat karo...Rey ko sab pata chal jayega...thoda dheere...ittna obvious nahi...
Swayam gets a call and he excuses himself...


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