Satyanashing: Where Art Thou Paro?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes, this is a question for the writers of the show!!

Last Friday gave a refreshing glimpse of Paro's steely resolve behind the timid exterior. While Rudra mocked her voluntary return back to his house as defeat, she opposed it as a sign of courage. Paro stood tall in front of Rudra - broken but not beaten, pledging that there will be a day when Rudra will ask for her forgiveness for his actions and injustice mete out to her...all done without raising the decibel level. It was a well executed/enacted scene and will be one the HOF moments in Paro's journey.⭐️⭐️

How did such promising start to the Paro-Rudra journey fizzle out this week? Her presence was revealed to the household, Chachi and Sumer were extremely caustic in their accusations. She suddenly became the "jhallads" fiancee for his family. Situation spiraled out of control and one naturally hoped to see the simmering anger from her side for being shoved into a vortex for no fault of hers.

Paro has always been respectful towards Dilsher so her further questioning Disher was not expected. Shouldn't all the commotion rip open the band aid on the temporary truce ? Should it not have re-ignited the displeasure, angst towards Rudra the first chance they were alone? She is still hurting because of the emotional wounds and now more upheaval in her life all because of Rudra. Where is the Paro whose fiesty words about life robbed stopped Rudra in his tracks?

Yes, there were good stand alone moments interspersed during the week but the continuity was amiss. Writing and execution from Paro's POV this week was underwhelming after the glimpse of a scared but resolute Paro last Friday. Maybe she will come back again next week.. but consistency particularly in Paro's etch in the intial weeks is not too muck to ask, is it?



How do we go from such a delectable face off to poetry in 5 days?😕

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great post as always, Savs!⭐️ ...was nodding my head right through😃
The transformation from sworn antagonists to comfortable, if snarky, companions, was way too swift. I have been face palming at the Rasiya ve's since last week, but they have just increased , both in frequency and intensity I don't understand what the hurry is...slow and steady build up should be the name of the game.
They have to show Paro's thought processes...and come to think of it, even Rudr's thoughts. Simple things like thinking of her Mamisa when touching her rudraksh, remembering her heartfelt thanks to Shivji after her engagement...small fleeting flashbacks will go a long way in filling this vacuum.
It is just poor, sloppy writing. They have such powerhouses of talent in their leads, all that is missing is a good screenplay.
Edited by Vistaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anger, angst, hate.. all blew away with hawa ka jonka (and song apparently).. I hear it is onwards to the land of domesticity now!

Jai jagdambe trishula!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I absolutely loved today's episode 😆 but do agree with you, they need to show more of what she is feeling, like revenge whys I'm saying. She has vowed to make him feel guilty and ask for forgiveness a bit more on that thought process will do. But I guess that's just paro, builds up courage and at times brave but not like other tv soap heroines, she's making baby steps.
Edited by Jaz1990 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Like Visi said ...every sentence had me nodding my head in full agreement.
Savs... much needed post, thanks!

So, whats the urgency CV's...though we appreciate that the story "seems" to be moving(in a good circle) and has kept us all intrigued enough to tune in every day, we also are extremely disappointed in the bipolar disorder of the leads.

Both seem to have forgotten the core issue at hand...

Paro has come back to the "Captor" to challenge him and seek some form of justice for all the unfortunate events that took place.
Rudra has kept her "Captive" to coerce the "truth" out of Paro.

The objective at this very minute is not to be doing seva 😡to each other in any form or manner... so Paro stop making rotis and Rudra stop massaging the sprained ankles...

Also CV's : Whats the urgency to get them to romance with Javed saab lyrics so soon in the game ... Ab next two years aap MoChi MASALON ka infomercial dikhayenge kya 😡


Special request to Background music dept...Keep calm, importantly practice calm.
Edited by howcome - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res. aate hain - once kaam ka bojh wraps up. And iPhone - i know Hindi better than you. So stop with the freaking auto correct already. 😡

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Take 5 ka mausam is bigaad. So truncated version wonly today - TGIF! 🥳

1. Chachi Sa didn't need a knife to cut that rope - she coulda just used her tongue and teeth. Heck - she could've just breathed on it from a distance, and it would have burned to a crisp. 😉

2. The bahu's name isn't actually Beendhni, its Maithili?? 😲 And here I thought she had such a pretty and unusual name

3. Bee...sorry Maithili actually speaks! 👏 And she's been living in this hellhole for 5 years? 😲 That's 35 dog years - longer than Nelson Mandela in apartheid prison. Nobel Committee - are you listening?

4. Bitiya doesn't sleep. She slips into a coma, from which no amount of manhandling can awaken her.

5. Take away the fluttering hair, Lata's humming, and the poetry,and all bitwa did was stick a hot water bottle under bitiya's foot, while actually unwrapping the binding that might actually have healed her? 😉
Edited by -Jamba- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post.
Somethings are good but somethings are missing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vishwasney samachar ke anusar "reshmi zulfen aur sharbati ankhon mein" kho gayi 😊
Phaimily kaality time mein vyasth hain aate hain thodi der mein.

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Petition Sa to Dekhna hai tho dekho Sa ( I know I know he is one of the many magicians creating this psychological magic but kya hai na DHTD Sa and hum we go long back hence petition Sa in his name) :

Agree that we are suckers for intense love stories and uncuts, have embraced perpendicular passouts/biz tycoon walking around with gauze in pocket/ questinable CPR techniques etc etc with open arms BUT please,

1. If you must have a bike scene atleast give them helmets from this century ( I get the vintage charm but) which cover the face too that way your wonly witness's identity is protected plus in the unfortunate incidence of road, tamatar etc etc you be protected.

2. We get the dude's concern for witness safety and need to check every thing she eats and drinks but if you must show bitiya drinking from the same glass as bitwa please to not put TWO glasses on the table.

3.Please let Rudy's mushyness slowly creep on us dont just OD us with it. You cant just go on for three weeks that bitwa's mantra is "beautiful women are BAD", "no strings attached hook up is my game", "I breathe patriotism" and suddenly go all soft on a beautiful women who he thinks is a "potential terrorist/accomplice".

4. If you must have to do 3 please please continue with your "aaa aaa aaa..." BG lady but NOT I repeat NOT Javed Saab's profound poetry about love, reminiscing old times etc because that JUST DOESNT CUT IT!

5. No comments on Paro Baisa cos Savs said it all!

Sorry saheliyon just watched epi in a hurry so snark fell a little short!!
Edited by DrShuenmial - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I initially thought I was the only one feeling like this, but after reading your post I feel better. The story has moved no where since last Friday and the sudden comfort between the leads seems to have spun out of thin air. I expected Paro to be indifferent yet, she seems to have settled into this role of being the jhallads " mangetar " ? The character development is missing big time.

The writing has many loopholes and so early on in the story already.

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Agree wat u r saying... There are so many loop holes in the screenplay.. I am not at all convinced from paro's point of view.. How she seems so cool all this time...

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